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NAME: Akiva Raynar
FACTION: New Jedi Order
RANK: Padawan (training to be a Jedi Guardian)
SPECIES: Human
AGE: 22
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 6 feet tall
WEIGHT: 185
EYES: Blue
HAIR: Light Brown
SKIN: Caucasian
CREDITS: 1,000 credits
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: None
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes

STRENGTH: 7: He is just above average strength for someone his height, weight due to the training he's received over the years.
DEXTERITY: 8: Through all of his training, he's is faster than the average person his size and weight and is fairly nimble.
CONSTITUTION: 7: He's in decent health from his training and lifestyle.
INTELLIGENCE: 6: He reads a lot and has the ability to learn new things at fast pace but is still learning.
WISDOM: 8: He has decent wisdom from the life he's led and the training he's received.
CHARISMA: 7: He is good natured and can be charming at times. His overall morales are good.

FORCE POWERS:
Control Abilities: Art of Movement, Breath Control, Center of Being, Force Speed
Sense Abilities: Force Sense, Force Sight, Telepathy
Alter Abilities: Animal Friendship, Force Jump, Telekinesis, Force Pull/Push, Force Persuasion, Mind Trick

SKILLS:
Decent piloting skills. Hand-to-hand combat. Has some diplomacy skills. He's also a decent tracker and good at solving mysteries.

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
As a Youngling and Padawan, Akiva learned and became an expert at the Shii-Cho form. His first master had started teaching Akiva the Niman form but was killed before he could really teach him anything more than the basics.

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
He has solid resolve and dedication to the ways of the Jedi. He's loyal to a fault will stop at nothing to help out a friend. The current state of the Jedi has conflicted Akiva's resolve but is determined to continue be an example of the ideals of the Jedi.

GEAR:
Akiva wears the traditional brown robes of the Jedi. He has a lightsaber that he constructed as a youngling. It contains a blue crystal and the hilt design was something that Akiva made using his subconscious and the force in order to create something that would naturally be an extension of himself. He carries a communicator for sending and and receiving messages.
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FORMER MASTER: Yuriko Hattori
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SHIP:
None.

DROIDS:
None

PETS:
None

PERSONALITY:
Akra is a personable, honest and caring person. All he know and all he remembers is of his life at the Jedi Temple. There are times where he wonders what his life would have been like with his family but only in dreams and very rarely. Being raised among the Jedi, Akira had developed a sense of right and wrong and the persistence to see that justice prevails. He has a sense of humor and can take a joke. He's loyal to his friends would do just about anything to keep them safe. He believes in the Jedi code and strives to live his life by it.

BIOGRAPHY:
Akira doesn't have many memories of his parents. What he does remember is mostly what they look like and what he's been told. While he knows is that his father was an untrained force wielder who got by as a smuggler and was killed protecting his son, not much was known about his mother other than what she looked like. What was unknown to Akiva was that his mother was a Sith and in fact, it was she who killed Akiva's father in an attempt to kill their son. She would have succeeded in it as well if it hadn't been for the interference of the Jedi. When the Jedi discovered that the baby had midichlorians within him, they brought him back to the Jedi Temple to start his training in the ways of the force.

Life at the Jedi Temple was good. Akira found it serene and comforting. It was for all intent purposes, home to him. The only home he had ever known and for whatever reason, Akira seemed to thrive in the atmosphere. He took to his studies and learned the ways of the force along with the other younglings in his group and was considered a good student of the living force.. When it was time and Akira was ready, he went out with a small group to participate in the Gathering where a youngling learns to construct his or her own lightsaber. Using his abilities and centering himself in the force, Akiva did well and found a crystal that spoke to him and at once Akiva realized that this was the crystal that would be part of his lightsaber. Once Akiva found the parts, he created a hilt . When Akiva ignited it for the first time, he realized that he had a blue lightsaber blade. Akiva continued on with his training as a youngling until the age of 9 when he was selected by Master Yuriko Hattori to become her Padawan.

