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NAME: Valter Correl
FACTION: Jedi Order
RANK: Padawan
SPECIES: Umbaran
AGE: 19
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 5'11
WEIGHT: 150 lbs
EYES: A deep scarlet
HAIR: His hair is black, and pulled back into a back length Ponytail
SKIN: A ghostly white
CREDITS: 778
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: A ted tatoo on his farhead
DOMINATE HAND: Left
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes
STRENGTH: Valter is a frail Umbaran, using his wit more than his strength in combat. 5/10
DEXTERITY: While his aim is exceptional, he himself is not the most dexterious person in the world. 6/10
CONSTITUTION: Valter is very frail, and one good kick to the chest could incapacitate him. 4/10
INTELLIGENCE: Valter is incredibly inteligent, taking all of his free time reading and using Jedi Holocrons. 10/10
WISDOM: He is incredibly wise for his age, but he hopes to become wiser as he grows older. 9/10
CHARISMA: Valter is as charasmatic as the most charasmatic human, but his slight empathy and natural umbaran abilities of persuasion make him a dangerous man. 13/10
FORCE POWERS:
SKILLS: Lightsaber combat
He can sense lies, and has a natural persuasion, with the ability to force his will upon the weak minded.
LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS: Makashi
STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES: Valters biggest strength flows from his Charisma, and his ability to solve most situations without resorting to violence. While an excellent diplomat, his biggest strength is directly preportioned to his weakness. Valters physical strength is very lacking, and when the diplomacy fails, Valter used to resort to hiding. He is also incredibly arrogant and full of himself, hoping the ways of the Jedi will fix his character flaws. Pysically, his largest weaknesses are his frailty and vulnerability to bright lights.
GEAR: Like most JedI Padawans, Valter has few possesion. He has Black Regal robes of the Rootai Order, convereted into Jedi robes. He also has a journal he carries around in which he writes down all he does.
SHIP: Valter had an expensive ship from umbara, but he gave it away when he entered the Jedi Order. In for a penny in for a pound.
PETS: None
PERSONALITY: Valter is a kindhearted soul who grew weary of Umbaran politics. He seeks inteligence where he cant get it, and wishes to learn to solve all problems with a steady mind. His inteligence however directly leads to his character flaws. He is cold, calculating, and similar to a computer in his thought process. He will say what needs to be said, even when no one wants to hear it. Valter is sure of his inteligence, and very pridefull about his standing on Umbara
HISTORY: Valter is a young Umbaran with an interesting past. Raised from a young age by a council familiy of the Rootai caste, Valter had a life in which the most vast sources of knowledge on Umbara were open to him.He sought knowledge wherever he could find it, and wanted to make his father proud. As the second eldest son in the family, he knew that it was a high possibility that he would one day reprisent his entire family on the planet. At age sixteen, his vast knowledge was finally seen to be such a strength, that his father ordered Valters older brother, to be killed. This left Valter as the second in command in the family.Days later Valters father, Kunda Correll, was killed by an assasination plot. This placed Valter on the council, making him the youngest Umbaran ever to acheive the highest possible status within the caste
For two years Valter shined, settling disputes with an exceptional charisma, doing it in an almost otherwordly way. Even for an Umbaran, his will seemed to effect all those around him. Rumors began to spread about the planet, that Valter Correl would soon be the highest ranking member of the councill. This started more backroom politics. Days after the rumors started, Valter sat at his desk reading about the Jedi order, becoming very interested in the order. The fact that it seemed so peacefull, and that there were no assassinations and backroom politics really appealed to Valter. The only problem was that Valter had no idea he was a force sensitive. Moments later, Valter sensed something behind him, turning around to check, he saw another council member holding a blaster, about to fire. Not knowing what gave him this "premonition" he raised up his hand in the only defense he though possible. Not knowing what he had done, he seemed to push the council member off of the balcony with his mind.
His mind began to race, and he realized, his exceptional charisma wasnt just his blood, he was indeed force sensitive. He had to make plans, quick. He packet up his favorite robes and his journal, ran to the docking platform of the council, took his fastest cruiser, and set off for the Jedi Order. Upon arrival he quickly sold his cruiser, wanting no trace of who he really was, and went to learn the ways of the Jedi. They would help him atone for his murder, and he would devote the rest of his life to helping those in need with his abilities.
