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Archlonus:
Dhirh:
NAME: Archlonus Tuang, Dhirh Lin
FACTION: Pentacle Athame Order
RANK: Neophyte, Shaman
SPECIES: Mandalorian, Miraluka
AGE: 24, 29
GENDER: Male, Male
HEIGHT: 6’5, 5’10
WEIGHT: 240lbs, 180lbs
EYES: Dark Blue, None
HAIR: Black, silver
SKIN: Olive tan, White
CREDITS:1000, 1000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS:
Archlonus: Aside from being an abnormally large man, even by Mandalorian standards, Archlonus has no major distinguishing marks.
Dhirh: Being a Miraluka, he has no eyes, though he does have sockets. A scar passes down the left side of his face, crossing over where an eye would have been. His silver hair also stands out, A rare occurrence to naturally happen for his people.
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes, Yes
STRENGTH: Arch is monstrously strong, and very tough skinned. He is proficient in close quarter combat, often overpowering multiple enemies at once. He is skilled with a variety of close quarter weapons, often preferring ones of the heavier varieties.
Dhirh’s has moderate strength, relying more on speed then brute force. He is able to hold his own one on one in close combat, but can easily be overwhelmed with two or more people.
Their true strength comes in their ability to operate as one unit; they perfectly play on each other’s strengths and cover each other’s weaknesses. This allows their combat prowess to far exceed the limits of their individual abilities.
DEXTERITY: Both Arch and Dhirh are Dexterous enough to move around and move around quikly. They are very nimble when the time calls for it, which is a rather impressive feat for Arch, considering his size.
CONSTITUTION: Arch is an ox of a man, having a very high constitution. It takes a great deal to harm him, and an even greater deal to take him out. Having an extremely high pain tolerance Arch is essentially a tank. A common trait for a Mandalorian
Dhirh is not as hardened as Arch; he is susceptible to injury and sickness like many others. It is essentially much easier to physically put down Dhirh then it is Arch.
INTELLIGENCE: Arch’s intelligence is nothing more than average, he’s a born soldier, and normally lets all of the deeper though go to Dhirh. Arch playes more of the muscle role.
Inteligence is where Dhirh shines, able to conjure up fullproof plans for him and his brother. He can handle delicate operations with his brain alone. A born tactician Dhirh is Arch’s flip side of a coin.
WISDOM: at the moment, the extents of Arch’s force powers are purely physical. Knowing a very basic force speed and being able to add slightly more punch to his attacks. He also shares a bond with Dhirh, though the extent of it is only communication. During times of great stress or anger, Arch will go into a berserk his strength and speed increasing more than it already is, at the expense of rational thought.
Dhirh is more in tuned with the force, aside from his force sight, his connection to Arch allows him to communicate with arch, and gives Dhirh control over Arch’s emotions, to appoint where he can calm him down if need be. None of this, however, is forced upon Arch. Dhirh is indeed quite powerful in the force; however, he lacks the knowledge and experience to truly wield his powers.
CHARISMA: Describe your characters ability to charm or influence others.
FORCE POWERS:
Force sight (Dhirh)
Affect mind (Dhirh, Effects Arch only)
Telepathy, Both
Telekinesis, Dhirh
Force Sense, Dhirh
Speed, Both
Jump, Dhirh
Revitalize, Dhirh
Illusion, Dhirh
Alter Environment,Dhirh
Lightning, Dhirh
SKILLS:
Arch is greatly focused on battle, being a monster in the field, against normal opponents at least. Having yet to face a jedi, of the light nor dark variety.
Dhirh, however, is able to use his high intelligence to his advantage, he is able to hack into most security ports and terminals. This also contributed to his prowess as a combat tactician.
LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
Floating lightsabers
STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Arch and Dhirh's biggest strength is bond. Dhirh keeps Arch from having any blind spots, while Arch keeps the main bulk of adversaries off of Dhirh. Their efficiency together makes them much more deadly then could ever be alone.
Arch's weakness is his temper. While his berzerk does give him a large boost in power, the toll it takes on his body and mind can be debilitating, and it can also hinder Dhirh as he has to mentally bring him back under control.
