at the depth of darknes(Rish Koor's training)

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It was getting colder than usual on the forsaken planet of Ando prime. yeah that is where crusader Tahn stood. He was a dark jedi. A dark, and young fallen jedi who was training to achieve the rank of instructor. Today he was probably waiting for his new apprentice to show out. he stood just right outside the temple like a statue. As usual he was wearing his dark robes, and had his lightsaber's hilt hung from his belt.
 

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The cold weather didint effect Rish like it should of...
Memorys of his Father still scorched his mind like ferverent fires...
His rage stemming from his father's death and the clothes on his back were the only things Rish needed to stay warm in this unforgiving cold...

Now Rish was approaching the temple where he was told his master would be awaiting him. The information was correct, a man was already standing outside and seemed to be waiting for someone.
Slowly he walked up to the dark robed man and immediately sat himself upon one knee and planted his fist on the ground along with it. He lowered his head and awaited on what he assumed to be his master's response....
 

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"Rish Koor I assume?" Tahn spoke in a cold, emotionless, and unfriendly tone to the kel-Dor who had just approached him. he then looked down at his new apprentice, and started to read him. Read him through the force actually. yeah that was something important to do first.

"tell me why do you seek to learn the ways of the dark side?"
 

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Rish lifted his head slowly to his master and began to speak once more the a cold emotionless tone...

"You assume correct...."

He then let his head drop down to the position it had been before.
And just like that his Master had another question which sent spites of rage through his mind...

"To learn of the Force further. And to avenge my father's wrongful death.."
His fist that was planted in the soild ice was becoming numb yet when he spoke of his father's death, his rage came back just as soon as it left for the moment he chose to speak to his master in respect. And with this rage he pushed his hand further into the ice, causing a small crack under the ice to occure...
 

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"hmm.. good it seems that you have anger, and hate within you, but still I would like to know more about you, and how did you end up falling to the dark side" Tahn spoke in an unfriendly tone. His goal from the question was to see he apprentice's motivations, and also to see if he can be trusted, or not.
 

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"It started with humans..."
He paused for a moment knowing that his Master was human..

"Respectivily...They are race that knows no bounds. But with this they prove to be one of the most powerful races."

With the sentence,s he had just spoke, he carried a spiteful tone with the words. The only time that Rish ran into Humans were back on his homeworld.
As they terroized him and his friends...Untill his Father intervened.

"Ive always trained in the martial art style of my people and with it, it has given me power in which I crave for. It gives me my own peace..."

Rish stood up and relaxed his shoulders slowly while trying to feel the cold on his skin.
 

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"peace?... what do you mean by peace?"Tahn spoke in a disgusted tone to his apprentice. yeah this word...peace he really hated it. Tahn's trust for his new apprentice was now decreasing. He also planned on attacking him if he did not explain the meaning of his "own peace.
 

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"Peace. Rather than me waste my skills on putrid scum. I would rather foster it in training."

"And then the scum would truly befit to witniss my hand weave their death."
Rish paused for a moment...


"Dont think me as pascifist monk..."
Rish's words gave their sharp edges as they were spoken.
As much as he wanted to treat his Master with respect.
But he was making it slightly difficult...
 

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"good, good you just got me worried for a second" Tahn said as he gave his apprentice a cunning smile.

"However, you will never find peace here. Only pain, and suffering, but if you think that you have what it takes to learn the real powers of the force follow me" Tahn said as he started to walk walk to the temple fastly.
 

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"What ever it takes."
Said Joshua in a humble tone torwards his master.
Soon he followed his Master into the temple. It felt colder in the temple rather than outside. Yet not even the wind would reach this far inside...
 

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"what ever it takes?hmmm... I see" Tahn said as he laughed out.

"alright then take of everything on you. Including both your clothes, and weapon. After that I would like you to go back outside the temple, and meditate for like 2 days" Tahn added it. It would actually seem to anyone that he is joking, but he was dead serious.

"there is a high possibility that you might die, but if you used your hatred, anger they might fuel you, and keep you alive for the two day."
 

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"What ever it takes..."
He replied once more. He went behind a nearby wall taking off all of his possesions except his undergarments. He passed them back to his Master and procceded back out of the temple into the blistering cold.
Rish found himself a small flat rock that enabled himself a makeshift seat.
And upon this rock he sat and assumed a meditative state. At first the cold was gnawing at Rish's skin making chaff and become sore. But for some reason the feelings of that he had abandoned his mother only leaving her by herself with his now burried father caused him to become cold like the very ice that layed upon the planet...The humans from his past were the only ones who could of carried out this act..And their faces became silouets in the snow. Causing Rish to become even more infuriated. These feelings helped him ignore the cold....Although it did feel a little breezy.

((I had to throw in that last part.))
 

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Tahn took his new apprentice's, and headed back to his room. It was going to be some much fun seeing the results of this.

"good, good. But now we shall so for how long you can last in this weather" Tahn spoke through the force to his apprentice.
 

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"As long as my body permitts. And then when it refuses, I will make it press forward through thr Dark side. There is no room for weakness. Only power..."The sun was setting and it was becoming even colder. Rish controled his breathing trying to regulate his body heat some how. But it was not enough.
Remebering seeing his father lie in the river that was located only 20 feet away from their shack. The images burned his mind and sent rage through his body and caused his muscels to tighten. He slammed both of his fist down in the spite of the rage breaking two rocks thay layed near him...
 

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"yes my apprentice use your hate. Let it fuel you. Let your anger consume you" Tahn spoke out loud through the force.
 

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Hearing his Master's commands he stood up while the snow began to come down even harder and finaly the sun was gone from the sky. Only darkness remained. At first he could not see but he concentrated on his hate for the ones who wronged him. Slowly the anger built more and more and Rish channeled this into his sight. Almost everything to him was an enemy. Pillars of frozen ice began to resemble the human thugs that terrorized him as a child and with this sight Rish set himself in the Baran Do style. Quickly threw a straight punch into the ice causing cracks to cloud the clean ice. Rish lowered his stance and then threw his leg into a strike against the pillar causing it topple onto its side. But this wasint enough for Rish. Standing over the pillar he stomped the head of the pillar. But not once, one after another. Untill the pillar was now crushed ice the blended in within the rest of the ice on this forsaken planet...
 

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OCC: well I got nothing really to post now so go ahead, and rp how you had spent the day outside in the cold :D
 

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The rest of the night was filled with Rish destroying pieces of frozen rock and anything else that was solid and could be destroyed. His hate consumed him and it drove him to the edge of loosing sanity. But with the thoughts of his father's killers it brung him back. His killers would die by his hands and nothing would stop him...
The morning sun meant nothing to Rish he could not even feel the slight warmth it would produce. He then stood for hours in the same spot in which he started. Simply staring out into the wasteland of snow....
 

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"good job, come back now I have a new assignment for you" Tahn spoke to his apprentice through the force. he did well. Yeah he sure had enough physical abilities. But well the next challenge was going to examine his mental abilities.
 

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Rish didint reply to his Master but rather he followed his orders and proceeded back inside. Inside the temple was even colder. But it was something strange within the temple that madie it cold and unforgiving.
Now he was face to face with his Master again and once more he bowed before him.
 
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