Akira learned much from Master Hattori. Over the next three years Akiva accompanied his master on various missions. Some were diplomatic but more were missions of action. Everything from hostage situations, kidnappings and other situations that require the need of a Jedi Guardian. With each mission and the passing of years, Akira and his master became intertwined as master and apprentice. Akira learned from his master and the ways of a Jedi Guardian. The lessons came slowly in order to grasp the concept of each lesson so it would never be forgotten. Master Hattori even began to teach Akira the Niman form but then came the Battle of Coruscant.

The battle caught everyone off guard and even though Master Hattori and Akiva fought bravely, Akiva's master knew before long that the battle was lost. Although she did not realize the extent of realization to it was too late. Faced with a tough decision, Yuirko Hattori instructed Akiva to get a group of younglins to safety knowing that it would be the last time master and student would see each other again. Before they departed to their fates, Yurkio made Akiva promise that he would complete his training in order to become a Jedi Knight. Then Master Yurkio Hattori led a group of Padawans into battle for the last time.

After the Battle of Coruscant, between the survivor's guilt he was feeling and the in-fighting between the Jedi made Akiva's resolve falter a bit. However, Akiva's faith in the force never faltered and once the Jedi Order seemed stable again, Akiva began training though he mostly took to old holocrons for his training. While these lessons did Akiva well, he soon realized that he needed connection with real people and not just ghosts from the past. His determination to complete his training and become a Jedi Knight had begun anew.


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ROLE-PLAYS:
Honorary Bruising (PvP Class)
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/...rary-Bruising-PvP-Class&p=1046499#post1046499

The First or the Last
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/...st-or-the-Last&p=1048161&posted=1#post1048161

The Mask of the Jedi
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/showthread.php?52025-The-Mask-of-the-Jedi&p=1050733#post1050733

Relaxing in the Branches
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/showthread.php?52268-Relaxing-in-the-branches-Social
 
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Every new character has to start at the lowest rank, unless permission is given, of course
 

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FACTION: New Jedi Order
RANK: Jedi Knight (Jedi Guardian)

I hate to be the one to do this, but you need to talk to Gaba for permission to have your first Jedi character as a Knight. Unless you have been given permission, you have to start as a Padawan.

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I hate to be the one to do this, but you need to talk to Gaba for permission to have your first Jedi character as a Knight. Unless you have been given permission, you have to start as a Padawan.

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Exactly my point
 

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I changed rank to Padawan. I honestly I thought I had done so before I posted it. When I originally made it, I had made him a Jedi Knight but since talking to GABBA, I had meant to change it to Padawan and simply forgot to do so. As for the Bounties, I put that there when I was coming up with names for my character's first master and I put it in that spot to see what I thought. I just forgot to delete it from that area. Whoops. Let me know what people think with the changes. Thanks.
 

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Some of those powers seem a little... advanced, for a Padawan. Other than that, he seems very good!
 

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I'm not sure what abilities in particular would be considered too powerful. My character's parents are both force sensitive characters. My character has been a youngling from birth to about 14. He's been a Padawan from age 14 to present. He has Padawan training but he has not graduated to Jedi Knight.
 

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Does he have a relative named Miyamoto?

Nope. I just decided to make a Jedi using two names from history. Musashi is obviously a great samurai warrior while Akiva is a Jewish name which means to protect or to shelter. There was a great Rabbi in Jewish history with the name Akiva. That's where my character's name comes from.
 

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I'm not sure what abilities in particular would be considered too powerful. My character's parents are both force sensitive characters. My character has been a youngling from birth to about 14. He's been a Padawan from age 14 to present. He has Padawan training but he has not graduated to Jedi Knight.

The powers you have now are quite reasonable, as long as you keep in mind that he's a Paddie.

Solid first character. Also enjoying the name.
 

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Thanks. Technically, this is my second character. I had another character where the first story I did fizzled and I lost interest for a time but I just finished Kenobi and re-watched the prequels and I'm just interested in doing a Jedi character. I'm glad you like the name. Took me a little while to get both names but I think the name sounds pretty cool. Thanks for the feedback.
 

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Every new character has to start at the lowest rank, unless permission is given, of course
you're very new to the site. I'd calm down with the bossy responses to profiles until you've been here a bit longer.
 

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Made a few more edits to his backstory and added a picture of his former master.
 
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