Ashara Solari

[Fire.And.Ice]

Not sure about this one

 

[Darasuum]

woah, that coding needs to bee looked at bud. Bee's coding is not compatible really and this is all sorts of...weird looking.

 

[Zay]

I took a quick look at the code and it looks like you've got a ton of unnecessary stuff popping off in there. If you wanna DM me what you're looking to copy, I can throw something together for ya. Just lemme know.

@Fire.And.Ice

 

[The Good Doctor]

Hey there, this is not an official review or anything. But can you break up the sections into paragraphs? I’m on mobile but that makes this profile really hard to even skim. It would also make reading easier for others as well.

Also be sure you read the Story So Far. I’m seeing references to the Republic when it doesn’t exist. There is Imperial Republica, something very different. Also make sure you read the GA write-up so you understand the history of the Rebels and Jedi.

Also there is your welcome pm that has a lot of other links to helpful write-ups as well.

Hope this helps!

 

[Fire.And.Ice]

Awesome thank you,