Alexus Oman

[Lexi-Oi]

FULL NAME: Alexus Tandor Oman
FACTION:Jedi Oder
RANK: Padawan
SPECIES:Human
AGE:13
GENDER:Female
HEIGHT:5"5'
WEIGHT:95lbs
EYES:Purple
HAIR:Auburn
SKIN:Tan
CREDITS:1,000 Credits
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Scar under eye, got it because of debris while escaping burning home. Also has a huge birthmark on her shoulder that faintly looks like the shape of a flame.
FORCE SENSITIVE:Yes

STRENGTH:4/10
DEXTERITY:8/10
CONSTITUTION:5/10
INTELLIGENCE:8/10
WISDOM:6/10
CHARISMA:2/10

PERSONALITY:
Alexus was always a shy person from the time she was born. She isn't very outgoing and prefers staying in small quiet place in her free time. Because of her lack of charisma, she has had few friends and since her family was in extreme poverty, she did not go to school. Though in spite of her shy personality, Alexus is amazingly intelligent. Extreme poverty did not do to well for her health.

BIOGRAPHY:
She was born on the planet of Tatooine, to a very poor family. Her family was a small family, 1 girl and 1 boy, Alexus, and her mom and dad. Unfortunately, her mother, who had had twins previously, died during childbirth. Alexus's father tried his best to uphold three kids on his own, and did an amazing job with two 5 year olds and an infant. But sadly, by the time Alexus was 10, her brother and sister 15, their father died because of a terrible sickness. And shortly after, the cozy hut that Alexus and her siblings lived in mysteriously caught on fire. While Alexus made it out, her twin siblings were not as lucky. This is where she got the scar on her face, racing out through debris of the collapsing hut. She still mourns the death of her twin siblings.

Not to long ago, she started to see visions of various things, and that is when a Jedi Master came looking for her because he had seen a vision about a little girl, sitting by herself.

FORCE POWERS:
Force Pull/Push
Force Leap
Force Speed (run)

SKILLS:

• Good with mechanics
• Very fast without even using her powers of speed
• Learning

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
Shii-Cho (basic form)

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:

Strengths:
Very high stamina
Always fit
Weaknesses:
Frail, will get pushed around emotionally
Afraid of fire

GEAR:
Always carries Lightsaber
Has emergency blaster under cloak

 

[Saul]

That backstory though.

This is pretty good for your first shot at developing a profile, you did a great job not over-reaching and leaving a lot of potential for character growth. She's pretty tall for a 13 year old, but hey everyone's different, and girls grow earlier than guys. Also, this character is ready to go now, and also equally ready for the next timeline, I don't see any major changes needed. One thing to note is that the birthday isn't necessary to put down; I think Star Wars uses a 10 month calendar broken down into 1 year = 10 months, 1 month = 35 days = 7 weeks. Add in 3 "festival weeks" and "3 holidays" because whoever wrote that book (Karen Traviss I think) can't do algebra and got lazy, and you have a really weird calendar.

 

[Lexi-Oi]

That backstory though.

This is pretty good for your first shot at developing a profile, you did a great job not over-reaching and leaving a lot of potential for character growth. She's pretty tall for a 13 year old, but hey everyone's different, and girls grow earlier than guys. Also, this character is ready to go now, and also equally ready for the next timeline, I don't see any major changes needed. One thing to note is that the birthday isn't necessary to put down; I think Star Wars uses a 10 month calendar broken down into 1 year = 10 months, 1 month = 35 days = 7 weeks. Add in 3 "festival weeks" and "3 holidays" because whoever wrote that book (Karen Traviss I think) can't do algebra and got lazy, and you have a really weird calendar.

Well yeah I was trying to make someone with a dark backstory to be a great jedi. She's still a work in progress. Though, when I was thirteen I was around 5"6' or 5"7'. But it's ok thank you for the feedback!:);):D

 

[Richie B.]

@Lexi-Oi Just to let you know Coruscant is well in ruins because the Sith empress was having a bad day, just so you know

 

[Lexi-Oi]

@Lexi-Oi Just to let you know Coruscant is well in ruins because the Sith empress was having a bad day, just so you know

whoops. could she still be born in the ruins?

