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The room actually didn't look too bad.

Several of the nonattached carpets were disrupted, and the bed looked as if someone was so desperate for a deck of cards that they shuffled the sheets. Then dealt them.

There were, of course, a few fallen over knickknacks, here and there, but not as if some earthquake had come through. The room was dim, though not completely dark, as the light had been dialed to a low setting.

The only sign of life came from the right. Leaning against the wall with his face towards it, h appeared as if he was trying to stand up, but was unable, forcing himself to stand against the stone edifice. However, there was an air of anguish in his stance, his hand, held up against the wall, were not relaxed, but clawed and tense, as if they were trying to dig into the rock. His arms were thrown at wild angles beside him, though both forearms faced upwards, like he were trying to crawl and fight to climb out of a pit but had lost all strength.

His face was almost, emotionless, almost. His mouth was slightly open, letting you see the gritted teeth, though they were clenched weakly, as if one had done it for hours on end and the jaw was tired. His eyes were shut, and his breathing, though heavy, was quiet and somehow shallow. He was trembling from the neverending withdrawal, though it was almost imperceptible, and sweat was trailing down his face. His upper tunic was unbuttoned halfway down his torso, as if he had been burning hot and was desperate for relief.

Though, being what he was, his face was already pale, somehow it seemed more so, and there was a gaunt look to him and a parched look to his lips that told that he had eaten and drank nothing since before being locked in here. He had commanded that the guard outside bring him nothing, and that he never enter. Fortunately the guard had obeyed: earlier, in the pinnacle of his fits, he surely would have done something his heart would have regretted for his entire life.

He made no acknowledgment of her presence.
 

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With his face hidden from her, she could not see how haggard he appeared. Her eyes had quickly swept across the room, taking it all in as she stepped closer to him, reaching out with her mind to very gently touch his, letting him know she was near.

Her heart felt as if it had dropped into her stomach as she saw his posture and hands, digging into the wall. "River," she said again quietly, kneeling down behind him and reaching a hand out to touch his back.
 

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His body feebly jerked away at her touch, as if afraid of whomever it could be. His mind seemed twisted and scrambled, there was not one straight thought within it - most of his thoughts were bent on keeping the one driving force in it from becoming reality. When his mind felt that simple touch, half of him felt relief, while the other felt fear and a deep, insatiable hunger. He couldn't put together who it was, he couldn't think. It was hard to think when one had not slept in as long as he had, and under that much physical and mental exertion. It was almost as if he had no sentience.
 

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Calling upon the Force surrounding them, she tried to touch his mind, reminding him of the images she had shared with him in training, her hand never leaving him, as if a constant reminder that he was not alone, he'd never be alone.

"River, turn inward and don't focus upon your bodily needs. The Force is all you need," she tried to urge him, needing to have him distract his mind if even for a moment, to draw his strength from the Force just as he drew strength from the pendant.
 

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Images and thoughts and memories flashed through his mind, reminding him of... of... what was her name? His mind was such a mess that he couldn't remember. A gentle voice brushed his ears, though his mind distorted them, as if they were some animilian cry; however, though he could not perceive it, something in him knew the voice, and it somehow relaxed him.

As if he had been a marionette cut of its strings, he fell to the floor on his knees, arms drooping to his sides, barely able to keep upright.
 

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Lillianne slid closer to River, catching him and leaning him back into her arms, humming a song she often sang as a child while meditating. Softly caressing his face, she tried to continue to soothe him, attempting to bring him out of his self-induced hell and into the peace and rest of the Force.
 

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"Lilly..." he finally said, weakly, barely loud enough to hear. He was beginning to succumb to the intense mental anguish, fighting continually against himself as the demon within him clawed at his soul, waiting until he was at his weakest to begin its writing torture anew.

However, the murky waters began to clear, slowly, but they did, as Lillianne began working her gentle healing powers, that of a simple and loving soul. It was difficult, and he still had not control of all of his faculties yet, but e could think, vaguely, still. The pain did not leave, in fact, upon sensing such a delicious life force as she, it had only strengthened, but he wasn't reduced to the mind capacity of a rabid animal.
 

