Aldracu Kanurn

AldracuKanurn

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NAME: Aldracu Kanurn
FACTION:
RANK:
SPECIES: Human
AGE: 24
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: just under 6ft
WEIGHT: 14stone
EYES: One red, one Blue
HAIR: Very dark brown
SKIN: white, slightly tanned
CREDITS: 1000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: His eyes
DOMINATE HAND: Righ handed
FORCE SENSITIVE: Very

STRENGTH: Quite strong but not that musculer
DESTERITY: Very nimble doesnt tier very easily
CONSTITUTION: Quite healthy has no illness
INTELLIGENCE: Quite knowledgable
WISDOM: He understands most like others but he knows mostly of the Force
CHARISMA: Most take kindly of him at first

FORCE POWERS: Force Push, Pull, Slight Force heal (minor cuts and bruises)
SKILLS: Very quick and deceitful when need be. Has the ability to tell how the Force will react to an action (understands if someones death would be noticed) and can see wether a Force sensitive person is tainted by the Darkside or the Light side

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS: Initiate of Juyo

STRENGTHS:With the ability of "seeing" the Force and determening a threat or friend, it is very heard for someone to sneak up or get too close unnoticed

WEAKNESSES:Talk of his Red eye or poor backround will make him very angry. is very trustworthy of people. Even when he senses the darkside he will not act instantly, but he will wait and see how everything works out. Also he can be Very emotional when speaking of things somewhat connecting with his extra "sight".


GEAR: A small crystal past down from father to son for generations
SHIP:
PETS:

PERSONALITY:

Aldracu always wishes to do what is right for his friends, no matter where their from or where they stand in the Force he will fight to protect them, no matter the cost. It is because of this nature, that some befriend him quite easily. Although he can be quite populer at times, Aldracu dislikes getting straight to the point and sometimes wastes time to see what unfolds.

Because of this, in battle, Aldracu taunts and angers his opponents untill they cannot think straight. Mainly because he understands that even the darkest of creatures cannot think through the blury clouds of rage.

HISTORY:

Known to be born on the Scumholes of Abregado Rae , Aldracu was no different to other young Slaves except for the fact he claimed to see ghosts and feel the emotions of those around him. All the other Slaves thought of him as an outcast and disliked the way, they thought, he lied about everything he can see.

at the age of 15 Aldracu escaped from his master and wonderd the planets surfice, moving from Town to Town, eventuly he came across a small space port. After working for two years to save enough money, he left for the planet of coruscant when he arrived he had but one thing on his kind, he wanted to learn about Jedis, the epic warriors he had heard tales of when he was a small child. So after a week of settiling in to the huge strange cities of coruscant he went to the see the Jedi Archives. At the Archives he met a Jedi knight, who he spoke to for quite some time, learning about the history of the Jedi. Eventully after learning somewhat of the Force and what it can do Aldracu explained about his childhood and the figures he saw and the things he felt. After hearing this the Jedi took him to the council where they found him quite strange. Mainly because of being able to see beings who are one with the Force at such a young age, but also because his Midi-chlorians were higher than average.

So after some discussion and alot of arguing the Council finally aloud Aldracu to be trained. After 6 years of being taught combat and the initiate stages of Juyo he began his journey.

KILLS:

DUELING RING MATCHES:

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:

ROLE-PLAYS:http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/showthread.php?t=9464&page=4
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/showthread.php?p=223232#post223232

((if you find any spelling errors please tell me, i do understand that i am not a great speller, so give me a chance to change whats needed))
 
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Not bad for a first post, noticed a few spelling errors, also Vaapad hasn't been developed yet, we're in a different time a few thousand years before the battle of Yavin. Other than that looks pretty good.
 

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Vaapad does not exist. Form VII is Juyo. Mace Windu created Vaapad.
Tatooine has not been discovered yet.
The Sith(species) has not been discovered yet. The Sith Order has not been formed yet.
What do you mean by "being able to see beings who are one with the Force"?
I don't think the Jedi will just send a padawan out on his own with no master...and to get to Knight level you'll need some in-RP training.
There's also a quite a few minor grammar points...but they are minor

It's not bad though, welcome to the RP.
 

AldracuKanurn

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sorry i dont really understand the Star wars time zones yet
 

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ok ill edit it all to what it should be. but anyway, atleast im not gonna miss the Sith wars :CHappy:
 

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ok ill edit it all to what it should be. but anyway, atleast im not gonna miss the Sith wars :CHappy:
:COkay:
actually you kinda did lmao that was our last time zone we were in, we jumped backwards a bit...
 

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dimmit lol, well as soon as i understand the time zones all be fine:CDumb:
 

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dimmit lol, well as soon as i understand the time zones all be fine:CDumb:

And don't worry...there will be a Dark jedi faction soon...when an unknown traitor(I have an inkling who it may be...) leads them across from the Jedi.
 
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