 

[Lexi-Oi]

@Lexi-Oi Just to let you know Coruscant is well in ruins because the Sith empress was having a bad day, just so you know

She will just come from tatooine

 

[Richie B.]

@Lexi-Oi Yea sorry about that

 

[Lexi-Oi]

@Lexi-Oi Yea sorry about that

It's ok I'll find a cooler place for her to come from actually

 

[Saul]

It's ok I'll find a cooler place for her to come from actually

Pssssstttt..... Hapes.... doooo it.

 

[Lexi-Oi]

Well, she's going to be from Tatooine. maybe ill make another character that's from there.

 

[Ral]

80 pounds at 5'5 seems hilariously skinny to me. Like her strength and constitution should be lower if she's that skinny. Personally, I'd up her weight to just below 100 or snub her height a little. Other than that, it's pretty much what Saul said. Everything looks good and can be used for this TL or the next one.

 

[Saul]

80 pounds at 5'5 seems hilariously skinny to me. Like her strength and constitution should be lower if she's that skinny. Personally, I'd up her weight to just below 100 or snub her height a little. Other than that, it's pretty much what Saul said. Everything looks good and can be used for this TL or the next one.

At 13, the average height is 5'2" and 102 lbs. Of course these are American stats with the current fat kid phenomenon of let's stuff everyones face with pizza because the government thinks it's a vegetable, and let's coddle fat kids and make them think obesity isn't bad. Also, the government says the average weight of an 18 year old girl is 123 lbs., so I call shenanigans, my girlfriend squats and deadlifts and what not 4 times a week, does a sport, and eats regularly and can't get past 120. So it's all relative, but 80 is definitely light for 5'5" at 13 no matter what way you cut the cake.

 

[Derek Jarah]

Yeah i don't really understand the American Stats of fat people since im Aussie (Yah mate) oh well i guess it your choice i have no judgement what you have to do or say have fun Role playing....I saw you there at the partay...in a RP not being creepy or any type of shoit like that... (DIE IMPERIAL SCUMS!!!)

 

[Lexi-Oi]

LOL Yes. That party where I kick butt!
I'm trying to show her extremeness when it comes to weight.

DID THIS POST WHILE LISTENING TO THE CREDITS MUSIC OF STAR WARS...

 

[Derek Jarah]

True..

 

[Rae Anne Jarrus]

At 13, the average height is 5'2" and 102 lbs. Of course these are American stats with the current fat kid phenomenon of let's stuff everyones face with pizza because the government thinks it's a vegetable, and let's coddle fat kids and make them think obesity isn't bad. Also, the government says the average weight of an 18 year old girl is 123 lbs., so I call shenanigans, my girlfriend squats and deadlifts and what not 4 times a week, does a sport, and eats regularly and can't get past 120. So it's all relative, but 80 is definitely light for 5'5" at 13 no matter what way you cut the cake.

Thank you!!! Someone finally agrees with me!!

 

[Mr.BossMan]

@Saul

#LordHaveMercy

Lol!!!!!!

 

[Ral]

At 13, the average height is 5'2" and 102 lbs. Of course these are American stats with the current fat kid phenomenon of let's stuff everyones face with pizza because the government thinks it's a vegetable, and let's coddle fat kids and make them think obesity isn't bad. Also, the government says the average weight of an 18 year old girl is 123 lbs., so I call shenanigans, my girlfriend squats and deadlifts and what not 4 times a week, does a sport, and eats regularly and can't get past 120. So it's all relative, but 80 is definitely light for 5'5" at 13 no matter what way you cut the cake.

I mean, my sister is 5'4" and barely over 100 pounds and is very petite and dainty. Like she gets blown over by the wind. Hahaha. So YMMV

 

[Rae Anne Jarrus]

lol the wind almost blew me over yesterday. So we must be about the same size. lol

 

[Mr.BossMan]

I mean 5'5 and 95 pounds is okay. But in your Bio you did say she was Very poor. Or her family was very poor, so maybe she is extremely skinny, maybe she didnt eat well at all.

Maybe, just maybe, she burnt down her house with her siblings still inside, so she could finally eat well.

Sith perhaps?????