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Her humming quietened briefly as she looked down upon his face, hearing her name and a sad smile rising on her face. He was still there as she knew. He hadn't succombed to his nature.

"Shh," she told him quietly, "rest now. You're safe. Rest in the Force. We have much to do," she encouraged him, smiling more broadly as she began to hum again and slowly rock him, closing her eyes and reaching out to his mind with the Force, showing him her plans for training him and Isiah together.
 

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((Sorry, I hadn't realized you posted))

"I..." he said in a low whisper, weak from his long struggle. It seemed as if it had lasted for years. He began to relax somewhat as calming images flashed through his mind of him and... someone else... training with Lilly.

Once more he began to get tensed up and his breathing grew more shallow and quick. "Lill...Lill...ly...you can't..." had struggled to say, barely loud enough to be called a whisper, "be... around me," He finally forced out. His mind still represented by a dark tangle, barely able to think, he tried to 'speak' to her with his mind, somehow.

They were rather chaotic, but he hadn't the strength to speak. He hadn't the strength to fight it... he could feel the demon once more sliding through his veins, becoming one with him. It was a desperate cacophony, almost a glimpse of the terrible battle for his mind. With images, trying to tell her... trying to tell her...

He had to run away. He had to get away, get away from this Temple full of air and light, full of those full of life and love and freedom, into the darkness and loneliness such a being deserved. To live among tombs, as one as cold as he. As one as like the dead as he. It was either that route, or one other.

Death. He could not fight this urge, not indefinitely, he hadn't the strength nor the will, though he were desperate. A knife to the throat, it would be quick and painless, he needed to die. For what he was, he needed to die. For what he could not stop, he needed to die.

As the thoughts grew darker, crowding in about him, suddenly their arose another image. One of him, leaning over her, ready to take her life, his face still recognizable as his own, in a twisted, demonic way. His eyes dull yet terrible, his teeth almost bared as he held her precious head roughly in his hands.

Only it wasn't an image. It was real.
 

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Realizing the shape he was in, she silently cursed the High Priest and his ways. Locking River up had done more harm than good. Searching his eyes as she tried to find the person locked within, the person in the room with her just prior to the inner demon taking over, she realized the difficulty of his struggle.

Calling the Force about her, drawing it into herself, she finally lashed out in a bright flash of light. It seemed to erupt from her very presence and sought to drive out any darkness around her, and within River. A single tear fell down her face at the act, not knowing the effect it might have upon him, yet refusing to attack him outright with any weapon. No, the Force was the only thing that could save River and help him in his fight.
 

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The demon seemed to see the attack coming, though too late to do anything about it. As she gathered her power, for a moment the depth of evil within his widened eyes vanished, replaced by shock and fear. Terror.

It was like being hit by some awesome wall, some great thing determined to crush the demon as he was thrown onto his back a meter or so away. the light washed over him like a tidal wave, and yet at the same time like some potent acid, cutting into him and piercing through him, cutting through his deepest heart.

The demon was tortured as the light choked it and pierced it with many arrows. It was only a fraction of a second - the light was still shining in the room, blindingly white, when the demon withered and finally released its grasp on its bondslave.

While the light still shone, while the power of God still filled the room, one could hear his thought, his mind, his plea, in a loud, haunting whisper,

:: Is there yet hope? ::

Before his body became motionless, breath still and silent in his throat.
 

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She fell backwards, breath panting at the exertion of such a powerful release. The Bendu priests could pull off such feats with little effort on their part, yet she had never attempted such a powerful attack now. Her heart and mind had been focused on saving him, driving the demon from him, yet she feared the worst outcome may have happened.

Forcing her weakened body from the ground, tears falling freely from her face and pooling on the floor, she glanced at River's body lying a couple of feet from her.

