Adam Kovecs

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NAME: Adam Kovecs


FACTION: The Jedi Order
RANK: Padawan
SPECIES: Human
AGE: 19
GENDER: Male
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes, with limited training.

APPEARANCE:

He has dark brown hair, and piercing brown eyes. His skin is tanned from the sun, with freckles on his face. He is handsome, young, but with a mature way about him. He is strong, and stands tall at about 6’2”. He has a pleasant smile, and a thoughtful look to him.


ATTRIBUTES:

Adam never really worried much about his intellect, he was usually smarter than most, but not everyone. His whit is quick, but his attention spam short. He is prideful, yet kind. Sometimes his honor gets in the way of common sense. He is a decent pilot, but he’s better with a lightsaber.

He has a temper, which he tries his best to keep to himself. He is also quite strong, and fast. He is a natural leader, and usually wants things to go the way he thinks they should.


PERSONALITY:

Adam is a headstrong, young man. He has a natural gift for leadership, as the oldest of a big family. Which means he has a tough time learning to follow. He is very honorable, to the extent that it can be a detriment. He is very passionate, and adventurous at heart. He is friendly to most.

He is incredibly perceptive, but takes time to act upon it. He is brave, often willing to put aside himself for others. He can be very cocky at times, but also will have moments of humility. He tries his best to be a good man.


BIOGRAPHY:

Adam was born into a family with deep Jedi roots, with ancestry tracing back to Jedi fighting in the Sith Wars. But it has been many years since a force-sensitive child was born into the Kovecs family, which puts a lot of pressure on Adam’s shoulders. He began his training as a Jedi at an early age, leaving his family behind, with the exception of his younger brother, who works security at the Jedi Temple. He and is brother were always close, which causes Adam to question the Jedi's rules of attachment. Since his attachment to his family has been beneficial to him.
He was chosen as a padawan by a chiss woman named Kara Grenn. He admired her greatly, and tried his best to be an obedient student, although failing often. She was later killed in a scrap with thugs employed by the Black Sun, causing Adam to hold resentment towards the pirate gang. He also blames himself for her death, and looks back on his training, not thinking himself a good enough student.
In the present days, Adam finds himself masterless, looking for his place in the galaxy. He hopes to find a master to complete his training, and become a Knight of the Jedi Order.


SKILLS:

He is particular skilled with a lightsaber, having always enjoyed sparring, even when he was young. He knows his way around a ship, but is average among Jedi when it comes to piloting them. He is very knowledgeable when it comes to galactic history. He is fairly handy, as he’s always enjoyed working with his hands. He is also a fairly accomplished artist.


GEAR:

He wears a simple Jedi Tunic, with a robe. He also carries his yellow-bladed lightsaber, with a wooden hilt, fashioned from a tree on the planet Tython.



SHIP:


The Gundark. An old freighter that is neither glamorous, nor trustworthy. "She may not look like much, but she's got it where it counts, kid."


DROIDS:

He has long been friends with a small service droid, which was a gift from his family. The droid’s name is Dowes (D0-WS).

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Bishop

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Hey @Kovecs , really nice character! It seems like it's missing some details in my opinion, though. You should try and expand the biography a bit, for example. Which temple is your character's brother looking it? What is Kovec doing while he is roaming the galaxy? How does his family feel about this? Little things like that may go a long way and add that much more to your profile, which I think makes a big difference in the long run.

Of course, that's just my suggestion. I'm just chiming in my two cents. :p
 

Kovecs

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Hey @Kovecs , really nice character! It seems like it's missing some details in my opinion, though. You should try and expand the biography a bit, for example. Which temple is your character's brother looking it? What is Kovec doing while he is roaming the galaxy? How does his family feel about this? Little things like that may go a long way and add that much more to your profile, which I think makes a big difference in the long run.

Of course, that's just my suggestion. I'm just chiming in my two cents. :p
Thanks for your encouragement and advice, my friend! I changed a bit of it, added some more details, and such. I hope you enjoy :)
 

Vosrik

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Hey there! So, although everything lines up with the lore...your profile does seem to be a bit lacking in info in general. While it does pass the minimum requirements, I'd like to see the personality, background, and skills section expanded more before you're accepted. ;) What are some of his strengths and weaknesses? He's 19 now, but what were some of his experiences growing up on his homeworld and then in the Jedi Temple? Just ask yourself a few questions like these to get thinking on how to write some more backstory and flesh him out some more.
 
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