Abyssmal returns

Pyrenees

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What is going to happen in your plot?
@Vardon Galland and @Samael Aeveroth travel to investigate a dark presence on Daupherm and encounter two evil force users with numerous pawns.

What other players will be a part of this?
@samdragon

Where are all the places (if more than one) that your plot will be taking place?
Daupherm

Please provide a basic in-character timeline of what you expect to happen.
This will be a one thread plot. The thread has already started but is not finished yet.

1. Into the Abyss: @Vardon Galland and @Samael Aeveroth travel to investigate a dark presence on Daupherm and encounter two evil force users with numerous pawns. They defeat their enemies and suddenly the pawns follows them instead. The dark presence will fade from the area on Daupherm which they visited if the evil force users are defeated.

What do you or your character hope to achieve with this plot? What is the "end-game"?
Both characters hope to remove the darkness which plagues the area. Vardon gains 10 followers who were enthralled by the darksiders. On board the ship, they will seem normal and stabilized, but it is unclear if they are still affected by whatever happened on Daupherm.

Do you need any involvement of canon NPCs or faction leaders to be DMed by a staff member? If so, please detail who/what and for what purpose.
No. The thread will be self-DMed.
 

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What is going to happen in your plot?
@Vardon Galland and @Samael Aeveroth travel to investigate a dark presence on Daupherm and encounter two evil force users with numerous pawns.

What other players will be a part of this?
@samdragon

Where are all the places (if more than one) that your plot will be taking place?
Daupherm

Please provide a basic in-character timeline of what you expect to happen.
This will be a one thread plot. The thread has already started but is not finished yet.

1. Into the Abyss: @Vardon Galland and @Samael Aeveroth travel to investigate a dark presence on Daupherm and encounter two evil force users with numerous pawns. They defeat their enemies and suddenly the pawns follows them instead. The dark presence will fade from the area on Daupherm which they visited if the evil force users are defeated.

What do you or your character hope to achieve with this plot? What is the "end-game"?
Both characters hope to remove the darkness which plagues the area. Vardon gains 10 followers who were enthralled by the darksiders. On board the ship, they will seem normal and stabilized, but it is unclear if they are still affected by whatever happened on Daupherm.

Do you need any involvement of canon NPCs or faction leaders to be DMed by a staff member? If so, please detail who/what and for what purpose.
No. The thread will be self-DMed.

I see what you're going for here but couple things;

  • Getting an NPC crew isn't a tech plot if there's no tech rewarded
  • A plot MUST be more than 1 thread
Honestly if it's just to get crew for a ship you already have? Just say you got them in that thread - no plot required
 

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Oh, I see. I'm sorry for making a plot submission which went against the rules in all kinds of ways. I'll have another read through the plot rules until next time!

I'm glad about the alternate solution and will go with that. Thanks for the help!

And just to be clear: I'm abandoning the attempt of turning this thread into a plot.
 

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Oh, I see. I'm sorry for making a plot submission which went against the rules in all kinds of ways. I'll have another read through the plot rules until next time!

I'm glad about the alternate solution and will go with that. Thanks for the help!

And just to be clear: I'm abandoning the attempt of turning this thread into a plot.

Not a problem at all - have fun!
 
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