Vin Antria

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NAME:
Vin Antria

FACTION:
New Sith Imperium

SUB-FACTION:
Sith Taskforce for Assassination, Reconnaissance, Sabotage. (STARS)

RANK:
Sith Acolyte

SPECIES:
Zabrak

AGE:
19

GENDER:
Male

HEIGHT:
6'1"

WEIGHT:
195 lbs

EYES:
Yellow (Left)/Purple (Right)

HAIR:
None

SKIN:
Brown

CREDITS:
1000

DISTINGUISHING MARKS:
Zabrak head horns
Facial tattoos
Uncommon eye color.

FORCE SENSITIVE:
Yes


STRENGTH: 6/10: Vin learned rather quickly that strength is the only way to survive. The weak will die and the strong will rise to lead the weak until they themselves become stronger and overthrow their masters. Added to the training he went through at a young age on Iridonia, he is a capable fighter at both hand to hand and melee combat.
DEXTERITY: 5/10: Agile, and fast, Vin spent long hours of his life training to be able to fight with the best. Though he at times has issues due to his repeated injuries that can cause the muscles in his body to tighten up taking away from his ability to move in a particular way, he is still a capable warrior.
CONSTITUTION: 7/10: Due to his species naturally high tolerance to pain along with the constant training and punishing sparring among the Sith, Vin is accustomed to the feeling of his body being nearly broken, only to recover and endure it again.
INTELLIGENCE: 4/10: Intelligence is something this young warrior could be considered to lack by outside parties. Though in truth, he dedicates himself to perfection and attempts to learn everything about whatever skill he has taken to learning. Once he sets his mind on something, he will continue until he has reached that goal only to choose another goal to pursue after attaining the previous. This can give him an air of chaotic irrationality.
WISDOM: 4/10: Youth is often the enemy of wisdom. Vin would much rather make his point at the tip of his saber over the use of words. He looks upon the silver tongued as being weak and incapable of defending themselves with brutal violence.
CHARISMA: 5/10: Vin's youthful views are often considered refreshing at the best of times and a minor irritation at others. His single minded manner causes him to attempt to rationalize his every action and choice for following his path. This leads him to gather or find like minded individuals often abandoning them upon fulfillment of his goal. Whether that be to death, capture, or isolation.

FORCE POWERS:
Force Jump
Force Push
Force Pull

SKILLS:
Advanced hand to hand combat.
Advanced Melee weapon training.
Intermediate Starship piloting.
Basic Computer Slicing.
Basic Ship Repair


LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
Form VII Vapaad


STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES: Dedicated, brutal, methodical. Vin is a strong warrior despite his young age and knows his martial prowess will only increase with his age. He finds his strength in the Dark Side of the Force and his own emotions, using them as the weapons they truly are. Though in lieu of his dedication and brutality, Vin finds that instead of shunning love as most Sith would. He embraces the emotion along with his rage and uses it. This is often seen as weakness by others in the Sith Order.


GEAR:
Standard Acolyte robes.
Armored Gauntlets.
Purple bladed Long Handled Lightsaber.
Red short bladed lightsaber.

SHIP: Krayt's Fang.
Vin discovered a derelict GAT-12h/i Skipray Blastboat on Iridonia which he promptly began rebuilding. Despite the fact that the starboard proton torpedo launcher and the 3 ion lasers remained inoperable regardless of his attempts to repair them, it was still a formidable craft with it's twin laser cannon and port concussion missile launcher. While it won't win any beauty contests, it does the job and get's him from point A to point B. Giving it a black paint job, he depicted the teeth of a Krayt Dragon along the nose of the ship.


DROIDS: N/A


PETS: N/A


PERSONALITY: Vin is a warrior to his core, trained by his people from a young age to excel in combat. Guided by his people's lustful goal to attain perfection in all they do, the young warrior dedicates himself to a task until he has mastered it. He has no issues finding himself among like minded individuals that are striving toward the same goal as himself, and even fewer problems with abandoning them after completing the goal. He does not look at this as betrayal. Merely moving on to another task to master. His rationalization of his actions can often be summed up by "I have attained my goal." which from the moment he joined the Sith was to achieve the title of Sith Master among the elite. He has no qualms betraying or killing others to reach his means.


