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| Atiniir Name: Nickname: Homeworld: Age: Gender: Species: Eye Colour: Hair Colour: Height: Weight: Build: Tattoos: Scars: Facial Hair: Piercings: Force Sensitive: | Vencu Atiniir Vencu Alor Dantooine 37 Male Human Brown Brown 6'2" 90kg Athletic N/A Many, most notably across the eye. Stubble No No |
Strength: Atiniir does not have the same fascination with strength that some Mandalorians have. To be stronger than most is not an advantage if it is compromising endurance or dexterity. Strength is only useful to be able to carry yourself and your equipment. Since he is always training, he is stronger than most, but by no means one of the strongest . (7/10)
Dexterity: From childhood Atiniir has had to quickly develop a high level of dexterity; he is nimble on his feet, and he can dodge enemies attacks proficiently, this high development comes from relentless, constant training, and it also comes from having to repair and maintain his own equipment and machinery. (7/10)
Constitution: From birth till he became a young adult, Atniir lived on a mountainous jungle moon; his parents believed with strict and brutal training they could create the ideal warrior. He has a naturally higher red blood cell count from the thin atmosphere, and he prides himself on his almost legendary abilities; he is always trying to push the limits. It might seem that his body is a machine that can go on forever, but the real power is the strength of mind which has been tempered over decades of self deprivation, work and duty.He is too stubborn to die – Or, that is what he tells himself.(9/10)
Intelligence: Atiniir is intelligent in the fact that he knows a lot about his history, his people, the weapons they operate and military tactics and technology. But in regards to foreign cultures, peoples, languages he is woefully ignorant.
He likes to distance himself from all things “Un-Mandalorian” to such a degree that his grasp of the Basic language is heavily accented and patchy, and it takes him a long while to articulate complex sentences. This ignorance is not extended to military or technological advantages which he reads about avidly in his dream to help lead his people into this new age.
After the death of Mandalore and the civil war that followed, Atniir realized that he should make more of an effort to improve his language abilities and now most can understand his basic, and he learned to understand Twi’lek. (7/10)
Wisdom: Atiniir is a good decision maker. From a young age he has been moulded to be an independent thinker and he knows when and how to act. He is good at observing the area and making informed decisions He knows how to keep a cool head and often is looked too for advice. (8/10)
Charisma: Atiniir is a somewhat odd Mandalorian. Most have a serious temperament and like to play hard, work harder attitude, so does Atiniir but he is awfully light hearted and doesn’t take himself so seriously. He works as hard as he can, but is never consumed by that seriousness and in dire situations is more likely to make a joke, than to shout or lose his nerve. He knows how to take the lead, and knows when to follow. (7/10)
Other Skills: Atiniir is completely proficient in only one language, Mando’a. He speaks almost fluent basic but has a strong accent and laments having to speak in such an “elegent” tongue. He can understand droids and can speak relatively good Hutese, and Twi’lek.
Strengths and Weaknesses: Atiniir is a man born into a culture of resistance, he was bread and raised to have the tenants of the Mandalorians at heart and they are vital to understanding how his mind works, he feels a great responsibility with the blood of his ancestors running through his vains and hopes he can prove himself as a great Mandalorian, either through service to the clan, through his prowess, or preferably, both.
To meet these almost unachievable standards, he has developed a few crucial skills. An iron will which allows him to push himself completely no matter how harsh the conditions , his will acts like a magnet attracting those who seek purpose or adventure, and time again he showed his metal as a leader serving as during his time as a mercenary for the Hutts’, and in his service as the deputy head of Vencu during the Great War.
However he is woefully ignorant of foreign cultures and hostile to most people who are not Mandalorians and has difficulty communicating or living with outsiders. He doesn’t like the idea of a meaningless life one which is meant in the pursuit of one’s own pleasure, instead he seeks purpose through duty. He is not quick to anger, and is compassionate (as a Mandalorian can be). No matter the circumstance he will try his hardest to keep his word, and his honour.
