Ashera Bale

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NAME: Ashera Bale
FACTION: Sith Order
RANK: Acolyte
SPECIES: Sullustan
AGE: 20
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 5’ 8”
WEIGHT: 180lbs
EYES: Black
HAIR: None
SKIN: Pale Pink
CREDITS: 1,000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Long deep scar on left forearm.
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes

STRENGTH: 6/10 He’s deceptively strong for his size, he’s well-built and muscular
DEXTERITY: 5/10 While not limber and agile he is quick and shifty
CONSTITUTION: 6/10 His stamina is lacking due to limited training, however he is in good health
INTELLIGENCE: 6/10 He’s not going to do anything stupid but he has a lot to learn about the galaxy
WISDOM: 5/10 He won’t run off at the mouth but he won’t be providing any nuggets either.
CHARISMA: 8/10 Ashera likes to be the life of the party and a the center of social interactions.

FORCE POWERS:
Telekinesis
Force Speed
Force Jump
Force Flash
Electronic-Manipulation

SKILLS:
Tinkering
Engineering
Piloting


LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
Form I Basics

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
-Strengths
Inventing
Piloting
Speed

-Weaknesses
Blaster combat
Open warfare
Agility

GEAR:
Phrik-Alloy Saber Pike: Unlit it stands four feet tall. Lit it is six feet in length. The Blade is green and the pike is painted to look like carved wood.
Engineering tools and repair kit


PERSONALITY:
Ashera Bale has a tinkerer’s heart. As with all Sullustan’s he felt most at home near the pilot’s chair of a vessel, unlike most Sullustan’s he didn’t fight to get in a pilots chair. Instead he was perfectly pleased and fine with fixing up damaged vessels and eventually, anything that became broken. Ashera wants to know what makes things tic and why things work the way they do, including people. Ashera is outgoing and full of excitement. He’s quite different from the backstabbing Sith most people picture. While he will do anything to get ahead, his main method of getting ahead is through lies and deception.

BIOGRAPHY:
Ashera Bale went through the Ord Mantell Engineering Academy. As soon as he graduated he joined up with the Imperial Navy to help fight against the corrupt Alliance. Ashera was a good pilot but felt he could do more good on the ground as a repair man and this spent the majority of his time in the hangers and carriers of the Navy. Although he could never really explain it, it always seemed as though his fingers were magic and his simple touch could give a vessel the boost it needed to start. His fellow mechanics regarded this as nothing more than a ‘magic touch’ and found his routines slightly comedic.

Ashera aspired to be a support member of the Knightfall group, but before he could attain such a position he was discovered by a Sith Crusader. After a mission in which the Crusaders vessel was damaged Ashera spent a large portion of the day attempting to fix it. The Sith observed the Sullustan working and observed the force flow through him as he worked. The Sith took him back to the temple at Coruscant to be trained. Ashera had always view the Sith as a ferocious group and is uncertain of how he will fit in with his new companions. He is afraid to kill and doesn’t have the ruthless spirit many Sith do. He does have aspirations of power and authority but he may not go about obtaining those positions through traditional routes.

Ashera has begun his training and learned a few of the basics to catch up with the other Acolytes. Now is the time when he needs to make his moves, impress his superiors, and wield the power that was gifted to him. The thoughts of being a man in the background are long gone and Ashera is now looking for ways to lead, even from his low level position.

KILLS:
BOUNTIES COLLECTED:
DUELING RING MATCHES:
GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:
ROLE-PLAYS:
 
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In before someone says the stats are too high.
 

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Hollllly crap 10?
 

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"CONSTITUTION: Describe the health of your character"

If he's in perfect health (no physical ailments) why would it be anything other than ten? If it were less than ten it would indicate that he has health issues or physical disabilities of some sort.
 

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Not really; 5/10 usually means healthy with no side effects. A 10/10 means he's uber healthy and can not get sick, tire out even after prolonged durations of extreme physical workout or even heal up pretty darn quick after sustaining injuries. Like, if a human takes 2 weeks [example] to recover from a fractured wrist, he'd be able to do so in half the time.
 

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Not really; 5/10 usually means healthy with no side effects. A 10/10 means he's uber healthy and can not get sick, tire out even after prolonged durations of extreme physical workout or even heal up pretty darn quick after sustaining injuries. Like, if a human takes 2 weeks [example] to recover from a fractured wrist, he'd be able to do so in half the time.

I think you're mixing up constitution and strength. First off, what is Uber healthy? Can one person be more perfectly healthy than another? Second the number has to do with CURRENT stats not future stats. A 10/10 does not mean that my character cannot get sick, but that he is not currently sick. Just like his 5/10 strength does not mean that he can never be stronger or weaker. It is simply his current state of being. I would put Tiring under strength as well. Stamina has more to do with strength (as it is developed through strength training not...health training). As far as healing is concerned you may have a point. But I don't feel like the field is asking for his regeneration rate as that is more of a species specific trait or force ability that would speed that up and not ones physical condition. That's my thought anyway.
 