BIOGRAPHY: Born on Iridonia to a single mother who's name he no longer remembers, Vin grew up training for war. He despised the use of blasters as he learned more about hand to hand and melee weapon combat. Unknown to him, he was Force Sensitive and confessed on many occasions that he was "lucky" when it came to mastering a task. He often found himself wandering the rough terrain of Iridonia with his twin brother Dero who helped him get the GAT-12h/i Skipray Blastboat running and operational for the most part. The two of them were inseparable until the day that a man in brown robes appeared in their small village, claiming to be a Jedi with the New Jedi Order. After speaking with both himself and his brother, he spoke privately with their mother before whisking Atrin away to the Academy on Coruscant. His mother attempted to explain that Dero had been found sensitive to the Force and would be trained as a Jedi. Vin refused to wrap his head around what his mother was saying and ran until he could run no more. Some how he found himself standing in front of the Skipray. He stayed there and began working on it, leaving only to return to the city to steal food or other supplies, carefully stocking his ship with what he knew would be needed. After months of work, Vin finally had the ship repaired to the point where it would power up and no doubt enter hyperspace.

Powering the ship and leaving the planet of Iridonia behind him, Vin attempted to enter hyperspace only for the ship to sputter for a moment. Nothing else happened to the young warrior's chagrin. He did know that the concussion missile launcher and the twin laser cannons were operational and so he waited for an unarmed freighter to make it's way from the surface toward him. Turning the ships emergency beacons on, he waited until the ship was in range of the concussion missiles before letting loose a deadly barrage that disabled the ship and began venting the oxygen, killing the crew almost instantly. Donning an ancient enviro suit he found in the storage locker and unsure it would work, a sudden feeling that everything was about to go as expected swung over him. Climbing out of the airlock after ensuring his ship was securely docked with the freighter he made his way inside finding the crew all dead. Blue corpses with eyes frozen in an expression of shocked fear, he felt no pity despite being only 10 years old. Securing what supplies he could carry as he found the freighter had stocked up fully on Iridonia before leaving, he spent hours moving supplies between the ships and finally tore apart the hyperdrive for the parts he needed. He knew little of the mechanics of hyperdrives, though his brother had described in detail the part they would need. Surprised that he would even attempt to leave the planet without getting the repairs made, he realized that he had not been thinking clearly.

Young Vin quickly grabbed any other necessary information including the data from the navicomputer before returning to his ship and letting the stripped freighter drift into space. Turning his sights toward Coruscant, he hit the Big Red Button and was whisked away with the streak of the stars being the last thing he saw before hours later he was greeted by the sight of a Sith warship. They were en route to their next target when they came across his gunboat. Attempting to turn tail and avoid them, his ship was caught in a tractor beam and hauled into the bay where Sith troopers and their Sith generals waited to see what they had caught. Slamming the lockdown on the ship, he was determined to take as many as he could with them. After a few moments of threats and orders to open the door, the metal began melting before a brilliant crimson blade could be seen jutting through. As the blade disappeared and the doors were thrust open, Imperial soldiers were rushing through with blasters drawn. Swallowing his fear, the young Zabrak rushed at the nearest trooper and slammed his small weight into him, grabbing the vibroblade from the troopers belt as he did. Armed and now very dangerous like a cornered Krayt Dragon, he was able to take down 4 of the Imperial troopers within the confines of the Blastboat's cabin before he was overpowered. As the death blow was about to be dealt a voice as cold as ice cut through the cabin.