Dhirh can overthink things at times, causing him to overlook the obvious answer. this can be troublesome as it may lead to missing an opportunity to end something quickly, or cause dire consequences for him.
GEAR:
Pentacle Robes, and masks.
SHIP:
none at the moment.
PETS:
none
PERSONALITY:
Arch is a fighter, he lives for the glory and exhilaration of battle, like most mandalorians. Always longing for a new challenge, he seeks stronger foes to sate a never-ending bloodlust. Quick to anger, he is always ready to jump into the middle of the fray and wreak havoc.
Dhirh, however, is usually collected. He prefers to use tactics opposed to brute force. He hungers for more power and will stop at nothing to attain it. He prefers to stay back during a battle, providing a support role for Arch, though he does enjoy getting blood on his hands now and again, whether his own or anothers. A true sadist, another’s pain causes Dhirh joy and amusement.
Both are cold killers, the only affection for another they have is for each other. They will not turn on each other, nor put anything in-between them.
BIOGRAPHY:
Brothers, not of blood but of pact. Dhirh and Arch met on the under hostile circumstances. Both were of adolescent age, Dhire the older.
Arch ran with a small squadron of mandalorian mercenaries, Arch being the youngest and lowest member. They took a variety of jobs, from hired guard to assaulting the ones they we’re hired to protect. Arch’s chapter always worked for the highest bidder. Once he was fully accepted into his chapter of mercenaries, Arch was sent on a many missions, increasing difficulty with each. Though he was one of them, Arch was always beaten and ridiculed by his mandalorian Brethren, and learned to hate his superiors.
Dhirh was abandoned when he was younger. A blind child forced to make his way in life, forced to teach himself how to see. Life was hell. He moved from one ‘caretaker’ to the next. All they were, were people who gave him a mat to sleep on and a bowl to eat from until their pity for them ran out, and Dhirh was kicked out. Through his experiences, he was humbled, stood tall, and humbled again, though one thing always held true in his head, he needed power. Over time, he learned to use the force to an extent, though he was unaware of it, thinking it only as “Mental prowess.” He used this to his advantage, gaining control of weak minded people, and felt a position of power for the first time in his life. Dhirh collected a band of other misfits, forming a small gang. He and his followers gained infamy through their attacks and thefts, so far as gaining a bounty of considerable size for robbing and assaulting a noble.
This Bounty was picked up by Archlonus’ group, thinking it would be an easy pay-day. They we’re well thought out, Ambushing Dhirh’s gang as they headed back to one of their safe houses in the middle of the night. Dhirh himself, however, was not there. Dhirh’s people were slaughtered, Dhirh feeling the echoed it left. HE felt no connection to those street urchins, they we’re simply his tools for his own personal gain. Dhirh did know, however, that he was next. So he planned, moved to an indiscreet location, trapped it, and waited.
The traps killed the majority of the group, a blast assaulting Arch head on, Arch simply charging through it. This was when he caught the attention of Dhirh. In the chaos of the traps, very few mandalorians were able to make it through to Dhirh, the ones that did, were simply killed by him, a slit throat from the shadows. When the smoke cleared, Dhirh was surrounded. Two elder members of the mandalorian chapter, and Archlonus. Dhirh crept into the depths of Arch’s mind, seeing his hate for the men that he stood by. “You do not have to work for them.” his voice echoed in Arch’s head, “I know of your pain, you are of a first class warrior breed, yet treated like garbage, fight along me, you deserve more than this.”
Arch seemed to be in deep thought as they neared Dhirh, until Arch turned, Vibrosword in hand, and Drove it through the chest of his captain, Dhirh using this diversion to ram a blade of his own through the jaw of the other Mandalorian, Both dropping to the ground simultaneously.
From then, though their relationship was strained through many conflicts, they grew to call themselves brothers Traveling with each other for almost a decade now, in a never ending search for power.