Dexterity: From childhood Atiniir has had to quickly develop a high level of dexterity; he is nimble on his feet, and he can dodge enemies attacks proficiently, this high development comes from relentless, constant training, and it also comes from having to repair and maintain his own equipment and machinery. (7/10)
Constitution: From birth till he became a young adult, Atniir lived on a mountainous jungle moon; his parents believed with strict and brutal training they could create the ideal warrior. He has a naturally higher red blood cell count from the thin atmosphere, and he prides himself on his almost legendary abilities; he is always trying to push the limits. It might seem that his body is a machine that can go on forever, but the real power is the strength of mind which has been tempered over decades of self deprivation, work and duty.He is too stubborn to die – Or, that is what he tells himself.(9/10)
Intelligence: Atiniir is intelligent in the fact that he knows a lot about his history, his people, the weapons they operate and military tactics and technology. But in regards to foreign cultures, peoples, languages he is woefully ignorant.
He likes to distance himself from all things “Un-Mandalorian” to such a degree that his grasp of the Basic language is heavily accented and patchy, and it takes him a long while to articulate complex sentences. This ignorance is not extended to military or technological advantages which he reads about avidly in his dream to help lead his people into this new age.
After the death of Mandalore and the civil war that followed, Atniir realized that he should make more of an effort to improve his language abilities and now most can understand his basic, and he learned to understand Twi’lek. (7/10)
Wisdom: Atiniir is a good decision maker. From a young age he has been moulded to be an independent thinker and he knows when and how to act. He is good at observing the area and making informed decisions He knows how to keep a cool head and often is looked too for advice. (8/10)
Charisma: Atiniir is a somewhat odd Mandalorian. Most have a serious temperament and like to play hard, work harder attitude, so does Atiniir but he is awfully light hearted and doesn’t take himself so seriously. He works as hard as he can, but is never consumed by that seriousness and in dire situations is more likely to make a joke, than to shout or lose his nerve. He knows how to take the lead, and knows when to follow. (7/10)
Other Skills: Atiniir is completely proficient in only one language, Mando’a. He speaks almost fluent basic but has a strong accent and laments having to speak in such an “elegent” tongue. He can understand droids and can speak relatively good Hutese, and Twi’lek.
Strengths and Weaknesses: Atiniir is a man born into a culture of resistance, he was bread and raised to have the tenants of the Mandalorians at heart and they are vital to understanding how his mind works, he feels a great responsibility with the blood of his ancestors running through his vains and hopes he can prove himself as a great Mandalorian, either through service to the clan, through his prowess, or preferably, both.
To meet these almost unachievable standards, he has developed a few crucial skills. An iron will which allows him to push himself completely no matter how harsh the conditions , his will acts like a magnet attracting those who seek purpose or adventure, and time again he showed his metal as a leader serving as during his time as a mercenary for the Hutts’, and in his service as the deputy head of Vencu during the Great War.
However he is woefully ignorant of foreign cultures and hostile to most people who are not Mandalorians and has difficulty communicating or living with outsiders. He doesn’t like the idea of a meaningless life one which is meant in the pursuit of one’s own pleasure, instead he seeks purpose through duty. He is not quick to anger, and is compassionate (as a Mandalorian can be). No matter the circumstance he will try his hardest to keep his word, and his honour.
Personality: Atiniir is a man who is dedicated to a strict lifestyle of working hard, playing hard and giving all to his people. But this seriousness is seemingly compromised by his friendly personality and how he likes to make jokes in the most serious of situations. At first one may think that Atiniir is not serious enough, but he just doesn’t let it go to his head.
He believes in his friends and comrades and this close camaraderie is one of the things he thinks is more important than anything else, when he was a mercenary he missed the connection that all members of his village had, and when he rejoined his clan on Mandalore he knew that he would never depart his people again.
He believes in his friends and comrades and this close camaraderie is one of the things he thinks is more important than anything else, when he was a mercenary he missed the connection that all members of his village had, and when he rejoined his clan on Mandalore he knew that he would never depart his people again.
Armour: Allit’gam (Mobility setup)
Rifle: Traycn'buurenaar "Firestorm" Repeater
Side Arm: R9 Heavy Support Blaster
Secondary Side Arm: Vibroknife
Rifle: Traycn'buurenaar "Firestorm" Repeater
Side Arm: R9 Heavy Support Blaster
Secondary Side Arm: Vibroknife
He was born on Dantooine, to a mother and father that he never knew. All he knew for family was Uroksh and his wife Ruotso; Twileks who had sworn their lives to a fanatical splinter group of the Death Watch. They were a part of a raiding Warband that believed in the old ways, the old gods. They forced their children into situations from which most died. Food was withheld, they were shown no affection, and they had to learn to sneak and steal to earn their bread.