It was one of the Sith Crusaders, A red-skinned 17 year old Twi'lek named Mara Devro. Seeing the potential in the young Zabrak and feeling the Force around him, she took him under her wing and began training him. Taking him to Korriban to begin his training, he endured harsh exercises that often ended with him killing a fellow Acolyte. She taught him that love was not an emotion to be wary of, and that it should instead be harnessed and used alongside his rage and other emotions. He spent many years under Mara, learning the ways of the Sith attempting to achieve perfection in every aspect of training often earning praise from other Sith Crusaders. Vin knew this was short lived and that given the opportunity to further themselves, any of the Sith would cut him down where he stood. He took heart in knowing that as an Acolyte, he was safe from the ambitions of the stronger Sith. Though on many occasions was forced to fight for his life against others of his own rank as they vied for favor in the eyes of the masters and crusaders. Mara took Vin on many missions to inner rim planets and he learned much under her. Seven years later, he found himself on Korriban once again with Mara as he learned from her and the holocrons he had access to. He had spent years attempting to understand what Mara had meant when she told him love was an emotion vital to the essence of every being, including the Sith. He finally understood when he realized that after years of being around Mara, he had come to love her. Confessing his feelings to the Sith Crusader, she laughed at him first before relenting she had been waiting for him to come to the same conclusion.

For once, it seemed that everything was going in Vin's favor. A lover, access to knowledge, power. He could want for little more than to attain more power and knowledge, which he did at every turn. Though for all of his training, he was frustrated he was still a mere Acolyte. Mara understood his frustration and in the comfort of their chamber urged him to use his frustration and rage to excel. He spent hours training with his lightsaber in the training chambers of the academy, honing the use of his long handled weapon which gave him more control over his two handed strikes, struggling to achieve perfection of his chosen Form VII. He was called upon along with his lover and master, Mara to lead a minor assault on an Alliance position, which would be a day he rued. Upon arriving to the location to begin the assault, Mara and Vin deployed ahead of the main force to scout out the best location to begin the assault. Trusting the intelligence they had been given, they checked the first location on the report and found themselves cornered by a group of Acolytes being lead by a Crusader. They ambushed the Sith lovers and while Vin admirably defended himself from the Acolytes, some of which he knew, he heard a scream penetrate the darkness. Entering a blood rage, he struck down the Acolytes and found himself crossing blades with the Crusader who's face was hidden behind a mask. After almost an hour of dueling with neither achieving an advantage over the other, the Crusader struck Vin in the face with force lightning, causing him to lash out with a violent two handed swing that took the Crusader's arm at the elbow. The Force Lightning left Vin's right eye an odd purple color forever thereafter.

The Crusader fled and left Vin surrounded by the bodies of the ambitious Acolytes along with his lover and mentor. Taking up her lightsaber, he vowed to hunt down the Crusader who had instigated the assault. He knew that Mara was weak enough to have been killed and that he should feel no pity for her however his love clouded that judgement. It was at that moment, he realized why he hadn't achieved his promotion to Crusader. His vision was clouded, and the masters saw this. Yes they vied for power. Yes, they guarded and hoarded it jealously. They still recognized successes and rewarded them. He promised he would achieve the rank of Sith Master and avenge Mara, spending the next two years striving to unlock his true potential and take the next step to the rank of Crusader.



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Grimlock

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I'm gonna shamelessly bump this thread. :CAbove
 

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Funny, I had a character I was going to make that's almost identical x) oh well.
 

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Unless you've RPed him learning that power already, I'm gonna have to ask you remove Force Choke. Force Choke is a powerful manifestation of Force Grip, which is a powerful manifestation of Telekinesis, something your character has not yet learned to a degree enough to utilize Force Grip or Force Choke. Other than that, looks good.
 

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I would like to see stats lowered. At maximum, one 7, one 6, the rest 5 or lower. This character is an acolyte, so their stats wouldn't be so high. By starting with lower stats, it allows for the character to increase in skill over time as he advances in his path as a Sith.

Also, please remove Force Lightning. It is an advanced Force power that would likely need to wait till Crusader rank to learn.

Interesting backstory. Not too cliche as I've seen in some profiles. I would ask that the slain soldiers be removed, changed to beating them up. The Imperium wouldn't take kindly to having their soldiers being killed by an unknown person, even if said person was recruited into the Sith Order.
 

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Made the edits to the Force powers and his stats. Though I feel the backstory isn't too far fetched considering how often the Sith are infighting as well as what I feel would be taking away from his story. With it happening the way it has, I feel it will drive Vin to excel if only to exact vengeance on the Crusader that ambushed them.
 

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Very interesting back story. I like the above like the premise and I think some training together sometime would be awesome. Good luck with him.
 
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