"River?" she asked in a weakened voice, too weary to call to the Force to check his lifeforce within. When he didn't respond, a sob escaped from her throat, hands grasping the floor and pulling her closer to him. "River? Please, River..."

Yet, he did not seem to respond. Closing her eyes, tears pouring from out from under her eyelids, she pled to Yahweh for his life. Placing a hand upon his chest, she willed what little strength she had left in her body to his.

"Help," she said in a hushed voice interrupted by a sob. Then, with a great breath of air she cried out louder. "Help! Please, help!" she shouted again, the sobs fully taking her now.

:What have I done?:
 

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That little strength, that little spark, it was enough.

Yahweh must have heard the prayers of his dear child, for there was yet life in his worn and ravaged body, harmed by the demon that hated him so much.

That little spark was enough to give him one small breath of air, but it was enough to jumpstart him.

He was terribly sore all through his body, is body ached for food and water, there was a constant pain right behind his collarbone, and had been since the pendent had left his neck. "La... Lill..." he said so faintly. He could feel that something within him hurt, the demon must have damaged something, but it was not very painful, he'd felt worse. His neck was sore... as if the demon had ben trying to choke the life out of him - maybe it had. As he thought that, the world began to register.

Lilly.

His eyes fluttered open, though he was so tired he could not keep them all the way open for long. But he didn't need to. He could hear her. That was enough. Weak though he was from day-long struggle with next to no rest, he managed to get up on his elbows, where his eyes caught sight of her.

Something stirred within him, something hurt to see her this way. Hurt very badly. Wanting desperately to fix whatever was wrong, he grabbed her gently and moved her little body up so that her eyes were level with his. He didn't know where he found the strength, he just knew that he had to help her. What had happened. Had he... done something? Had he... killed again?

"Lilly..." he breathed as he fought for consciousness, "Lilly, what.. have I done...?"
 

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Feeling hands grasp onto her, pulling her up, Lillianne's eyes flashed open, seeing River before her. "Ri..." she started and immediately drew her arms about him, holding onto him tightly. "Thank Yahweh you're alright."

"Lilly..." he breathed as he fought for consciousness, "Lilly, what.. have I done...?"

Hearing his question, she pulled back from him a little, searching his eyes. Did he not know what had happened? Had the demon taken complete control over him in that moment?

"What you've done..." she said in a bewildered tone. "You've done nothing wrong, River. Nothing. You're safe for now," she told him just as a Bendu priest and a couple of knights entered the room taking in the spectacle before them.

There was the essence of the power still within the room, unmistakable by those trained in the Bendu arts. Yet, seeing the two weakened persons, Knight and Apprentice, the Priest waved his hand, giving orders for both of the knights to take them to the infirmary.

Lillianne reluctantly obliged as she insisted that they take River first, also insisting that she was fine. Yet, when she tried to rise to her feet, she needed their assitance, so weak was she still. Other Bendu were gathered out in the hallway as they watched River and Lillianne being escorted to the infirmary. The priest had launched into a series of questions that the Knight answered along the way, yet her eyes were never far from the form of her apprentice, her friend, keeping her promise she had made to the High Priest and herself.
 

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"Safe...?" he said, as if the word was new to him. ANd indeed, for once in a long time he did feel safe, even without the pendant he had become so dependent on.

He could not help but feel shocked - and at the same time distinctly pleased - when Lilly's arms wrapped around him for joy and embraced him. Almost unconsciously, his arms gently wrapped around her, too.

He could feel how weak she was, it was easy to tell, so it was with little wonder that when the fellow Bendu entered the room, he insisted that he was fine, and that she needed the attention, though he was losing consciousness. However, to his chagrin, she had prevailed, though he was glad that she was still cared for. In his relief, he at last let everything go black.
 

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After Lillianne had waved the medical staff away, she made her way to River's side, sitting nearby, wanting her face to be the first he saw. Drifting off to sleep a couple of times, she found the rest her body so needed. The light had taken more out of her than she had originally thought, yet it seemed to have done worked what she and River had been unable to do on their own. Her only concern was how long it might last.