KILLS:
none
DUELING RING MATCHES:
none
GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:
none
ROLE-PLAYS:
none
OOC: yea, my biography freaking sucks, it was rushed, and I will be doing revisions and extensions. Other than that, I’m open to any criticism
Dhirh:
NAME: Archlonus Tuang, Dhirh Lin
FACTION: Pentacle Athame Order
RANK: Neophyte, Shaman
SPECIES: Mandalorian, Miraluka
AGE: 24, 29
GENDER: Male, Male
HEIGHT: 6’5, 5’10
WEIGHT: 240lbs, 180lbs
EYES: Dark Blue, None
HAIR: Black, silver
SKIN: Olive tan, White
CREDITS:1000, 1000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS:
Archlonus: Aside from being an abnormally large man, even by Mandalorian standards, Archlonus has no major distinguishing marks.
Dhirh: Being a Miraluka, he has no eyes, though he does have sockets. A scar passes down the left side of his face, crossing over where an eye would have been. His silver hair also stands out, A rare occurrence to naturally happen for his people.
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes, Yes
STRENGTH: Arch is monstrously strong, and very tough skinned. He is proficient in close quarter combat, often overpowering multiple enemies at once. He is skilled with a variety of close quarter weapons, often preferring ones of the heavier varieties.
Dhirh’s has moderate strength, relying more on speed then brute force. He is able to hold his own one on one in close combat, but can easily be overwhelmed with two or more people.
Their true strength comes in their ability to operate as one unit; they perfectly play on each other’s strengths and cover each other’s weaknesses. This allows their combat prowess to far exceed the limits of their individual abilities.
DEXTERITY: Both Arch and Dhirh are Dexterous enough to move around and move around quikly. They are very nimble when the time calls for it, which is a rather impressive feat for Arch, considering his size.
CONSTITUTION: Arch is an ox of a man, having a very high constitution. It takes a great deal to harm him, and an even greater deal to take him out. Having an extremely high pain tolerance Arch is essentially a tank. A common trait for a Mandalorian
Dhirh is not as hardened as Arch; he is susceptible to injury and sickness like many others. It is essentially much easier to physically put down Dhirh then it is Arch.
INTELLIGENCE: Arch’s intelligence is nothing more than average, he’s a born soldier, and normally lets all of the deeper though go to Dhirh. Arch playes more of the muscle role.
Inteligence is where Dhirh shines, able to conjure up fullproof plans for him and his brother. He can handle delicate operations with his brain alone. A born tactician Dhirh is Arch’s flip side of a coin.
WISDOM: at the moment, the extents of Arch’s force powers are purely physical. Knowing a very basic force speed and being able to add slightly more punch to his attacks. He also shares a bond with Dhirh, though the extent of it is only communication. During times of great stress or anger, Arch will go into a berserk his strength and speed increasing more than it already is, at the expense of rational thought.
Dhirh is more in tuned with the force, aside from his force sight, his connection to Arch allows him to communicate with arch, and gives Dhirh control over Arch’s emotions, to appoint where he can calm him down if need be. None of this, however, is forced upon Arch. Dhirh is indeed quite powerful in the force; however, he lacks the knowledge and experience to truly wield his powers.
CHARISMA: Describe your characters ability to charm or influence others.
FORCE POWERS:
Force sight (Dhirh)
Affect mind (Dhirh, Effects Arch only)
Telepathy, Both
Telekinesis, Dhirh
Force Sense, Dhirh
Speed, Both
Jump, Dhirh
Revitalize, Dhirh
Illusion, Dhirh
Alter Environment,Dhirh
Lightning, Dhirh
SKILLS:
Arch is greatly focused on battle, being a monster in the field, against normal opponents at least. Having yet to face a jedi, of the light nor dark variety.
Dhirh, however, is able to use his high intelligence to his advantage, he is able to hack into most security ports and terminals. This also contributed to his prowess as a combat tactician.
LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
Floating lightsabers
STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Arch and Dhirh's biggest strength is bond. Dhirh keeps Arch from having any blind spots, while Arch keeps the main bulk of adversaries off of Dhirh. Their efficiency together makes them much more deadly then could ever be alone.
Arch's weakness is his temper. While his berzerk does give him a large boost in power, the toll it takes on his body and mind can be debilitating, and it can also hinder Dhirh as he has to mentally bring him back under control.
