Areiana "Areia" Slayer

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Areiana Slayer

AGE

► 21
SPECIES
► Human
HEIGHT
► 5'11'
WEIGHT
► 180 pounds
EYE COLOR
► Right Eye is Jade Green, Left is Blue
HAIR COLOR
► Waist long Red Hair
HOMEWORLD
► Unknown
GENDER
► Female
SEXUALITY
►bisexual
MARITAL STATUS
►Single
FACTION
►Smuggler/Padawan Learner
RANK
►Padawan Learner
FORCE SENSITIVITY
►Yes
FORCE ALIGNMENT
►Light
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Father: Nembus Slayer [Deceased]

Mother: Gleopla Slayer [deceased]

Siblings: None that she knows of

Spouse: N/A

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Nicknamed the Pirate Jedi by those who have seen her use the Force. She most the time seenin boots tight pants a cut off shirt , vest and belts making her look like a pirate, or a black or brown corset and black pants. Most the time people dont see what she looks like because she wares a robe when she's out in public because she doesn't want people to know what she looks like.

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    • Educated: Areia is a Seeker of Knowledge, having spent much of her free time studying not only the Force and many other aspects of the Jedi Path but different languages and ways of life. She loves to learn to learn new things. She has the gift of picking up on new things quickly and remembering things making it easy to learn new things. Altho she has no formal education her father taught her about many things more than just the force such as how to repair ships, navigation, piloting even negotiate and fighting.
    • Highly Intelligent : Knows and is fluent in many languages. Understands business logistics and practices diplomacy artfully As well as such thing as repairing droids and ships, stealth skills and Piloting
    • Honorable: If She makes a promise she never breaks it. Tho she’s a smuggler and sometimes a pirate she won’t harm you unless she has no choose. She shy away from using dirty tactics. She was raised following the Jedi code and she believes in doing her best to follow them when she can. She understands in her line of work a few of the codes can’t be followed but the underline way of the Jedi she follows
    • lightsaber Combat: Atho she chooses to hide that she can use the force she is well trained in using a Lightsaber. Her father taught her well in all ways of the force. He had her using a lightsaber at a young age. She carries her father's lightsaber and trains regularly with it.
    • Strong willed
    • Weaponist and Technology: she loves her toys and knows how to use them.
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    • Untrusting: She does not trust strangers. She also does not trust others in deals and watches their actions warily for the first sign of reneging on a contract.
    • Sarcastic. If she sees a chance to be sarcastic she will be. It's been known to get her into trouble sometimes.
    • paranoid: there is a bounty on her head from the same group that killed her father. She is paranoid that they will find her fueling her untrusting people.
    • Short-tempered;


PERSONALITY:
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Her weakness pretty much tells her story. Because of the death of her father and the group that killed them hunting her she’s paranoid and fearful of people. She has a short temper and tho she doesn’t like to fight piss her off enough or corner her and she will fight tooth and nail. At the same time there’s a kindness about her that is hidden well under the sarcastic and fear. She had to grow up way too fast and it shows in her sometimes.


Don’t mistake her kindness for weakness tho. She may have honor but she will not put up with being made a fool of in any way. She may not kill you but she will make you suffer. She has gotten really good at “Disappearing” when the time is right. You may not even know that she’s standing right behind you.

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Tactus Otium: ||| ||| ||| |||

Commonly referred to as Force Sense, the ability to see much farther than one's eyes can travel; Tactus Otium is the answer to the question: How are Jedi able to react fast enough to evade and counter blaster fire; providing a vivid sense of the situation unfolding around those capable of applying this skill in their chosen field.


Altus Sopor: ||| ||| ||| |||

A basic component in the use of most Core Force Powers, this is the means to amplify ones focus in the force itself, strengthening what potential you might naturally have in order to delve deeper and produce a superior effect of the desired ability. Those of great skill in Altus Sopor can cloud their presence from other force users completely by melding their presence in among the natural flow of the force itself.


Curato Salva: ||| ||| ||| |||

An umbrella title to the force abilities focused on self healing and rejuvenation of the natural body. Stamina and lost strength can be regained by drawing the force into one's center, healing significant injuries and sustaining one's life in the field of combat given enough time to focus.


Tutaminis: ||| ||| ||| |||

Relating to the ability to absorb energies both natural and otherwise, this branch of the Force has been known to be applied both offensively and defensively. For an example, the ability to lessen the blow of a blaster shot to the side through great focus in extending the force from within to create a small barrier around one's exterior (some call this force: Protect).


Telekinesis: ||| ||| ||| |||

Referred to some as Force Push and Force Pull, telekinesis consists of two branches of the ability. Sustained Telekinesis where an object or person is held in place for a period of time, and then Burst Telekinesis in which something or someone is thrown backwards or pulled in towards the user.


Telepathy: ||| ||| ||| |||

Consisting of more than just communication from one mind to another, Telepathy is the umbrella term for the ability to affect a person’s mind on the whole. Whether convincing others to do something they normally wouldn't (mind trick), or otherwise projecting images, memories or words into the consciousness of the target. The effect of Telepathy varies dependent on the mental strength of the foe.


Force Light: ||| ||| ||| |||

The ability to harness the strength and purity of the lightside of the force in order to combat and eradicate the presence of dark side apparitions and counter the effects of their users. This ability is said to be able to disconnect those of the dark from their affinity in the force, if only to temporarily disable them from further conflict.

