Airen Vol

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NAME: Airen Vol
FACTION: Jedi
RANK: Knight
SPECIES: Sephi
AGE: 30
GENDER: Female
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes, standard Jedi training from age six.

APPEARANCE:
Airen is five foot two inches and weighs one hundred fifteen pounds. Her skin is very pale and her eyes shine brightly in contrast to it. Airen's favorite colors are purple and green and much of the time she is seen wearing garments in these colors.


ATTRIBUTES:
Airen is very fast and very agile. She is a skilled climber and swimmer. Airen tends to be pensive and is often consumed with her thoughts to the exclusion of others. As such she doesn't have strong personal skills and is given to long periods of silence. Airen also tends to stare at people without realizing it.


Airen isn't very strong physically. She makes up for this with a strong endurance and high intelligence. However she can be impatient with tasks that bore her. She prefers to get things she doesn't enjoy done as quickly as possible. Airen can be very selfish and is very vocal about her own displeasure. This has had negative complications for her in the past.

PERSONALITY:
Airen is quiet most of the time. Even when she may have input, she won't take the initiative to speak up. She communicates with glances often. Airen believes in things such as ranks and titles and will obey people who are higher than she is. Airen comes off as anti social, but in reality she is just extremely shy and awkward. She loves everything about nature. Her favorite thing is trees and grass. She loves fresh air. Airen hates deserts and caves.

Airen doesn't like confined spaces, and can accurately be described as claustrophobic. Being confined causes her to freak out. Airen also doesn't like the dark. Even when she sleeps, she keeps the light on. Airen loves the sounds that occur in nature, but dislikes sounds of mechanical origin. She hates being inside buildings, unless they are museums, nature preserves, or other similar types of buildings.

Airen is virtuous and righteous. She believes all evil acts, regardless of scale are atrocities. She believes it is her solemn duty to defend the innocents of the galaxy against these types of acts. She is completely devoted to this belief, and will kill, or die, in it's name if absolutely necessary. That being said, she doesn't enjoy killing, and would prefer someone else do the killing. Airen hates machines, including droids and vehicles. She understands there value, but the concept of life unnaturally given disturbs her. She will go out of her way to avoid droids, as if she were scarred of them.

BIOGRAPHY:

From the time she could walk, Airen loved the outdoors. Her parents and village were constantly in a state of panic on her account. She would frequently run off into the woods and get lost. In her first four years of life, the people of her village must have searched for her at least a hundred times. When she was five, the Jedi came to her village to test the children.

The Sephi had a long tradition of friendship with the Jedi, and it was considered a most high honor among her people to be chosen to serve. So, when the Jedi came and detected the midichlorians within her and offered her a chance to see new worlds and new life while carrying their banner, she was too excited to speak.

Eventually she calmed down and accepted the offer. Life for Airen with the Jedi wasn't easy. In her early years she lacked control and wasn't skilled in combat. No Master would take her. Thinking the order might not be the right fit for Airen, they began to have her train with blaster weaponry. Airen hated this. She hated the sound of the blasters. Her discomfort with the weapons motivated her to train harder with light sabers and her Force powers.

Finally, after seven long years of training, she learned to control her bond with the Force. She continued lacking greatly in saber skills, so they kept making her train with blasters. A Master caught notice of Airen one morning. He had been overseeing the training of the Republic army. Airen had woke up in a bad mood that day, and her frusturation came to a head she she stood up and screamed unintentionally releasing a powerful burst of air. Though, it was accidental the first time, she was able to produce the same result when asked to.

She trained with that Master for another eight years, further deepening her connection to the Force. She also managed to become an expert in one form of saber combat, and moderately skilled in another, though the road to that point was full of frustration and challenges. Her Master instilled in her the righteous values and determination to succeed she has today.

Airen was promoted to Knight at the age of twenty. Shortly after the ceremony, her Master retired from the order and went to live a quiet life. He told her that he hadn't quite decided where he would settle, but he would get in touch when he did. Airen hasn't heard from him since then.

DURING THE TIMESKIP:
Airen watched with the rest of the Jedi as their hold on the galaxy weakened. Entire systems surrendered to the unflinching might of the sith. The Jedi had tried to kill them all. The problem with Sith was that if you killed one, another took his place. They were too widespread to kill all of them. Though the Jedi and resistant people of the galaxy had scored several major blows.

The hope among the Jedi was that the organization's rapid expansion was merely meant to cover the fact that they were wounded grievously. Airen held her faith in the Jedi and the Jedi mission. She knew in the end they would bring peace upon the galaxy.

When she wasn't discussing the state of affairs with other knights or listening to some Master speak, she spent her time training he fire arm skills as well as her light saber skills. She didn't become any better, but she didn't get any worse either. She also spent a lot of time strengthening her connection to the force and to natural elements.

