Zenkai Order Resubmit

[The Ghost]

The title's kinda obvious in intent.

I personally fail to see how I'm being difficult if I was only asked to do one thing, and the write up already complied with that.

I was asked to point out their ideology clearly. I did. I pointed out how the ideology was clearly depicted in the initial write up.

I was asked to point out the allure clearly. Again, I did, and how that was clear.

I was asked to point out its independence. Once again, I did. And pointed out how that was in the initial write up.

I fail to see how I'm being difficult if I'm complying.

You said the premise is murky. I don't see how, as it's clear that the Order helps people. Either for profit, or out of the goodness of their hearts.

One of the frigates given is turned into a mobile hospital, all initiates are taught to heal in order to help people. I really don't understand what's unclear. Or how I'm being difficult.

I have no problem fixing what needs to be fixed, if it already complied, how does it need to be fixed?

 

[Lucid]

Once again you are simply trying to argue your way into having a faction approved. I had asked you to rewrite all those things into your faction profile and you didn't. This is not a faction submission or anything of the sort, so this thread is locked. If you wish to resubmit your faction and not post an argument, then do so, otherwise goodbye.