Celessa Elysar

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IBI SITH CODEX: #1,346-7:69
Celessa Elysar


[NAME]
CELESSA ELYSAR​
[AFFILIATIONS]
  • MOFFDOM OF ORD CANTRELL
  • SITH
[ROLES]
  • TITLE CLAIMANT (MOFFDOM)
  • ACOLYTE (SITH)
[RACE]
HUMAN​
[ORIGIN]
ORD CANTRELL​
[AGE GSY]
16​
[GENDER]
FEMALE​
[HEIGHT]
1.49 METERS​
[WEIGHT]
44.45​
[HAIR COLOR]
CHESTNUT​
[EYE COLOR]
GREEN​
[ASSET SUMMARY]
CELESSA ELYSAR POSSESSES A MEAGER AMOUNT OF CREDITS ON HER PERSON AT ANYTIME, THOUGH SHE HAS BEEN SEEN IN EXPENSIVE ATTIRE WHENEVER SHE NEEDS TO MAKE A FORMAL APPEARANCE. SHE'S COMMONLY SEEN IN THE DARK COLORED ROBES OF A SITH AND CARRIES A HIGHLY DECORATED CROSSGUARD LIGHTSABER CRAFTED WITH A PURPLE CRYSTAL. SHE IS KNOWN TO MAKE USE OF ONE OF HER FAMILY'S LUXURY STARCRAFTS WHEN AWAY ON BUSINESS.​
[CAPABILITIES]
ACCORDING TO THOSE SHE HAS WORKED WITH, CELESSA ELYSAR IS A CAPABLE INDIVIDUAL. SHE HAS A CERTAIN TACT AND ETIQUETTE ONLY AVAILABLE TO THOSE THAT RESIDE IN THE UPPER ECHELONS OF SOCIETY. SIMILARLY, SHE HAS AN ADVANCED UNDERSTANDING OF SOCIAL SCENARIOS COMMON OF IMPERIAL DIPLOMATS DESPITE HER YOUNG AGE. SHE HAS, HOWEVER, BEEN REPORTED TO BE INEXPERIENCED IN A NUMBER OF SCENARIOS, PARTICULARLY DURING HER TIME AT THE SITH ACADEMY ON KORRIBAN. THE YOUNG WOMAN POSSESSES AVERAGE STRENGTH FOR SOMEONE HER AGE AND SIZE, THOUGH SHE DEFINITELY HAS DIFFICULTY IN OVERPOWERING HER OPPOSITION. INSTEAD, CELESSA ELYSAR IS BEST KNOWN IN COMBAT FOR HER ABILITY TO OVERWHELM HER OPPONENTS THROUGH HER AMAZING AGILITY AND NEAR-CONTORTIONIST LIKE CAPABILITIES. SHE IS STRONG IN THE FORCE, BUT LACKS TRAINING IN IT. DESPITE HER SHORTCOMINGS, THIS SITH ACOLYTE HAS BEEN KNOWN TO EXECUTE BASIC TELEKINETICS IN HER FIGHTS, SUCH AS PUSHES, PULLS, AND EVEN LIGHTSABER THROWS WHEN UNDER GREAT DURESS. SHE IS SHOWING PROMISE IN FORCE SPEED AND FORCE JUMP.​
[SUBJECT SUMMARY]
CELESSA ELYSAR WAS BORN DURING THE 1017 YEAR ABY ON THE PLANET OF ORD CANTRELL. SHE IS THE DAUGHTER OF MOFF ELYSAR, GOVERNOR OF THE ORD CANTRELL SYSTEM, AND HIS WIFE, KHAYLIA, WHO SERVES AS MOFF ELYSAR'S CONFIDANT. CELESSA IS THE YOUNGEST OF NINE CHILDREN, WITH THE OLDEST BEING THE HEIR OF ORD CANTRELL SYSTEM. CELESSA IS THE ONLY FORCE-SENSITIVE MEMBER OF HER NUCLEAR FAMILY.

