Xakic Selmur [Freelance]

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NAME: Xakic Selmur

FACTION: N/A (looking)

RANK: N/A

SPECIES: Human

AGE: 18

GENDER: Male

HEIGHT: 6.1

WEIGHT: 165Ib

EYES: Green

HAIR: Grey

SKIN: White

CREDITS: 1000

DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Scar on the thumb joint area and wrist joint area left side of right hand

DOMINATE HAND: Right

FORCE SENSITIVE: No

STRENGTH: Physically Balanced

DESTERITY: Somewhat Agile

CONSTITUTION: Fit

INTELLIGENCE: Slightly above average

WISDOM: Slightly High

CHARISMA: Able to get Friends or Connections

FORCE POWERS: None

SKILLS: Recon, Stealth, Blade

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS: none

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
He has always had a friendly personality that allows him to get information from deep places and at the same time does not take false information very well. With this strength he is completely blind without recourses. He also has an adequate skill at infiltration.
GEAR:

A double-sided Vibrosword splits in half to make to and a small vibroblade and ninja style studded armor.

SHIP:
none

PETS:

Small orange cat with a white under belly and paws

PERSONALITY:

Is very volatile with a friendly personality but if he is screwed with he will blow up on you. Has no problem with authority but will tell you when he is either ticked or disagrees with you. His anger is something he allows to be used in his combat which helps him get a sense of a combat high. With such a volatile anger he would be a plus to any combat faction. While yet he enjoys combat he also takes plesure in taking to do logical thinking.

HISTORY:

At the age of 12 he was kicked out of his home and was forced to live on the streets. With this new environment he quickly learned how to make connections. He was able to get himself into a gang life which he did for 1 and a 1/2. He then lived in alley ways living off food from the trash until he was able to get a job at the local dump as grunt that helped with loading and unloading trash. When he got off of his 12 hour days he retired to the body of a trashed ship which he then found two vibro swords and made them with make shift part into what they are now. After doing that job for 2 years he looked at getting into crime again.
He would occasionaly break into houses to steal items. One night when he was breaking into a house he stumbled across a metal case which he then took bake with him. Once he got back to the junk yard he opened the box and found a vibro blade. after he found this item he then to an intrest in blades and would occasionally practice using a broken robot.
When he was 17 he was looking through the street for somthing of value when he saw a trash can fall over. Being that he wanted some money he then took out his vibro blade to take a look. When he opend the top he saw a small orange cat. The cat and he then developed an everlasting relationship that all others rival. When he was 18 he got his stuff nd his cat together scratched up what money he could and decided to start a new life.

KILLS:

N/A

DUELING RING MATCHES:

N/A

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:

N/A

ROLE-PLAYS:

N/A

(Please note if there is anything I am missing let me know and I will be sure to edit it to the best of my ability)
 
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Lavi

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Welcome to the site. More to add to the personality and history would probably be the biggest thing to improve this profile.
 

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For your pet, you forgot to say what the pet was. XD I assume a cat though, but meh. :O

Also, DnD assassin pic ftw. <3
 

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Welcome to the site. More to add to the personality and history would probably be the biggest thing to improve this profile.

The word on the computer im using cant be actavated and its the onlything I use for long posts so I have to use the computer in my basement on in the computer room...
 

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The word on the computer im using cant be actavated and its the onlything I use for long posts so I have to use the computer in my basement on in the computer room...
Write some sentences, save the thing, then open edit again. It's annoying, yes, but it works.
 

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Learn patience, plz.
 

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I just use the sites posting thing, mozilla has a spell checker so 's all good. Not bad, I agree with the others you may want to add a bit more history and check on the grammar. You've got a few run-on sentances in there.
 

IdiotHavoc

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crap forgot to save...
 
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