Independent Balteus

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AGE
SPECIES
HEIGHT
WEIGHT
EYE COLOR
HAIR COLOR
HOMEWORLD
32
Human
6'2
197lbs
Hazel/Green Mix
Black
Coruscant

DOSSIER

Abandoned and discarded from the world and left to the depths of Coruscant, some could say that a young boy by the name of Balteus was lucky enough to be found by the Jedi Order.

Observed by a Knight during a mission of their own, the Jedi saw a young boy who seemed unnaturally gifted in his movements and ability to defend himself so effortlessly. He perceived Balteus to have an affinity with the force but was mystified by one discrepancy. They could not actually sense Balteus' connection to the force.

This quickly brought attention to himself before even fully becoming inducted to the order, often so much the anomaly due to his either unperceived connection or lack thereof. Some believe that his peculiarity was what played into future events as a case like this had been only rumored to exist within legends and hearsay. Curiosity perhaps had gotten the better of their inquisitive minds as within time Balteus would come to learn his limitations.

Though portions of his training had been fast tracked due to his proclivity within the realms of martial combat which leant him an increased interest from the Guardians of the order and the other sub-groups who wished to have the anomalous child within their ranks.

Though as fast as it all began it seemed to burn to the ground in an instant when Balteus could not master anything beyond using the force in any outward fashion such as being able to manipulate objects via force manipulation. The most basic would not earn him a place as Jedi and furthermore what would come into question once more was his connection to the force.

It seemed shortly thereafter it was not bound to not last for Balteus. His dreams of joining the order seemed to fade in an instant. Taken in only to be rejected for being unable to perform. He felt a cruelty swell inside his heart and as it grew it sunk its teeth into the mind of a boy who would know no peace.

Balteus was examined by a medical team in order to ascertain the specifics of his condition which revealed his midi-cholrian count was disturbingly low, never peaking above the regular levels seen in most sentient species. Though it was common for there to be those who could have a lower count and it affect their connectivity so strongly, many cases were often so different and specific that they felt unsure if this was even the reason why he could not learn more advanced techniques.

Speculations grew as the information of the tests seemingly leaked out of what was supposed to be a controlled environment, leading to growing rumors that Balteus was not force sensitive at all. These rumors spiraled the young Balteus into feelings of further isolation in a place where he knew he would most likely be forced from soon enough. A council attempted to act deliberate the matter quickly, seeing the situation potentially growing into more something much more they decided to call in another student, a Fiani by the name of R'ashtaro who was known to be a close friend of their current little 'problem'.

R'ashtaro spoke from his heart on the matter about his friend Balteus, praising him for his martial prowess and ability to pick apart an opponent's defense in such a minimal amount of time. He noted the passion his friend had for the order and its ideology, that there was an eagerness in Balteus to do good for the rest of the galaxy as they had done for him.

It seemed as if the Fiani apprentice was correct in his approach as they had agreed so long as R'ashtaro would be tasked with keeping an eye on his development more closely to truly see if Balteus could be a Jedi with such a weak connection to the force. But it was all for not. Shortly thereafter that smile on R'ashtaro would turn into a cold expression of disbelief, attempting to force the smile back on multiple times as they explained that Balteus had harmed a close friend of theirs and escaped immediately afterward.


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It was only a matter of time before they found out what happened to her and that's when they decided I had become a threat. I wasn't something they truly worried about until I took one of their own and showed them what this 'animal' could do. Every ability she had she threw at me and every time and I showed her that she knew next to nothing about fighting for your life. I think she started to understand when I cracked that first rib and right before she went unconscious too from the impact. She either died that day or she survived with enough scars to remember what an 'unsophisticated' animal can do when its provoked.

They've asked for me to lure out an old friend of mine. Need to test the new hardware and see if the alterations are holding up well and to be quite honest, I'm so eager to see him again. Time for an ol' fashion
Fox Hunt.


Equipment

+ Sword anointed with force based alchemy, given as a gift.
+ Unidentified Right Arm Prosthetic
+ Tactical Gear
+ SKULL / Servo Drone


 
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