She is now capable of creating a strong air current in front of her which is capable of blocking a single hit from any weapon which employs kinetic energy. It won't save her from blaster bolts, light sabers, or electro blades. She has also strengthen her ability to control plant life. She can cause vines, plants, exposed tree roots, bushes, and small tree branches to reach out and either obstruct or ensnare her enemies.

SKILLS:
Airen is an expert in Soresu and is skilled in Ataru. She also has a vast knowledge regarding the operation of fire arms. She favors the XPC and the Sunspear for their ability to end conflicts quickly, without necessarily being deadly. Often, she will attempt to use these weapons before using her lightsaber.

Airen is very agile, very fast, and a great climber. She also has a high level of endurance. Airen can use the Force to manipulate the air around her in various ways. She also has telekinetic abilities and can move objects several times her own weight with ease. Airen can use the force to form friendships animals and she can draw on it to heal minor wounds. Airen can also use the force to control vines to ensnare unsuspecting opponents.


GEAR:
Airen carries an XPC, a Sunspear, and a green lightsaber that has a tree carved into the hilt below the activator. She wears purple and green attire, ranging from dresses to blouses and skin tight pants to tanktops and baggy shorts. In battle she wears a customized suit of Modular Jedi Armor that has been colored purple with trees and various animals in green. She also wears a Nomex cloak around her head and down her back which protects her from fire.

Airen flies a Republic Consul Star Yacht. It is named Seeker of the Enlightened Way.
She flies it mainly for Jedi fire support and rescue missions, as well as to transport Jedi agents safely.


ROLE-PLAYS:
Missions:
Nests and Pests (http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/jedi-mission-nests-and-pests.72890/) complete
Other players: @Fyston @Bastilo Marshall
I and my fellow Jedi convince a group of lizard men to protect a long lost Jedi temple.

Social:
May it Be (http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/may-it-be.72957/#post-1350224) complete
Other players: @Vosrik
Airen intends to loaf around on some uninhabited beautiful planet. The planet happens to be close to sith space. Happily, her old master finds her instead of some slimy sith. The two reconnect and it's a happy day until they are forced to part ways and return to the Jedi temple.

Combat:
N/A

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RELATIONSHIPS:
Airen's parents are Aira, and Barcus Vol. To the best of her knowledge, they really main on her homeworld of Thustra. Her only other personal friend was her former Master whom retired from the Jedi Order after promoting her to Knight.

PETS:
N/A
KILLS:
N/A
COMBAT:
N/A
 
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@Vinn Esper, I will look at this while I am eating lunch today. Should have some comments for you by the afternoon.
 

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I have had the chance to read of this, I only have a handful of comments. First, I would delete the empty sections (ships, droid, pets, kills, combat). Until you have information to put there you don't really need them. Secondly, there needs to be some expansion on the "controlled power" she in capable of "unleashing." That is some pretty strong language but very ambiguous on what it actually means. A description on what it is and how she came to be able to wield the Force so effectively is important.

Thirdly, if she dislikes unnatural things so much why is she so proficient with blaster rifles? There is nothing to indicate her training other than her "vast knowledge" of firearms. That will need some additional explanation as well. Lastly, and most importantly, this line "She believes all evil acts, and the people who commit them should be punished by death regardless of the act." No Jedi should ever hold firmly to such a tenant. We are making a concerted effort to get away from statements like that. That will need to be changed or taken out. Tag me when the edits have been made.

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Secondly, there needs to be some expansion on the "controlled power" she in capable of "unleashing." That is some pretty strong language but very ambiguous on what it actually means. A description on what it is and how she came to be able to wield the power.

Finally, after seven long years of training, she learned to control her bond with the Force. While still lacking greatly in saber skills, the controlled power she was now capable of unleashing attracted the attention of a Master who took her on.

She also has telekinetic abilities and can move objects several times her own weight with ease. Airen can use the force to form friendships animals and she can draw on it to heal minor wounds. Airen can also use the force to control vines to ensnare unsuspecting opponents.

Not sure if you missed this or if you're saying it isn't sufficient. Other edits will be made.
 

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I thoroughly read the profile, I am saying what is descried needs further detail in the biography section. @Vinn Esper
 

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Changed evil acts... to She believes all evil acts, regardless of scale are atrocities. She believes it is her solemn duty to defend the innocents of the galaxy against these types of acts. She is completely devoted to this belief, and will kill, or die, in it's name if absolutely necessary.

Removed unneeded empty sections and condensed profile. Empty sections I may fill later are still included.

Also, went ahead and changed "controlled power" and explained it better.

Added stuff about blasters.
 

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Yeah, she's cool, but can she live up to the heroic cactus that came before her?
 

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@Vinn Esper,

You don't have to resign up. I'll take a look at the profile but as long as the changes are in line with what was previously approved we should be all OK. We likely will not be going through all of the updated profiles.
 

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Edited for freighter.

Is it cliche enough Valen?
 
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