Tokio Sena

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Tokio Sena

BIOGRAPHY


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NAME: Tokio Sena
AGE: 28
SPECIES: Human

FACTION: Jedi
RANK: Jedi Knight

HEIGHT: 1.83 Meters
WEIGHT: 215 lb
HAIR COLOR:
Black
THEME: h

STRENGTH:
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DEXTERITY:
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STAMINA:
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INTELLIGENCE:
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WISDOM:
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CHARISMA:
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Tokio Sena, named after his father, was born on a planet long forgotten to him. He has no recollection of his early life, not his parents, not his home. He didn't even know if he had siblings. When he would ask about his home world and family when he was older nobody would ever give him a straight response.

His earliest and fondest memories were those of him being a Padawan at the Jedi temple on Dantooine. He could trust his other trainees with his life, and they the same with him. The fondest memory he has was when he crafted his first lightsaber. He and Yin, a close friend of Tokio, had just boarded The Crucible, a cruiser across the sacred temple on Illum. They would have to complete a rite of passage to finally create their lightsabers, a dream of Tokios. The hum of the blade soothed him, the vibrant colors a blade emitted were fantastical to him.

They got off of the crucible to the cave where the mythical Kyber Crystals are held, and began their search. He was drawn to a very specific strain of kyberite, and heard its song. A beautiful orchestra that harmonically resonated with him. He felt calm, and grinned. He immediately showed it to his master. "Look what I've found!" Tokio exclaimed. And immediately began to craft the hilt once they got back to the temple.

Months and months of preparation went into crafting the whole blade. His hilt was brilliant, and perfectly encapsulates his personality, sam thing with his lightsaber. A beautiful amethyst blade erupted from he top of the handle, and he exclaimed with awe to show his master.

The years following would be difficult for Tokio. His small stature would make it difficult to duel against the more heavy and more balanced fighters, but through his stamina and dexterity, he learned to overcome it and even use it against them.

The hardest thing Tokio would have to overcome would come towards the end of his training, at the age of 19. it was like any normal day, he had woken up, taken a shower, and prepared himself for another day of training, He had walked over to his friend Yins room, and has soon as he opened the door he was walled with dark force energy.

Tokio was in shock as Yin turned around, holding his kyber crystal in his hand. Tokio could hear the melody, and it was horrifying. The sound of a hurricane mixed with the continuous sound of glass hitting the floor. He could hear whispers from it, like ghosts. "Yin... What did you do?"

He grinned, and responded like a hissing snake. "He said it was the last thing I had to do before I complete my training." As the now dark side Jedi had made his crystal bleed, and the harmony eerie.

Tokio was taken back in confusion, but quickly drew his saber, "I can't believe you Yin... You betrayed me and the order. You are not Yin anymore. You are Sith." Tokio used this opportunity to quickly slice Yins right arm off. Yin could not defend himself as the kyber crystal had been removed from the light saber. Shortly after, Yins former Jedi master had been alerted of Yins changing, and felt disappointed. The bloody crystal was seized by the Jedi, and Yin was taken away.

Tokio would grow to be an extremely effective knight and combative mastermind. He would do anything to help the order, and blindly followed their commands to a fault. He loved the thrill of battle, it made him feel alive.


PERSONALITY


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FORCE ABILITIES

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Sense

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Healing

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Energy Manipulation

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Trances

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Status Affects

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Acrobatics

COMBAT SKILLS

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Blasters

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Rifles

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Misc.

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Saber

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H2H

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Daggers

EDUCATION

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Huttese

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Droid Speak

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Wookie

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Tactics

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Politics

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Espionage


Tokios personality can best be described as focussed. He loves taking the role as teacher and imparting his wisdom unto the younger initiates, as he feels as though he can help them achieve their true potential. He could be considered introverted, and loves a good round of meditation.

He is not interested in any sorts of romance. From his experience, it doesn't mold well with trying to become a strong and wise Jedi. He dos hold friendships with Fellow Jedi, Initiates, and anyone else affiliated with the Jedi. Anyone else he talks to h like to keep it strictly business.

