Alphonse (WIP)

[ShadowWalker]

NAME: Alphonse Elric
FACTION: Mandalorians
RANK: Soldier
SPECIES: Human
AGE: 25
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 7 ft tall (2.1 meters)
WEIGHT: 300 lbs
EYES: Brown
HAIR: Brown
SKIN: Tan
CREDITS: None
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Scar running up and down left side of his face, several scars from stab wounds or blaster and slug throwers across chest and back
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes (Is quite unaware of it)

STRENGTH: 10 out of 10. Alphonse is the kind of soldier you send in to break down walls. He's physically strong and powerful enough to hit just as hard if not harder than anyone out there.
DEXTERITY: 7 out of 10. A decent marksman, he can fight well on the battlefield and is better than your average marksman, also is quite confident in his use of blades.
CONSTITUTION: 9 out of 10. A walking Titan, Alphonse can take a serious beating and just keep going. His one track mind keeps him focused, and he is very hard to kill.
INTELLIGENCE: 4 out of 10. Not the brightest person outside of combat. Alphonse knows his tactics, and a bit about field repair and triage, but other then that, is not the brightest person. (Skills in math, mechanics, and medical).
WISDOM: 3 out of 10. Alphonse is most definitely not the wisest of people. He tries not to think much at all, instead preferring to follow orders, and do as he is told. He will do whatever it takes to get said job done.
CHARISMA: 6 out of 10. Alphonse is a good speaker, but he only speaks in short concise sentences which will bring his meaning across. Rarely will he ever talk more than is needed. Even rarer is when he decides to motivate people with his speaking.

FORCE POWERS:
None

SKILLS:
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STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
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GEAR:
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SHIP:
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DROIDS:
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PETS:
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PERSONALITY:
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KILLS:
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[Joy Carleec]

10/10 str, because nobody but him wrestles krayt dragons to the floor.

 

[Latte]

You have absolutely no biography or personality, which both have a requirement of at least 50 words each upon posting. Consider using Microsoft Word, Google Drive (free), the blog feature here, or another word processor to save your profiles in the future.

His dexterity really wouldn't be that high considering his strength is at maximum, so I would suggest lowering one or both to a more reasonable level, since if he's really muscular, he probably won't be nimble, and vice versa.

Also, the Mandalorians are in hiding as of right now and quite scattered, so you might want to talk to one of the leaders of the underground or another (older) member playing a Mandalorian character to check over the history. Also, what is your reasoning for him being Force sensitive? If you have a really cool plot reason for his story arc, then more power to you, but it can end up really cliché.

I'd also highly recommend reading over the forum history to brush up on everything, and reading up on the rules again.

ETA: Edited, thought you were a newer member.

 

[KrakenDaWhip]

PERSONALITY:
This section requires a minimum of 50 words upon the posting of the profile, even if the profile is a work in progress.

BIOGRAPHY:
IThis section requires a minimum of 50 words upon the posting of the profile, even if the profile is a work in progress.

It literally says it in the character template. I believe you can use blogs to post WIP characters for feed back, but not here.

 

[Silverface]

On hand if you need help with this mate.

 

[Padmé]

Lock.

@OP, PM me when when you have the proper CP write up.