Dhirh can overthink things at times, causing him to overlook the obvious answer. this can be troublesome as it may lead to missing an opportunity to end something quickly, or cause dire consequences for him.
GEAR:
Pentacle Robes, and masks.
SHIP:
none at the moment.
PETS:
none
PERSONALITY:
Arch is a fighter, he lives for the glory and exhilaration of battle, like most mandalorians. Always longing for a new challenge, he seeks stronger foes to sate a never-ending bloodlust. Quick to anger, he is always ready to jump into the middle of the fray and wreak havoc.
Dhirh, however, is usually collected. He prefers to use tactics opposed to brute force. He hungers for more power and will stop at nothing to attain it. He prefers to stay back during a battle, providing a support role for Arch, though he does enjoy getting blood on his hands now and again, whether his own or anothers. A true sadist, another’s pain causes Dhirh joy and amusement.
Both are cold killers, the only affection for another they have is for each other. They will not turn on each other, nor put anything in-between them.
BIOGRAPHY:
Brothers, not of blood but of pact. Dhirh and Arch met on the under hostile circumstances. Both were of adolescent age, Dhire the older.
Arch ran with a small squadron of mandalorian mercenaries, Arch being the youngest and lowest member. They took a variety of jobs, from hired guard to assaulting the ones they we’re hired to protect. Arch’s chapter always worked for the highest bidder. Once he was fully accepted into his chapter of mercenaries, Arch was sent on a many missions, increasing difficulty with each. Though he was one of them, Arch was always beaten and ridiculed by his mandalorian Brethren, and learned to hate his superiors.
Dhirh was abandoned when he was younger. A blind child forced to make his way in life, forced to teach himself how to see. Life was hell. He moved from one ‘caretaker’ to the next. All they were, were people who gave him a mat to sleep on and a bowl to eat from until their pity for them ran out, and Dhirh was kicked out. Through his experiences, he was humbled, stood tall, and humbled again, though one thing always held true in his head, he needed power. Over time, he learned to use the force to an extent, though he was unaware of it, thinking it only as “Mental prowess.” He used this to his advantage, gaining control of weak minded people, and felt a position of power for the first time in his life. Dhirh collected a band of other misfits, forming a small gang. He and his followers gained infamy through their attacks and thefts, so far as gaining a bounty of considerable size for robbing and assaulting a noble.
This Bounty was picked up by Archlonus’ group, thinking it would be an easy pay-day. They we’re well thought out, Ambushing Dhirh’s gang as they headed back to one of their safe houses in the middle of the night. Dhirh himself, however, was not there. Dhirh’s people were slaughtered, Dhirh feeling the echoed it left. HE felt no connection to those street urchins, they we’re simply his tools for his own personal gain. Dhirh did know, however, that he was next. So he planned, moved to an indiscreet location, trapped it, and waited.
The traps killed the majority of the group, a blast assaulting Arch head on, Arch simply charging through it. This was when he caught the attention of Dhirh. In the chaos of the traps, very few mandalorians were able to make it through to Dhirh, the ones that did, were simply killed by him, a slit throat from the shadows. When the smoke cleared, Dhirh was surrounded. Two elder members of the mandalorian chapter, and Archlonus. Dhirh crept into the depths of Arch’s mind, seeing his hate for the men that he stood by. “You do not have to work for them.” his voice echoed in Arch’s head, “I know of your pain, you are of a first class warrior breed, yet treated like garbage, fight along me, you deserve more than this.”
Arch seemed to be in deep thought as they neared Dhirh, until Arch turned, Vibrosword in hand, and Drove it through the chest of his captain, Dhirh using this diversion to ram a blade of his own through the jaw of the other Mandalorian, Both dropping to the ground simultaneously.
From then, though their relationship was strained through many conflicts, they grew to call themselves brothers Traveling with each other for almost a decade now, in a never ending search for power.
KILLS:
none
DUELING RING MATCHES:
none
GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:
none
ROLE-PLAYS:
none
OOC: yea, my biography freaking sucks, it was rushed, and I will be doing revisions and extensions. Other than that, I’m open to any criticism
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