He spends most of his time fighting against training droids, Tokio has a very strong desire to be an excellent saber duelist, and will try to get better at it everyday. You'll never see him in a bar, he'd rather stay at home for that. He loves going on combat missions, and even diplomatic ones occasionally.

The thing that is most difficult for him to talk about is his former ally Yin. Ever since the event its almost as though Tokio can't become too close to anyone anymore. Maybe in time that will change, but it was over a decade ago, and who knows how much longer before he can trust again.




LEGACY


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EQUIPMENT
Armor
—Jedi Robes jedi, Counts as MCV MK. IV Light Armour
—Headband

Weapon
—Lightsaber,
amethyst.
DS-23 Gauntlet Blaster. 3 clips, 5 rounds.
 
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Narsi

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Hey there @Atlas Silexia
I was actually looking at this just as you "tagged" me lol
For future reference, Relent is the other Jedi AFL, and to properly tag people just smash the @ symbol followed by the persons name.
Glad to see you making a Jedi, a few (minor) things however
  • BIO: Looks good, but could I ask for a bit more elaboration in the last bit. You go into such wonderful detail about his early life and the time he made his lightsaber but then it just goes POOF awesome Jedi knight. Your char would've (likely) been knighted around 20 or something, what happened in all those years between him crafting his saber and the present? What happened to his close friend Yin? What exactly happened to make him into a combative mastermind and effective knight? Secondly (hugely minor), considering his age, Tolkio might've been in training before the Army of Light was fully mobilized. That would've made him a Padawan at the beginning, as Initiate was a title used for Padawans who were a part of the army of light.
  • Personality: No real issues here, though I am curious as to what makes him unpredictable. I'm not saying he seems PREdictable, but he doesn't really feel unpredictable either. I can get the sense that he's introverted from the rest of the personality, looking at the disinterest and romance and tenseness about his past, but I don't really see unpredictability in him at all.
  • Attributes: I like how you gave him some nice balance, making him strong in some fields but weak in others, good to see. We do however use a different set of categories for the force on the site, as shown in this guide, rather than the ones you are using. It would save a few headaches if you could switch those out. That's all though, like I said, balance, good job.
  • Equipment: I would highly recommend that you choose an armor and (named) blaster from the tech boards, as even if you don't intent to PvP, its still a good "just in case" thing. Modular armor is a common choice for the Jedi and can be found on the Jedi tech page. Don't forget to list your ammo for the blaster either.
And that's it, I'd give it another quick read-through to catch a few minor misspells and such, but otherwise, go ahead and tag me when you've made the changes. CS looks pretty nice too.
 

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Alright, finished making this changes.
What happened to his close friend Yin?
Fixed that up quite a lot. I thought the dynamic of his friend being a Sith trainee in disguise was handy.
but I don't really see unpredictability in him at all.
That's fair. I changed his key personality word to focussed, he doesn't have time for trivial things, and acts as such.
We do however use a different set of categories for the force on the site, as shown in this guide, rather than the ones you are using.
Ok. Changed it up, those force abilities that you had me use are honestly a lot less confusing than the ones I was trying to use so thank you.
I would highly recommend that you choose an armor and (named) blaster from the tech boards
I added a named blaster, completely slipped my mind to add that honestly. But I thought Jedi/Force users weren't allowed to use any sorts of armor to balance PvP/PvE so I just added a visual.

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I added a named blaster, completely slipped my mind to add that honestly. But I thought Jedi/Force users weren't allowed to use any sorts of armor to balance PvP/PvE so I just added a visual.

Force users are allowed to utilize armor as long as the armor is functionless. In other words, it's just armor and nothing more. No HUD, jetpack, wrist blaster, etc.
 

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Oh, that makes sense. I'll make the edits right now. Thank you
 

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My only remaining suggestion would be listing out your ammo for the blaster.
I'm not going to hold up approval for that though, thanks for making the changes so quickly.
Looks good, soooooooo
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