Current Roleplays: Valters Training
FACTION: Jedi Order
RANK: Padawan
SPECIES: Umbaran
AGE: 19
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 5'11
WEIGHT: 150 lbs
EYES: A deep scarlet
HAIR: His hair is black, and pulled back into a back length Ponytail
SKIN: A ghostly white
CREDITS: 778
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: A ted tatoo on his farhead
DOMINATE HAND: Left
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes
STRENGTH: Valter is a frail Umbaran, using his wit more than his strength in combat. 5/10
DEXTERITY: While his aim is exceptional, he himself is not the most dexterious person in the world. 6/10
CONSTITUTION: Valter is very frail, and one good kick to the chest could incapacitate him. 4/10
INTELLIGENCE: Valter is incredibly inteligent, taking all of his free time reading and using Jedi Holocrons. 10/10
WISDOM: He is incredibly wise for his age, but he hopes to become wiser as he grows older. 9/10
CHARISMA: Valter is as charasmatic as the most charasmatic human, but his slight empathy and natural umbaran abilities of persuasion make him a dangerous man. 13/10
FORCE POWERS:
SKILLS: Lightsaber combat
He can sense lies, and has a natural persuasion, with the ability to force his will upon the weak minded.
LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS: Makashi
STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES: Valters biggest strength flows from his Charisma, and his ability to solve most situations without resorting to violence. While an excellent diplomat, his biggest strength is directly preportioned to his weakness. Valters physical strength is very lacking, and when the diplomacy fails, Valter used to resort to hiding. He is also incredibly arrogant and full of himself, hoping the ways of the Jedi will fix his character flaws. Pysically, his largest weaknesses are his frailty and vulnerability to bright lights.
GEAR: Like most JedI Padawans, Valter has few possesion. He has Black Regal robes of the Rootai Order, convereted into Jedi robes. He also has a journal he carries around in which he writes down all he does.
SHIP: Valter had an expensive ship from umbara, but he gave it away when he entered the Jedi Order. In for a penny in for a pound.
PETS: None
PERSONALITY: Valter is a kindhearted soul who grew weary of Umbaran politics. He seeks inteligence where he cant get it, and wishes to learn to solve all problems with a steady mind. His inteligence however directly leads to his character flaws. He is cold, calculating, and similar to a computer in his thought process. He will say what needs to be said, even when no one wants to hear it. Valter is sure of his inteligence, and very pridefull about his standing on Umbara
HISTORY: Valter is a young Umbaran with an interesting past. Raised from a young age by a council familiy of the Rootai caste, Valter had a life in which the most vast sources of knowledge on Umbara were open to him.He sought knowledge wherever he could find it, and wanted to make his father proud. As the second eldest son in the family, he knew that it was a high possibility that he would one day reprisent his entire family on the planet. At age sixteen, his vast knowledge was finally seen to be such a strength, that his father ordered Valters older brother, to be killed. This left Valter as the second in command in the family.Days later Valters father, Kunda Correll, was killed by an assasination plot. This placed Valter on the council, making him the youngest Umbaran ever to acheive the highest possible status within the caste
For two years Valter shined, settling disputes with an exceptional charisma, doing it in an almost otherwordly way. Even for an Umbaran, his will seemed to effect all those around him. Rumors began to spread about the planet, that Valter Correl would soon be the highest ranking member of the councill. This started more backroom politics. Days after the rumors started, Valter sat at his desk reading about the Jedi order, becoming very interested in the order. The fact that it seemed so peacefull, and that there were no assassinations and backroom politics really appealed to Valter. The only problem was that Valter had no idea he was a force sensitive. Moments later, Valter sensed something behind him, turning around to check, he saw another council member holding a blaster, about to fire. Not knowing what gave him this "premonition" he raised up his hand in the only defense he though possible. Not knowing what he had done, he seemed to push the council member off of the balcony with his mind.
His mind began to race, and he realized, his exceptional charisma wasnt just his blood, he was indeed force sensitive. He had to make plans, quick. He packet up his favorite robes and his journal, ran to the docking platform of the council, took his fastest cruiser, and set off for the Jedi Order. Upon arrival he quickly sold his cruiser, wanting no trace of who he really was, and went to learn the ways of the Jedi. They would help him atone for his murder, and he would devote the rest of his life to helping those in need with his abilities.
Current Roleplays: Valters Training
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