Pulling one of the Bendu books on her lap, she rested her head against one hand, propped on the side of the chair as she searched the history books for any information that might help her understand what River had been through.
 

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((Does she find the Anzat stuff in the book? Or do you want me to make up some text real quick for to be in the Bendu book? (((For to be... I've always wanted to use that phrase :D))) ))

He wasn't out long, his race naturally healed at a very quick pace. As well, being here, in this apex of light, sped it up even more. It wasn't a particularly serious injury, but it did take some time to mend - around three or four hours.

As his world came back into focus, ever so slowly, his eyes began to feel that distinctive roughness and discomfort he usually felt when sleeping during the day. He did not feel in any danger, and his mind did not register anything yet, so he just lay there, still awake, for a few minutes before his eyes fluttered open for curiosity. He was facing towards the ceiling, a rather dull thing to behold, before he turned his head to the right, where he could sense someone was near. "Lilly?" he said more than asked.Upon seeing her, his eyes brightened and he moved to get up on his elbows. He felt uncomfortable and off-balance lying in bed with her sitting next to him.
 

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OOC: I'll let you work your creative magic and tell me what the Bendu would know of your people. I honestly don't know since I've never heard of them before you created this char.

She had been half dozing while studying the book when she heard her name and glanced up to see River finally awake. The medical staff had assured her that he was recovering very well, a great relief to her. Quickly shuffling the book to the side and setting it on the table near his bed, she sat up and scooted to the edge of her seat.

"Don't get up, River. You should rest still. You're system was in quite a shock..." bright eyes filled with joy at seeing him doing well gazed upon him as a smile graced her face. "How are you feeling?"
 

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((Goodie. I ought something about them - I FA'd their article on Wookieepedia. For your benefit, I am going to include a lot about Anzat in general for you, and then a made-up history))

There wasn't much about Anzati in the book, and little wonder, as they usually kept to themselves and hid their race anyway. It was their nature. However, there was a small section in one of the books appendices, and part of the history section contained several mentions of them. A compilation is as follows.

Biology

The Anzati were Human in appearance, usually with a slightly gray-toned skin. Scientists and xenobiologists had little opportunity to study the Anzati, but sketchy medical reports found on the species indicated that they have no natural biorhythm; that is to say, no pulse, and as a result, no body heat. Therefore, it was a total mystery as to how their circulatory system functioned.

The youngest Anzati were ancient. The ages of the eldest could be measured in eons. They roamed the galaxy when the Republic was just a dream of the Core Worlds. The Anzati could live for millennia, sustained by the life essence they drew from others. An Anzat who did not feed at least once every few days merely grew hungry. Lack of sufficient meals had not more of a supernatural aging effect on an Anzat than it did on a Human.

Because the Anzati preyed upon those whose life force was strong, they must be stronger. While Anzati tended to possess exceptional might and often startling reflexes, they were not supernaturally endowed. At best, they reflected the pinnacle of Human athletic ability; at worst, they merely had the attributes of an ordinary Human. However, physical strength was only a small part of the equation. To sense the presence of a strong life essence in others, they had highly developed sensory organs unknown in other sentient species. To physically drain this life essence's connection from living beings, they had to be physically adapted to do so. For the Anzati, these things were interconnected.

The Anzati were natural predators, preferring to hunt sentient races of all shapes and sizes and kinds. To this end, they possessed two long, prehensile proboscises similar in appearance to tentacles. They kept these proboscises coiled in their twin cheek pockets for feeding on unsuspecting victims; when their proboscises were retracted, they were practically visually indistinguishable from Humans. They fed in a unique way that was described as grotesque.

Using a kind of mind control, which those in tuned with the Force of Others who had encountered them claimed was akin to Force manipulation, they bewitched their victims in a manner similar to a mind trick. Using this telepathy, the Anzat lured in their unsuspecting targets by mesmerizing them with their telepathic control. This control strengthened at close range and was even further augmented and honed with age and use.