LIKE HER BROTHERS AND SISTERS, CELESSA ELYSAR WAS EDUCATED IN THE MATTERS OF ETIQUETTE AND MARTIAL MANAGEMENT; MOFF ELYSAR REPORTEDLY ASPIRED TO HAVE HIS ENTIRE FAMILY WORKING FOR THE IMPERIAL GOVERNMENT. MOFF ELYSAR AND HIS WIFE ARRANGED A NUMBER OF THEIR CHILDREN'S MARRIAGES IN AN EFFORT TO SPREAD THEIR FAMILY'S INFLUENCE.

WHEN CELESSA WAS DISCOVERED TO BE FORCE SENSITIVE AT THE AGE OF EIGHT, SHE WAS IMMEDIATELY THRUST INTO THE RIGORS OF THE SITH ACADEMY. SHE LEARNED A NUMBER OF SKILLS AS SHE PROGRESSED THROUGH THE ACADEMY, AND AT THE AGE OF FIFTEEN, SHE COMPLETED HER PRELIMINARY TRAINING AND LEFT IN SEARCH OF A MASTER. SHE SPENT TIME UNDER THE TUTELAGE OF HER PATERNAL GRANDFATHER, WHO SUBSEQUENTLY DIED OF NATURAL CAUSES SIX MONTHS AFTER THEIR TIME TOGETHER. CELESSA INHERITED HIS LIGHTSABER AND BEGAN TRAINING IN THE MAKASHI FORM.

SHE IS KNOWN TO BE IN SEARCH OF A NEW MASTER.​
[PSYCHOLOGICAL SYNOPSIS]
CELESSA ELYSAR, ACCORDING TO THOSE INTERVIEWED, DOES NOT APPEAR TO BE A SITH AT FIRST GLANCE. THEY CLAIM THAT SHE IS ETERNALLY CHEERY AND ALMOST SACCHARINE ENOUGH TO LEAVE A BITTER TASTE IN SOMEONE'S MOUTH, THOUGH STRANGELY MORBID ENOUGH TO KEEP THAT FROM HAPPENING. SHE COMES OFF AS VERY RESPECTFUL; THOSE THAT KNOW HER WILL CLAIM THAT THERE'S AN AMBITIOUS GLINT IN HER EYE. ACCORDING TO THEM, CELESSA IS EAGER TO PLEASE, IF NOT SOMEONE ELSE, THEN HERSELF. THE TRAINING FROM HER FATHER AND MOTHER HAVE GONE A LONG WAY; SHE KNOWS JUST WHAT TO SAY AND WHEN TO SAY IT. SHE POSSESSES AN INCOHERENT AMOUNT OF RESPECT FOR THOSE STRONGER THAN HER, PERHAPS BROUGHT ON BY FEAR THAT SITH INSPIRE IN COMMON FOLK.

CELESSA MAY BE APPROACHED; SHE IS NOT A THREAT TO THE EMPIRE.​
[BASIC STATISTICS]​
  • Strength: ■■■■■■■■■■
  • Dexterity: ■■■■■■■■■
  • Constitution: ■■■■■■■■■■
  • Intelligence: ■■■■■■■■■■
  • Wisdom: ■■■■■■■■■■
  • Charisma: ■■■■■■■■■
[FORCE ABILITIES]
  • Core Powers: ■■■■■■■■■■
LIGHTSABER FORMS
  • Shii-Cho: ■■■■■■■■■■
  • Makashi: ■■■■■■■■■■
[TECH SKILLS]​
  • ADMIN: ■■■■■■■■■■
    [*]Slicing: ■■■■■■■■■■

FIRST PERSON BIO GOODNESS TBA​

 
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Character is doneish~~~~

I'll write the first person bio soon, but I'm too coded out to continue haha. Any feedback is appreciated. :D
 

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B-but I like small font!

*sobs*
 

Rayel Olaneko

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Lol it's fine -zooms- Just makes it hard for those of us who arn't 15 anymore :)
 

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I sent you a PM but just noticed something additional. Acolyte's can't start with Force Choke. Also, as I mentioned in the PM, I think you might have too many abilities and maybe too strong in some. Just personal opinion in that regard, maybe take a look at other profiles and see what other people have?

Either way, you definitely can't start with Force Choke.
 

Wess

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I went ahead and replied to your PM, explained my mastery thing and how there are essentially fifteen bars to fill. I also removed several of the Force Powers including Force Choke.

Also, just to give you an example of how this works, a full orange bar is the equivalent of "three" on the ten scale system.
 
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