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That's not really what it stands for. Look around at other characters. They are permanent stats that might grow or fall depending on training and missions.

Look up what CON stands for on Google or something. The sith won't accept people with more than one stat at 7, and nothing higher.
 

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If that's the case then the CS needs to be updated to specify what they are looking for under constitution. As it stands it asks for the character's health. If the character is in perfect health than it makes absolutely no sense for the score to be anything but perfect. Constitution stands for health and strength of an individual. As strength has it's own section the Constitution section is just health. And again if the Admins aren't looking for the health of the character the CS needs to be rewritten to clarify what this section is looking for. And PERMANENT stats can't grow or fall... Which brings me back to my point that this is a snapshot of a character in a specific state not their ultimate form.
 

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Permanent meaning it doesn't change day by day. It only changes by major events like ranking up losing a limb maybe.

It doesn't need to be cleared up because if you won't put a 10/10 on someone's strength because they are not feeling weak that day, why should they get a 10/10 for not being sick?
 

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Ignoring the stats (the FL will ask you to change them, by the by, not trying to argue just saying, and if you'd like I can provide instances where they have asked people to lower stats)

I hope they let you keep "electronic-manipulation". I'm hellainterested to see how you use that in RP. Looks like a pretty cool character =)
 

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I'd like the FL to tell me what they are looking for under constitution. If they want me to add things like stamina and strength to the constitution section (which I obviously disagree with :P ) then I'll do it. But from my understanding of the word, the words definition, and the description on the CS I don't see why a 10/10 is not only unfeasable but shocking.

As for both electronic-manipulation and force flash we're talking beginner level stuff right now, turning on a com link. But I'm hoping through progression he'll be able to do some cooler things. As he's a mechanic I feel his force powers would have manifested in this way to 'help' him along during his work. And to clarify, he knows the portion of Force Flash that effects electrical equipment not the blinding light force flash.

I'd like to refrain from further discussions about the stats. I appreciate the input and advice but we disagree and I'd rather not marginalize anyone, including myself over a petty CS. I'd also like to publicly apologize for the rudeness of my posts yesterday. Exhaustion, family issues, ect slipped from my RL into my post and I apologize for lashing out.
 

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It happens mate, and I wasn't criticizing the Force Powers (sorry if it came across that way @_@ ) Just saying I hope they let you keep them, lol. Imo, Flash and Electronic Manipulation aren't terribly OP or game changing (at this stage in the game). So I wouldn't see why not ;P I just want you to keep it because V would abuse the shit out of you, lol. (He likes building things) So let him keep his powers! =D
 

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That stats will not be a main focus anymore. As long as they aren't over-powered, they won't hinder an application.

Still, constitution I've interpreted is as the health of the character on a norm (rather than are they sick or not), along with stamina and how fit they keep their body. One does not need to strengthen their body to have a healthier body.

What exactly is "electronic manipulation"?
 

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That stats will not be a main focus anymore. As long as they aren't over-powered, they won't hinder an application.

Still, constitution I've interpreted is as the health of the character on a norm (rather than are they sick or not), along with stamina and how fit they keep their body. One does not need to strengthen their body to have a healthier body.

What exactly is "electronic manipulation"?

^That's what I needed to know. The CS doesn't make that apparent and there was obviously some confusion over it. I've adjusted it accordingly.

Electronic Manipulation: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Electronic_Manipulation
It seems similar to Force Flash. It could be considered OP if not used correctly. I would put Bale's skill level at being about to control a Comlink or Chrono with little difficulty (simple circuitry) and a Datapad with extensive energy extended. I am actually an electrician and wanted to bring a little of that knowledge into my RPs and thought this would be a fun force power to do that through.
 

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^That's what I needed to know. The CS doesn't make that apparent and there was obviously some confusion over it. I've adjusted it accordingly.

Electronic Manipulation: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Electronic_Manipulation
It seems similar to Force Flash. It could be considered OP if not used correctly. I would put Bale's skill level at being about to control a Comlink or Chrono with little difficulty (simple circuitry) and a Datapad with extensive energy extended. I am actually an electrician and wanted to bring a little of that knowledge into my RPs and thought this would be a fun force power to do that through.

I'll allow it for now, as long as it's not abused. I will be keeping eye on the situation just in case. Still, I think such technique would be best learned in training, rather than something he already knows. He can use his mechanical knowledge when he learns the technique though. Also, if you do plan on learning it in training, feel free to keep it on the list; no point in removing it then soon after putting it back on.
 

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no point in removing it then soon after putting it back on.

Just don't forget to do the training ;D This is actually a really nifty skill, and I'd be happy to assist you in learning it. I didn't even know this was a thing until now. So I'm gonna grab it anyway.
 
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