Zian

Zian

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NAME: Zian
FACTION: Jedi
RANK: Knight
SPECIES: Chiss-Human hybrid
AGE: 12 in Çhiss years (25sh)
GENDER: female
FORCE SENSITIVE: Trained force sensitive

APPEARANCE:
Height: 5'10"
Weight: 130lbs.
Eyes: Black
Hair: Black
Skin: Light Blue

ATTRIBUTES:
Strengths include learning quickly, being cold as the ice she was born on, quick enough to escape, using the force
Weakness include not being able to defend herself against more violent enemies, not being able to transport herself.

PERSONALITY:
Zian is no different than other Chiss. Cold as the ice they are born on, Chiss have to learn quickly in a take no prisoners type of society. Zian has always been a little different; she was always a little more curious and a little faster when it comes to learning things. She has a bit of a timid nature when it comes to being around things she doesn’t know. It takes her some time to be herself.
BIOGRAPHY:

Time had passed since mistakes were made, the economy was slow to recover, but the Chiss were a resilient people. The government had fallen to pieces, but what was left in pieces the Chiss saw to rebuilt. It would take time for them to recover, the first chance to make things right was when she was born. Chiss force users were rare, rarer than most, they knew what they needed to try to do. Zian was born on Csilla, the main world of chiss space. She was born a little different than other Chiss, her skin is a lighter blue and her eyes black. She had to wait by Chiss laws, before they would try to do what they did. They wanted her to learn about her people and society till she came of age, which for a chiss is at ten years old. here are no adolescence years in chiss society, she grew up normally like a chiss outside of her indifference in appearance and abilities. They wanted her to go to the Jedi, but they were not sure how to get her to them. She was the Chiss’s chance to set things right, after all a Jedi padawan had once come from their kind very long ago, Nuru-Kungurma. It was knowledge that Jedi taught forgiveness, they were hoping for some kind of start with peace again. It would take more than her, but the hope was to start mending damage. Looking up old contacts they searched for a way to contact the Jedi without the Sith finding out.
Her father was the way, her father was an alliance solider. During the times of the Sith her mother was off world for many years. When her mother returned home long after the Sith were gone the Chiss were in dire times. So she started to work on trying to recover the damages that were done. Her mother would find out she was pregnant and informed Zian's father of her pregnancy. She also informed her father that Zian was force sensitive. He pulled some strings to get the contact for the Jedi when Zian was of age to met her on Baruka.
Once at the Jedi place she came in contact with a Jedi-Knight. She didn’t trust him at first, but eventually she agreed to come with him. Once on his ship he began to teach her about unlocking the force within herself. It took her some time to feel her power, before she could begin to use it. He began the task of teaching her to sense with her power, which had an unexpected thing happen as a result. Her body began to glow without her control. Zian didn’t even realize she had been doing it. They just focused on her sensing, until she got it down. Shortly after he had her begin the task of learning how to use a lightsaber. Zian struggled with the blade, not having held something outside a charric weapon. She would take her time getting used to the blade, before attempting anything else. Zian would pick it up on blocking blaster bolts with and without seeing.
Days after Landing, she met new people while sitting on a beach, some place Zian was new to. After meeting some new people the Jedi caught up to her and they started to train again. They started to work on her control. Kai wanted her to try to control her light. She struggled with controlling her light, her master was allowed inside her to see why it was she struggled. He found that she wasn't being forceful enough. So she tried again, pushing it to get the light under control finally. After gaining the idea of control he wanted her to move the remote. Once again she struggled as she tried to control her light and move the remote, a difficult task. Her master told her to stop trying to control her light and concentrate on the remote, which she did. As she tried to move the remote illusions started to appear, the more she concentrated the more the illusions appeared. By the time she had even moved the remote a little she had made ice and snow appear accidently and exhausted herself. Another road block in training.

After spending some time with classes and masters, things happened that caused her to be lost and confused. So she spent some time away from the Jedi with her father, a man she barely knew. The time spent with a man she didn't know was confusing, but his spirit seemed to convince her other wise. They discussed matters she seemed lost on and in the process she ended up with gifts a baudo yacht and an Akk dog who she named Cart'ar. His methods of gifts and speach seemed still alien to her, but she understood what he said. It was a new perspective on issues she was trying to figure out.
Once she returned back to the Jedi she started on a new purpose, to get her blade to defend herself. She learned from books how to heal and how to construct her lightsaber. It was built with a white crystal, rare by any standards. She was determined to learn healing before constructing her blade. Zian didn’t want to hurt herself or anyone else.
Zian’s trails were a test for her as would be for any apprentice taking them. She had to face slavers, she had to face their cruelty and death. One of the slaves she wanted to save died in their care. Zian had to deal with this lose and overcome it to help others escape the slavers, then end the ring once and for all.

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GEAR:

Light saber:
Physical and technical specifications
Shape
Cylindrical hilt
Size
Typically hand-held
Color
  • White
Material(s)

ROLE-PLAYS:


RELATIONSHIPS:



SHIP:

baudo yacht:
Technical specifications
Length
32 meters
Maximum atmospheric speed
1,200 km/h
Hyperdrive rating

  • Class 2.0
  • Backup Class 7.0

Armament
Laser cannon turret (1)
Crew
1
Passengers
8
Cargo capacity
35 tons
Consumables
1 month

DROIDS:

PETS:
Akk dog who she named Cart'ar
KILLS:

COMBAT:
 

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I have a few concerns here. The biography is very choppy and has pieces that don't quite make sense to me. It almost feels like a copyover from last TL as some details fit that better than DotR. I have a hard time putting my finger on anything specific here but I suggest cleaning up the bio so it has a better flow of timeframes and how she grew from child, to teen, to Jedi Knight. Also white probably isn't rare as we have a lot of white lightsabers. The general focus is not on colored crystals rather that all crystals are the same and the user causes it to become a color based on their own emotions, focus, etc.
 
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