tyler northaln

[tylertbone1]

NAME: Tyler Northaln
FACTION:The Jedi order
RANK:jedi hopeful
SPECIES: Human
AGE: 14
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 5'8
WEIGHT: 120 lbs.
EYES: Blue eyes
HAIR: Blonde hair
SKIN: pale white
CREDITS: 1,000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: none
DOMINATE HAND: left
FORCE SENSITIVE: yes

STRENGTH: average
DESTERITY: above average
CONSTITUTION: average
INTELLIGENCE: average
WISDOM: weak
CHARISMA: way above average

FORCE POWERS:
still hasnt trained them yet

SKILLS:
Good Mechanic


LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
none

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
character is blind in right eye


GEAR:
padawan robes
vibro knife
SHIP:
Does not own ship

PETS:
None

PERSONALITY:
Tyler is a well mannered,soft and caring boy. When in the heat of battle he has the ability to make correct desicions quickly. Because of his charismatic ways he has many friends throughout the galaxy. For the most part he listens to his elders but sometimes his gut tells him to do differently. This has gotten him into trouble several times.

HISTORY:
Tyler was born and raised on the planet of alderaan by only his father who was once a jedi knight for the order. His father became corrupt and left the order. his father seemed to become detatched and one night he tried to kill Tyler. Tyler using his father's only true weakness which was a war wound he had recieved on a mission to the outskirts of alderaan, sweep kicked him knocking him down and escaping into the night, unfortunately his father did sever the optic nerves in his right eye leaving him very much blind, over time he gained a force sense in which his right eye was now given viison thorugh the force. Tyler than took a shuttle and went to the monastary on coruscant where he recieved shelter. He trained in the ways of the force and soon became a Jedi Hopeful vowing one day to find his father and bring him back ot the light.

Tyler then began going on missions across the galaxy and along the way learning more about himself, Including his mechanical ability. In a way he is a lonely boy even with all his friends. He has no one to look up to since his father for a reason not known to him tried to kill him. But he has found in himself the strength to keep going and searches for answers to the question of why did hos father try to kill him......




KILLS:
none

DUELING RING MATCHES:
none

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:
none

ROLE-PLAYS:
none

 

[Lavi]

You get your lightsaber later, for one. Another, you can expand more on your history to make the character seem more legit. Tyler's ex-Jedi father tried killing him, and Tyler somehow survives: how so? Stuff like that.

Also, Dantooine is not a usable planet, according to the Usable Planets List.

 

[tylertbone1]

here

is this enough story and i removed the lgihtsaber, anything else i should change?

 

[Ser Gregor]

Tatooine isn't on the list either.

 

[tylertbone1]

here

am i good now

 

[Lavi]

Tatooine isn't on the list either.

^

 

[tylertbone1]

yeah

thats why i changed it to alderaan

 

[Niner]

You still have the planet Tatooine in your history.
Also, under strengths and weaknesses you have that he is blind in one eye. In the history maybe tell how that happened. As that affected him before? Maybe he learned to use the Force to a certain degree to be able to see?

Last thing, He wouldn't have learned any ligthsaber forms yet.

 

[Lavi]

thats why i changed it to alderaan

Tyler using his father's only true weakness which was a war wound he had recieved on a mission to tatooine, sweep kicked him knocking him down and escaping into the night. Tyler than took a shuttle and went to the monastary on coruscant where he recieved shelter. He trained in the ways of the force and soon became a Jedi Hopeful vowing one day to find his father and bring him back ot the light.

^

 

[tylertbone1]

ok now?

i believe im ok now right?

 

[Lavi]

i believe im ok now right?

No one needs to approve your profile, though it is advised to fix it up according to critiques.

P.S. It's also advised that you use capitalization, punctuation, etc. as well as possible.

 

[tylertbone1]

fair enough

fair enough i think my profile is legit now thx. Now to my first thread....