Ar'Khurrira

[KaiserMelech]

Ar'Khurrira

AGE

► 30​

SPECIES

► Tusken Raider​

HEIGHT

► 185 cm​

WEIGHT

► 89 kg​

EYE COLOR

► Unknown​

HAIR COLOR

► Unknown​

HOMEWORLD

► Tatooine​

GENDER

► Male​

FACTION

► Independent​

RANK

► N/A​

FORCE SENSITIVITY

► None​

BIOGRAPHY

Ar'Khurrira was born to a Tusken clan in the Jundland wastes. Raised in the typical Tusken fashion, Ar'Khurrira was proficient with the use of the gaderffii stick and cycler rifle, and raised a bantha mount. One day, Ar'Khurrira was caught on the thorns of a black melon vine, and punctured his legging. For showing a minuscule amount of skin in public, Ar'Khurrira was stripped of his bantha and expelled from the clan.

Wandering the desert aimlessly, Ar'Khurrira met a trio of off-worlders who were similarly lost in the sands. In exchange for a guided journey to a spaceport, Ar'Khurrira was promised a spot on their team and was enthralled by tales of large amounts of water elsewhere in the galaxy. Enraged by the theft of what is rightfully the property of Tuskens (even if it isn't on Tattooine), Ar'Khurrira declared himself honor-bound to his new friends, and vowed that this new Tusken clan would take back what is theirs. Among the humans, Ar'Khurrira was given the moniker URRRRRR'Uhrr'Uhrr'Uhrr'Uhrr, URRRRRR for short, since that was the response he gave when they asked his name. With his human clanmates, Ar'Khurrira made his way to the aquatic planet of Amfar. He was last seen on an isolated beach, angrily waving a Gaderffii stick at anyone who dares to come close to the ocean.

PERSONALITY

Ar'Khurrira had a personality that, to outsiders, was indistinguishable from other Tuskens. However, Ar'Khurrira was far more contemplative and complex than the average Tusken. While most Tuskens do not even consider land or water off of Tattooine, Ar'Khurrira was able to think galacticly, considering all land the same as Tattooine sand, and all water in the galaxy as the property of the Tusken people. Ar'Khurrira was also much less xenophobic towards non-Tuskens, especially when they were able to serve his purposes, as shown by not attacking and even joining a band of humans.

SKILLS

Ar'Khurrira was proficient in all Tusken traits. He was able to forge and use a gaderffii stick, and was skilled with the use of the common Tusken cycler. Ar'Khurrira is able to survive longer in the desert and knows the signs to find pockets of food and water that others may miss. Although he is unable to speak it, Ar'Khurrira is able to understand Basic in addition to Tusken. Attempts to teach him reading and writing are on-going, but not looking good.

GEAR

[*]Tusken Raider full-body clothes, including mask

[*]Gaderffii stick
[*]Tusken cycler rifle with ammo bandoleer

RELATIONSHIPS

Expelled from his Tusken Raider clan, Ar'Khurrira has adopted the humans Toan Daa'mooch, Mayar Khovich, and Goomos Neadees as his new clan.

SHIP

None... yet

 

[Raydo]

Alright, so you are going to need to change this character's name. Its pretty silly and would become annoying to you and those people who wrote with you fairly quickly. You will also need to take out the part about the character killing a Kryat Dragon. Even a small dragon would be quite sizeable to more than a match for a level one character. If you want to kill, a creature like this, it will need to be done in RP, probably involving a plot.

 

[KaiserMelech]

Alright, so you are going to need to change this character's name. Its pretty silly and would become annoying to you and those people who wrote with you fairly quickly. You will also need to take out the part about the character killing a Kryat Dragon. Even a small dragon would be quite sizeable to more than a match for a level one character. If you want to kill, a creature like this, it will need to be done in RP, probably involving a plot.

I gave him a nickname in the biography section. Also, wookiepedia made it seem like killing a krayt dragon was something that all Tuskens just kind of did when they got old enough. I never really had any intention of diving into that aspect, so if you want it removed, I can certainly remove it.

 

[Raydo]

The smaller species of Kryat Dragons are just shy of 100 feet in length. It seems a bit too out there for me for a level 1 character.

If you wanted your characters nickname to be "Ur" or "Urr" that's fine but you still need to change the characters name. Another option would be to just use his nickname. Tuskens have a complicated language but it is a language and isn't just the screaming you hear in the movies (which is essentially what this name is). My suggestion would be for him to have a plausible nickname and leave it at, maybe explain it away as no one uses his full name because its too complex or something similar.

 

[KaiserMelech]

The smaller species of Kryat Dragons are just shy of 100 feet in length. It seems a bit too out there for me for a level 1 character.

Took that bit out.

If you wanted your characters nickname to be "Ur" or "Urr" that's fine but you still need to change the characters name. Another option would be to just use his nickname. Tuskens have a complicated language but it is a language and isn't just the screaming you hear in the movies (which is essentially what this name is). My suggestion would be for him to have a plausible nickname and leave it at, maybe explain it away as no one uses his full name because its too complex or something similar.

I gave him a real name, while maintaining a fairly humorous explanation for URRRRRR.

 

[Danee]

I think that Raydo is saying, is that when you create a Sub-acc, you can't type out the Urrr thing, but rather the nickname, as I'm sure I wasn't the only one who thought this was a troll character.

 

[KaiserMelech]

I think that Raydo is saying, is that when you create a Sub-acc, you can't type out the Urrr thing, but rather the nickname, as I'm sure I wasn't the only one who thought this was a troll character.

I think he means that this is not actually the Tusken language. It would be akin to a human being named AHHHHHHHHHHHHH. Also, 19 letters would be a lot for people to write out constantly.