Aurora Fett

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Aurora Fett

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Faction: Mandalorian

Rank: Crusader

Species: Human

Age: 19

Gender: Female

Force sensitive: No

Appearance: Aurora stand at 5'5 and weighs 140 lbs. most of her armor is bone like in color and structure and on her back she has the skull of an actual young mythosaur. the fabric of her armor is either cyan or burgundy in color. She has short blonde hair of a short angular cut. She is small but muscular and very deadly. She has a few scars, the most notable over her left eye.

Attributes: Aurora is a well trained warrior physically and mentally. She specializes in fighting large beasts and plans to one day become Mand'alor. her greatest weakness is her own emotions. She is known to make poor decisions when under extreme stress and her fighting ability suffers likewise.

Personality: It is hard to get to know Aurora because of her defensive nature and know-it-all tendencies, but once you do she is a very passionate person, protecting her chosen family above all else.

Biography: Aurora has always been the image of mandalorian lifestyle, she was born into the Fett clan and has led her family to fame for as she has traveled the Galaxy. She is an outcast to the traditional Mandalorians of her time as she chooses to brave the beasts of the larger Galaxy instead of fighting other clans.

Upon leaving Aurora was gifted a skull lined in Beskar'gam by her father. This skull was said to be from an young Mythosaur many years ago. She was told when she returned with a larger skull that all the clans of Mandalore would follow her. Aurora was unsure of this, but was willing to try for her families honor.


after her leaving Mandalore Aurora has found herself rather lost, struggling between the Mandalorian concepts of honor and lust for combat. she now wanders the galaxy to find a cause worth fighting for, where she can wear her armor proudly. Still a young woman she is yet to experience many things aside from combat. when she is not fighting she anxiously awaits the opportunity to enjoy her youth.

Skills: Aurora is an expert in hand to hand and melee combat along with explosives. She is fluent in Galactic Basic Mando'a and Shiriiwook. She is at her best when fighting large beasts, but humanoids are not outside her comfort zone.

Equipment: Medium Mandalorian combat armor, Vibro-Longsword, Concealed Crossbow, BP12 blaster, APR-11 blaster rifle, Ascension gun, thermal detonators, detpacks.

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Hey, i wanted to point out that there is no Mandolorian Faction for this Time Line. What you could put would be Independent, like your title suggests. You might want to change your bio to fit that. You could be a bounty hunter, just free lance, or work for the Hutt Cartel.
 

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Ah, sorry, didn't see it before, thanks for the link. =)
 

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I saw her from afar at the bar, she caught my eye not because she was a Mandolorian, or intimidating, or strikingly beautiful, but rather because she was large floating band of text that said 600 x 200
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Ok, where do you want it, Herrith, BlackJack, care to join?
 

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Sure no problem, although I might not be able to write next week (Spring Break)
 

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yep....a great crew to be with.
 

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So, I hate to be the bearer of bad news but there are quite a few issues with your profile. I'll start with the biography, as the other issues are less important and can be attributed to hyperbole that people do when describing skills.

Biography: Aurora has always been the image of mandalorian lifestyle, she was born into the Fett clan and has led her family to fame for her success in conquering worlds.

The Mandalorians at this point in our timeline are small and clan based. They have conquered no worlds.

She was one of many colonists on the mandalorians new home-world and has killed many mythosaurs to earn her keep. her most famous misadventure was when she stumbled into a nest of three young mythosaurs and was able to defeat them all, the smallest ones skull now rests on her back.

Nothing in our write up for Mandalorians suggests that colonization of Mandalore happened any time recently, let alone within the last 19 years (your character's age). Your character is also level 1, and cannot and would not have killed any mythosaurs. As far as I am aware, mythosaurs don't even exist period in our time. They were eradicated by the Taung, which existed a long time before Mandalorians in their current iteration here.

after her success in helping colonize mandalore Aurora has found herself rather lost, struggling between the mandalorian concepts of honor and lust for combat. she now wanders the galaxy to find a cause worth fighting for, where she can wear her armor proudly. Still a young woman she is yet to experience many things aside from combat. when she is not fighting she anxiously awaits the opportunity to enjoy her youth.

The last bit is mostly alright, but again she would not have - in any way shape or form - helped in the colonization of Mandalore.

Attributes: Aurora is a well trained warrior physically and mentally. when it comes to combat she is among the best in the galaxy and is well on her way to becoming Mand'alor. her greatest weakness is her own emotions. She is known to make poor decisions when under extreme stress and her fighting ability suffers likewise.

Something to keep in mind, a 19 year old character is not the best in the galaxy at anything. You're a level one nobody. You can be good, trained, and capable... but you wouldn't be the best, or near it.

Skills: Aurora is an expert in hand to hand and melee combat along with explosives. She is fluent in Galactic Basic Mando'a and Shiriiwook. She is at her best when fighting large beasts, but humanoids are not outside her comfort zone.

Again, expert is a little too high of a skill cap for someone who's barely old enough to enlist in a real military. I understand Mandalorians are highly trained warrior people, but a little realism goes a long way.

Equipment: Early mandalorian armor, a Vibro-dagger, Vibro-swords, Small mythosaur skull re-purposed into a backpack, Wrist mounted flamethrower, Lots of explosives.

You'll need to be a lot more specific on what kind of gear your character has. Linking to tech that exists in our tech forum is my suggested method for listing tech. There is Mandalorian armor listed in there, and you can also read about how tech functions work (in regards to stuff like flame throwers). "Lots of explosives" needs to be expanded upon as well. There is a list of explosives in the tech guidelines you could choose from.

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So It's looking like your character will need a decent overhaul in terms of its biography, skills and gear. Let me know if you have any questions.

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