Mandalorians start to receive military training from their fathers at the age of five, but in this cult it started from day one. His first memories are of burning buildings, and screaming women and children. His first toy was a gun, a gun that had been shaped so a child could fire. It was not strong enough to kill (Unless it goes through the eye and into the brain), and this accuracy was encouraged in the children.
He can’t remember the first person he killed, all he knew is that he was young, and as the Warband went from world to world, he killed many people. He was never alone, for the children of slaves became Mandalorians, and his happiest memories of childhood are of fighting with the others playfully. He found it hard to connect to them as many died horrendous deaths, and he became focused on surviving and thriving. He was fanatical, cold and unrepentant.
At the age of five his “traditional” training began, and it was not much different than before. His family and friends would take it in turn to beat him senseless to teach him how to fight ‘on the job’, they would give him weapons too heavy for him to realistically fire and expect him to adapt quickly, and he was forced to recite religious texts and stories of the old heroes by heart. This conditioning had made him so cold, that when his mother died on a raid, he felt nothing, other than a desire to kill those who had killed her. In these times he started to gain a reputation as a great warrior in the making.
Once he reached thirteen he had decided that life in the Warband had little more to teach him, he wanted to go to Mandalore and join a real military unit. His Father was against the idea, and said that it would dishonour his family to leave them, when he had much to give back. He disagreed, and his Father challenged him to a duel, in which he lost and was killed. Atniir then left the Warband, never to return.
When he arrived to Mandalore he was disappointed with the general apathy, he was use to fanatical determination and dedication, and he was left wanting. However he found a small underground community of likeminded individuals, and ended up joining forces with a Mandalorian called Llothsi. He was a Supercommando who liked his new apprentices dedication to the ‘spiritual Mandalorian’ lifestyle. For years they worked together bounty hunting, and from his mentor he learned how to speak Hutese, droid speak, and how to pilot a ship.
It was on a mission on the outer rim that he came into contact with a Jedi who almost killed him by reading his mind and predicting his moves. It was the first time he was humiliated, so he sought out a rouge Jedi who worked with the Hutts to teach him how to protect his mind. He spent many years with the Hutts and with the contracter known simply as Xan learning how to protect himself from the Jedi - a skill learned because of humiliation, which in later years would save his life.
The call of Mandalore took him by surprise, but he abandoned almost everything to get there immediately. At this time Corden Vencu became the leader of the band he joined, after the demise of the old commander, and it was then that Atniir got to know one of his inspirations. After the conflict he stayed apart of the “Te Atiniiryc Kisol”, and became one of the most loyal supporters, even being adopted into the clan. He started to gain a reputation for a fearsome, honourable, truthful warrior, and one of the greatest of the Supercommandos. As the discontent grew between the clans, he watched as the Mandalorians split themselves apart for the Mandalores inability to lead and take the clans in a wise direction.
He had hoped that Corden would of became Mandalore after being crowned victorious in a duel against him, but he gave the title to one who only lead the clans further into chaos. This Mandalore was defeated by the head of clan Marren, under whose leadership the situation further disintegrated. Once the civil war was underway, he was granted control of sizable forces and lead his soldiers from the front, further cementing his reputation.
Once Vencu became Mandalore, it heightened the position of the Clan within the eyes of the people, Atniir took a seemingly un –natural opportunistic move that shocked many, and used this new prestige to further his fanatical views about a total and endless war, managing to convince many high ranking officers and clan leaders of a new society based on the old traditions of conflict, and not the decadence and apathy which had plagued the people, they needed a cleansing war.
He became a leader within his clan, becoming the head of the most elite units within the Mandalorian military, and creating a precarious balance for himself between managing, training and leading from the front.
In the long peace that came before the great war, he lead assaults against the death watch who he now saw as nothing but scum, too weak to understand the need for a united Mandalorian front and oversaw the campaign which marginalized them further.
When the war against the GA was declared, he took to the front line, leading the priority assaults on Brentaal IV and several secretive strikes against GA targets across the Galaxy. He was hoping to be on the front line on Coruscant, but Corden asked him to take troops and to attack a different district which needed to be held to open a way to the Senate building.
