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AVRUM

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Now whoever has courage and a strong and collected spirit in his breast,
let him come forth, lace up his gloves, and put up his hands.


Age: 44
Species: Human
Height: 7'1"
Weight: 388 lbs.

Faction: Imperial Knights
Rank: Marshal

We few, we happy few, we band of brothers. For he today that sheds his blood with me shall be my brother.

Equipment:
- Greatsword "Oakheart"
- Imperial Knight Lightsaber
- Custom forged durasteel suit of armor
- Knight robes

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We’re surrounded? Good, now we can kill the bastards in any direction.

The man who will go where his colors will go, without asking, who will fight a phantom foe in a jungle and mountain range, without counting, and who will suffer and die in the midst of incredible hardship, without complaint, is still what he has always been, from the Galactic Alliance to the sceptered Imperium. He is the stuff of which legions are made. His pride is his colors and his regiment, his training hard and thorough and coldly realistic, to fit him for what he must face, and his obedience is to his orders. As a legionary, he held the gates of civilization for the classical world. He has been called... an Imperial Knight.
 
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Nice collection of quotes on the United States Marine Corps. One from General James Mattias, another from 1st Lieutenant Clifton Cates, one from Colonel Lewis B. 'Chesty' Puller, and the biggest is from T. R. Fehrenback's work, This Kind of War. Very nice collection. But a profile? I just don't see a char profile in here.
 
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Sounds like he's a beast of a man
 

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Nice collection of quotes on the United States Marine Corps. One from General James Mattias, another from 1st Lieutenant Clifton Cates, one from Colonel Lewis B. 'Chesty' Puller, and the biggest is from T. R. Fehrenback's work, This Kind of War. Very nice collection. But a profile? I just don't see a char profile in here.

Aye, and maybe so, but it conveys the basic statistics of the character and his overall bearing. I may convert it into a narrative sometime in the future but the Cabal seems to have stalled, for now at least.
 

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Aye, and maybe so, but it conveys the basic statistics of the character and his overall bearing. I may convert it into a narrative sometime in the future but the Cabal seems to have stalled, for now at least.

Mars' computer broke down. He wont have another until after xmas.
 

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Mars' computer broke down. He wont have another until after xmas.

Ahh, got'cha, thanks for the update. This character'll lay in wait then 'till such a time as he can be made useful. :)
 

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Aye, and maybe so, but it conveys the basic statistics of the character and his overall bearing. I may convert it into a narrative sometime in the future but the Cabal seems to have stalled, for now at least.

And I understand that, but I'm going to have to ask that you add some actual content to this bio before it's ever used again. So if the Cabal gets goin' again, make sure to add more than a mish-mash of quotes.
 

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And I understand that, but I'm going to have to ask that you add some actual content to this bio before it's ever used again. So if the Cabal gets goin' again, make sure to add more than a mish-mash of quotes.

Really? Then I'll have to rewrite my Mando as well, because generally his 'narrative' is a collection of real world quotes too. I also had a Jedi Knight a while ago in which I'd taken a Charlie Chaplin speech and converted it to Star Wars terms.
 

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Actually, using just quotes for a bio is perfectly acceptable as long as it meets the character length requirement. I'm saying this because this was brought to light here.
 
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Completely revamped and Imperial Knight-ized.
 
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