I swore to God that I had edited it with the updates. I apologize sincerely, but it's been updated, now. I would also like to request that this be moved to the DOTR planning area, since I put stuff in the wrong place... again.
On Your Other Points:
+ I fixed the "than other species" part in several areas, but most importantly when talking of their agility and nimbleness, and where it says they are put on par with things
+ They didn't always have cybernetic implants, so that's why I mention "without implants in the...
Okay, I'll get to the other points later, but the species is required to travel to the moon every three months so that their midichlorians don't get out of wack. There is something wrong with their midichlorians that makes them unbalanced and unstable. I said they have a stronger than average...
Name: The Veralian Twi'lek
Biology:
+ All have one Lekku
+ All members of the species are implanted with cybernetics before birth (this is done through surgery, obviously, and implanting cybernetics into the fetus during several different points that said fetus will hit during its development)...
Name: The Twin Moons of Veral
Coordinates: J9.5
Climate: The First Moon of Veral is a gorgeous world in climate, with each of its seven seasons becoming more or less rainy, and more or less sunny. It experiences gorgeous purple rain when it rains, and it rarely has violent or dangerous weather...