Once a victim was within their power, the Anzati would uncoil their thin proboscises from their cheek pouches located on either side of its nose and usually inserted them into the subject's nostrils and into the cranium, where the life force was drained out the organism; however, the Anzati fed by drawing this out of wherever it resided in a victim, as it varied by species. In most humanoid races, it laid within the brain cavity. Almost of their own, the proboscises sought the victim's soup, and began draining it into the Anzat. The victim could struggle, though often the Anzat's attack was so sudden, so perfect, that it was too late. This action however, required time and could not be rushed. They also have been known to grasp the victim's head to hold it in place close to them as they fed.

It was reputed that Anzati could keep their victims alive for several feedings, taking great pleasure in the fear and terror their prey felt throughout the ordeal.

Though life essence was a manifestation of the Force of Others, the luck upon which Anzati feed was only peripherally related. Certainly, beings who were particularly gifted in the Force were appetizing to an Anzat, but this was usually because their close connections with the life energy of the universe present the appearance of a great personal presence. Of course, experienced Bendu, Jedi, et al., usually had both powerful personal life essence and a close connection with the universe's through the Force. The Anzat who made a meal of such a one was a rare and terrible creature indeed.

The Anzati, of course, considered such discussions academic. "The Force of Others" was a concept developed by younger species. It was a concept Anzati do not recognize as any more correct than any of a dozen theories before. They knew only that weak-willed beings were as unsatisfying as table scraps. To subsist on the average sentient, an Anzat would have to feed on a dozen beings every day; and since the meal rarely survived the feast, the Anzat would leave a trail of corpses. On a world without sentient beings, or in a place where soup is in short supply, an Anzat could easily starve to death. Most of the galaxy, however, is unfortunate in this regard: the Anzati were not liable to die off so easily - sentient beings were plentiful enough to feed a legion of them.

History (in brief)

Originally, Yahweh created the Anzat to be a highly beneficial and benevolent race, capable through their long lives to be wise sages, and imbued them all with a connection to the Ashla to become great knights, and, especially, healers, for Him. Their hidden proboscises were, in the beginning, used to give life to others, as they were given so much to spare. This helped speed up the healing process by an incredible margin, and could save anything with yet a spark of life within it. They were equipped with the life sensory organ to quickly pick out dying sentients, even amongst dead or when hidden. Because this required only the biological implications with which an Anzat was born, the power worked just as well by itself at almost any age and training level.

They, themselves, were given great healing abilities so that they could survive blows that would be fatal to a Human and fast reflexes because they were guardians and protectors once. This they were meant to be. Their highly advanced tracking abilities also aided this. They need not even eat food or drink for weeks, though it definitely helped their fitness.

The first Anzats, Illyriden and Ashara, caused the downfall of this destiny. Illyriden and his wife were made with this future in mind, but one of the Bogan's deceivers played on Illyriden's greed, and at last he fed on another instead of healing them. As spice is addicting, so is life essence, only a thousand times more so. As well, made to be storeholders of life, the addiction grew into a hunger. Ashara soon followed him, and, being the headchiefs of their race, all the Anzat that followed their addiction naturally, though it had to be triggered by a first feed: Anzat who had never fed were still capable of living out their potential, though it was very slim and most of these lived in seclusion. There has never been a recorded instance in which an Anzat was able to conquer this hunger, so strong is it.

Undoubtedly one of the Bogan's greatest strokes of revenge and hatred on Yahweh, it is said that the more promising Anzat were given a guardian demon who possessed them in times of want and hunger to prey on those whom Yahweh loved most.

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He smiled a bit back at her; he could not help it when she smiled like that. "No really, I feel fine. But what about you? You didn't look well at all." he asked, a cloud of concern passing over his face as he sat up.
 

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She waved a hand dismissively at his question. "I'm fine," she answered, turning her gaze away from him and back down at the book sitting upon the desk.

"River," she started, eyebrows furrowing as she struggled to find the words to tell him what she had learned and what had happened. "Do you remember anything? anything at all that happened in your room?"
 
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