Ashara Evanaris

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NAME:ASHARA EVANARIS
FACTION:OLD EMPIRE
RANK:Alcolyte
SPECIES:HUMAN
AGE:27
SEX:FEMALE
HEIGHT:5’5
WEIGHT:163LBS
EYES:BLUE
HAIR:BLONDE/SILVER
SKIN: TANNED
FORCE SENSITIVE:YES.


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Ashara is manipulative and sadistic, she leans on the force to empower her mind, to study the old ways and sith traditions to learn abilities the Jedi believe to be unnatural. She desires to inflict pain and suffering, as well as draining knowledge for herself.


Ashara is an introvert and keeps mostly to herself, unless you have something she desires she might not give you the time of day. Ashara on the other hand is an perfectionist, details have to be planned out till the bitter end. Which the same goes for force training and combat. She can be aggressive if her plans fail, which really is the only time she uses her force rage ability.

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES

Ashara has some martial arts training, at her level she would be considered at a novice rank. Something the Alcolyte needs to work. She knows that her lightsaber training needs to improve considering she has only acquired the adept rank. Her strong suite has been her connection with the force, which has been her main focus. She has devoted herself to the studies and traditions of the sith.


One thing is she was not one who has grown to computers and flying, which she now she would have to spend more time learning and teacher herself these traits. As for flying she relies to much on droids, its not that she doesn't know how to. Lately her missions have been by herself so she had to take control.




APPEARANCE:

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Ashara Evanaris is athletic and could hold her own, she is 5’5 and approximately 163 lbs, she has long silver hair.Typically tied into a French braid, sometimes if the moment is fitting she let's it loose. She doesn't wear the typical Sith armour because she finds it restricts her movements. Most find her oceanic blue eyes mesmerizing.


FORCE ABILITIES:


Mind manipulation/Influence
Enviroment manipulation
Energy manipulation
Force sence
Telekinesis



BIOGRAPHY:




Coruscant is the place Ashara has called home, her surname Evanaris has deep seeded history, and has pledged loyalty to the old empire.Generations of her name sake have had diplomatic ties to the sith. Her two brothers were the pride of the family, she had always been treated unequal and often was passed over.


Ashara when she was younger, sought after his approval but she knew he always looked at her as a mistake. Her father plans got her, she would follow the fate of previous daughters. She would be well educated, and when she was old enough would one day become an emissary.


She would often disappear, and follow her brother, he would sneak her into his martial arts training class. He wanted her to be able to protect herself. Over time during her studies she found out old literature about the ancient Sith and there traditions. Ashara began to change, her demeanor, her personality. How she viewed the universe. Slowly over time the dark side began to intertwine within her.


She allowed it to consume her, she wanted to know more,the force. The more she read, the urning for power was all she thought about.Ashara looking back understands the pinnacle point to her fall.


In her twentieth year, her parents were assassinated along with the rest of her family. She found out that her mother was conspiring against the old empire. Her course was paved she believed if that was true she deserved to die. Through the years of reading sith lore,and being touched by the dark side she didn't feel a sense of loss for her mother. Her brother on the other hand, she loved very much, he was the one that looked out for her. When he died she losed any connection to the light side.


Her path became marked, any reminisce of her family had been wiped clean. Ashara was all that remained of her name. Soon after the funeral Ashara was in the library at thier estate reading a book on the Sith code. A man appeared she thought out of nowhere, she soon later learned he was able to force mask himself and hide his presence.


He offered her a choice, sit and die here or follow him, and he would teach and show her first hand what she was reading. As a glimpse she heard his voice inside her mind, soft at first to entice her to give in freely. He made her relive every emotion she felt when he died, as the memory replayed in her mind, slowly the light with her began to extinguish. All that was left was the pain and sorrow.


Over the next few years Ashara devoted herself to the force, expanding her knowledge. She was studying the ancient text, learning the ways of the force the Jedi preached to be unnatural. Now her journey is just beginning.





GEAR

two combat daggers.

Single blade light saber








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SORCEREROUS is not a rank, and please take a look at the Force submissions and tech boards because you have advanced tech listed as well as Force powers that are either not allowed or well beyond the ability of a level 1 acolyte.
 

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For sure thank you, I'm sorry about that I should have paid more attention to detail.
 

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A few issues here. Firstly, please remove the bits about her family being "very powerful". They can be nobles, but nothing too special. Also, she cannot simply inherit their wealth and influence, as a level 1 you're gonna have to earn that. Now about some specific in the bio. If she was kept tied up in her room and tortured, then she would be too weak to take on a full grown man and "easily overpower him" as you mention in the bio. As mentioned above, she cannot simply inherit the family wealth after killing her family, so that's gotta go. So you'll have to rework how she escapes, and then how she gets her training. As the rest of the bio is based on her using the family wealth to get training and leaving a trail for the Sith you might wanna rework all that.
 

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Would you be able to take a look and let me know if it it's good to go

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