NoiceI like your Naboo character.
Theme(?)
As a suggestion
Gotcha on the cybernetic eye and im kinda stuck on the background.Tech level, especially the eye and the internal storage isgoing to be way too complex for the site. The main thing is that its too delicate. Even in the movies, and the clone wars, there is some augmentation; but that is bulky and is only replacement parts. The site is over a thousand years before this.
Love the background, and am happy to helpwith any more detail that I'm sure you'll want to add! :D
I wouldn't nind at all if you help. I encourage itJust to give you more thought to expand on the background. Can you tell us more about about the Earl of Vis (even if your character many not know the details). Has your guy been on any missions, even minor ones? Has his sneaking around turned up anything noteworthy? Any "establishing character moments"? What about his family? What did his mother and father think about him, did they do anything with him?
I don't mind helping either, if I can.