He didn't know what that meant, but as the battle reached his climax, everything changed.
Mandalorians start to receive military training from their fathers at the age of five, but in this cult it started from day one. His first memories are of burning buildings, and screaming women and children. His first toy was a gun, a gun that had been shaped so a child could fire. It was not strong enough to kill (Unless it goes through the eye and into the brain), and this accuracy was encouraged in the children.
He can’t remember the first person he killed, all he knew is that he was young, and as the Warband went from world to world, he killed many people. He was never alone, for the children of slaves became Mandalorians, and his happiest memories of childhood are of fighting with the others playfully. He found it hard to connect to them as many died horrendous deaths, and he became focused on surviving and thriving. He was fanatical, cold and unrepentant.
At the age of five his “traditional” training began, and it was not much different than before. His family and friends would take it in turn to beat him senseless to teach him how to fight ‘on the job’, they would give him weapons too heavy for him to realistically fire and expect him to adapt quickly, and he was forced to recite religious texts and stories of the old heroes by heart. This conditioning had made him so cold, that when his mother died on a raid, he felt nothing, other than a desire to kill those who had killed her. In these times he started to gain a reputation as a great warrior in the making.
Once he reached thirteen he had decided that life in the Warband had little more to teach him, he wanted to go to Mandalore and join a real military unit. His Father was against the idea, and said that it would dishonour his family to leave them, when he had much to give back. He disagreed, and his Father challenged him to a duel, in which he lost and was killed. Atniir then left the Warband, never to return.
When he arrived to Mandalore he was disappointed with the general apathy, he was use to fanatical determination and dedication, and he was left wanting. However he found a small underground community of likeminded individuals, and ended up joining forces with a Mandalorian called Llothsi. He was a Supercommando who liked his new apprentices dedication to the ‘spiritual Mandalorian’ lifestyle. For years they worked together bounty hunting, and from his mentor he learned how to speak Hutese, droid speak, and how to pilot a ship.
It was on a mission on the outer rim that he came into contact with a Jedi who almost killed him by reading his mind and predicting his moves. It was the first time he was humiliated, so he sought out a rouge Jedi who worked with the Hutts to teach him how to protect his mind. He spent many years with the Hutts and with the contracter known simply as Xan learning how to protect himself from the Jedi - a skill learned because of humiliation, which in later years would save his life.
The call of Mandalore took him by surprise, but he abandoned almost everything to get there immediately. At this time Corden Vencu became the leader of the band he joined, after the demise of the old commander, and it was then that Atniir got to know one of his inspirations. After the conflict he stayed apart of the “Te Atiniiryc Kisol”, and became one of the most loyal supporters, even being adopted into the clan. He started to gain a reputation for a fearsome, honourable, truthful warrior, and one of the greatest of the Supercommandos. As the discontent grew between the clans, he watched as the Mandalorians split themselves apart for the Mandalores inability to lead and take the clans in a wise direction.
He had hoped that Corden would of became Mandalore after being crowned victorious in a duel against him, but he gave the title to one who only lead the clans further into chaos. This Mandalore was defeated by the head of clan Marren, under whose leadership the situation further disintegrated. Once the civil war was underway, he was granted control of sizable forces and lead his soldiers from the front, further cementing his reputation.
Once Vencu became Mandalore, it heightened the position of the Clan within the eyes of the people, Atniir took a seemingly un –natural opportunistic move that shocked many, and used this new prestige to further his fanatical views about a total and endless war, managing to convince many high ranking officers and clan leaders of a new society based on the old traditions of conflict, and not the decadence and apathy which had plagued the people, they needed a cleansing war.
He became a leader within his clan, becoming the head of the most elite units within the Mandalorian military, and creating a precarious balance for himself between managing, training and leading from the front.
In the long peace that came before the great war, he lead assaults against the death watch who he now saw as nothing but scum, too weak to understand the need for a united Mandalorian front and oversaw the campaign which marginalized them further.
When the war against the GA was declared, he took to the front line, leading the priority assaults on Brentaal IV and several secretive strikes against GA targets across the Galaxy. He was hoping to be on the front line on Coruscant, but Corden asked him to take troops and to attack a different district which needed to be held to open a way to the Senate building.
He didn't know what that meant, but as the battle reached his climax, everything changed.
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