Simply put, based on your responses in the thread, I'm not satisfied that the changes you would make would fix the article. Considering about...60, 65% of the article is about Syn's history on the site and what he did wrong, it needs a complete rewrite anyway, so you're better off taking it back to the drawing board and starting from scratch anyway.
Everything in the profile itself sounds really really over the top, like I understand he's an experienced Jedi Master, I know, because Ebb is in this ring too. We have these characters that have been around for awhile, but we need to make sure they're not sounding incredibly OP, because they're not, you know what I'm saying? That's what I mean by tone it down.
Ok, well you can start it in the Empress Teta board, since that's where Ebb hangs out; I'm going to warn you I'm super slow with posting due to other obligations.
Honestly Ebberla won't stop him from doing so, there was an arc about some Jedi separatists a little while back who were going into hiding, this isn't anything new.