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To know her story you have to know her parents story, her father was a Jedi Knight who gave up his life as a Jedi after a mission to a planet in wild space where he met Areiana Mother, fall in love and soon they were expecting. Then things become tragic when Areia mother died during childbirth and unable to go back to the jedi and leave his child behind or stay on the planet he took his daughter and became a smuggler.


At least that is what he told her but the truth was a little darker. Areia parents did indeed fall in love and get married. Her mother was a queen of a planet that produced a large number of force sensitive people. Her father came to the planet to find out why the planet had so many force sensitive people and recruit for the academy. He meet Gleopla and it was love at first sight. He chose to stay there with her and not return to the Jedi temple. Tho the two could not marry because of the laws of her planet, she soon was with child. He knew that the people of the planet followed the darkside of the force, but he felt he could change the queen's mind and change the way the people say the force and he thought she had changed for him.

It wasn’t until after Areia birth did he learn the truth. She hadn’t changed, she was planning to not only cont her dark ways but teach their daughter in the ways of the dark side. Fearing for his child, he stole child in the night and escaped the planet on his ship the “Golden Dragon”


Unable to return the Jedi and not able to return to the planet or his wife he decide to become a smuggler. He raised his daughter in the light teaching her in everything he knew both in the force and the way of life. She was a fast learning and picked up on new things quickly. He taught her how to hide her force powers from the world and other force sensitive

When she was 16 she had just returned from a planet on a delivery and they were about to leave when several strange ships appeared from nowhere and attacked them disabled their ship. He quickly hid his daughter in one of the smuggler’s hold in the wall. She could see through a crack in the wall and watched as several hooded figure boarded the ship. They spoke in a strange language that her father seemed to understand. The one that seems to be in charged hugged her father and there was a flash of light through his chest as the figure stabbed him through the chest with his lightsaber. Areia had to put her hands over her mouth to keep from screaming and giving away where she was.

They left him bleeding on the floor as they tore the ship apart looking for something. When they couldn’t find it, they left the ship adrift. Areia held her father as he died in her arms.
After his death Areia decide to continue his work as a smuggler even tho she had finished her training as a Jedi.


WEAPONS:
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► The Old saber has a few dents and scraps on it. It had belonged to her father and she kept it after his death. The purple bladed saber was made to look like old japanese Kitana sword. It and the ship is all she has left of her father.

SHIP
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► Originally known as YT-1656 89546ZED, was a Corellian YT-1300f light freighter used by her father to smuggle good and tho its a older model its been heavly modified to keep up with the fastest of ships as well as many hidden compartments to hide goods.

DROIDS:
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While on a job she stumbled on a old R2 unit that was in pretty bad shape. It took her away to buy, or find all the parts she needed to put him back together. She named him "Snips" because the droid is well..has a few nuts loose as Areia puts it. she has threated to take him back to the scrap hole where she found him if he kept talking back to her but she never had the heart to do it. Snip is the closest thing she has to a friend.

QUOTES:

"Keep talking back Snips , I'll take you back to that scrape hole I found you in. I'm NOT kidding this time."
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"Damit Snips!"

"Hey I might be a smuggler and a pirate, but if i make a promise I never break it...EVER."


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damng it i've been working hours on this and it just freaking hates me!
 

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Hey there
Glad to see you considering the Jedi, a pretty good first time character too
A few things though.
  • BIOGRAPHY: So firstly, in this timeline we've been playing it that the Jedi aren't quite as strict as they normally are. As such, her father really wouldn't have any reason not to run back to the Jedi with his child. Might wanna try a different ploy as for why he ran away with her. Second, I would maybe scale back a little on what exactly her mother ruled. Its not really an issue, but a whole planet, especially with a large percentage of force sensitives, is a bit out of the ordinary. Maybe just make her a queen of a country or something?
  • SKILLS/STRENGTH/WEAKNESSES: For starters, we use a different category system on the site, which can be found for an in depth explanation here. I would try to best sum up how she ranks in each of those categories instead of listing out each power separately. While your doing that, I would maybe scale it back a bit, as she lost her only teacher at age 16, and some of those powers, such as force light and tutaminis are advanced techniques. Keep that in mind for her other skills as well, as right now, she kinda reads like she's good at everything and has few real weaknesses.
  • POSSESSIONS: Lightsaber is fine, but I'm afraid that droid and ship don't fit into our current timeline. Remember, we are about 1000 years before the movies, and we have no reason to believe R2 units existed then. The same is true for YT-1300 freighter (M. Falcon). I would choose an approved ship from the tech boards and you can find an astromech droid for this timeline right here.
  • OVERALL: So, most importantly, this character isn't really a Jedi. She was trained by a Jedi, a deserter that is, and she may uphold some of the Jedi teachings, but she doesn't really belong to the faction. She's just an independently trained force user, and a smuggler and pirate at that, two occupations that would not be approved of by the Jedi. Until she actually joins the Jedi, or is noted as doing so in her bio, I would change her tag to Indie. Other than that, I would just maybe give the sheet another read through to catch some minute errors in spelling and such.
If you cant get the kinks in the coding and such worked out, feel free to ask for help on the forum, it can be tricky sometimes and lots of people have trouble. Feel free to tag me when you've made some edits, whatever ones you decide on.
 
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