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Drane T'keen

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Ask a man last night what he had to drink—a man would tell you it was a glass of red wine.
Merlot, to be precise, lapping at that flow of graphite, blackberries, black cherries, and oak.
Swirling red nectar around and around in the bowl proud and tall from stem to base and all.
A dry wine, sweet though, class balance of fruit and earth given birth in a hall to both so fine.

Ask a man this morning what he would have to drink and he told the server “a caffè, please”.
Outside, sitting high, on a rooftop of the Antico Furio Café on the ecumenopolis of Kassido.
Caffè, in a tongue, one could call it a coffee, caf, espresso, small strong shot of black coffee.
Hot liquid, not as cool as last night’s wine, but warm with feeling against this city’s breeze.

Patrons around the man, engaged in conversation, perplexing if trying to listen in to them.
A man could try, a man might, a woman, a droid even, the latter with programmed success.
Jumbled dialogue, mumbo jumbo, not loud though; nonsense in tables amid men or women.
A man can hear them, he can sift through them, for a man is no mere man, no, a man is a Sith.

What did that mean today in a galaxy that can throw away identity like a napkin in a trash can?
Sith, Imperial, this faction or that one, words so bacterial, infectious even, to begin to label man.
Woman, droid, spirit, whatever it is, whoever he is, right now he is just a man sitting at his table.
This side of the world, this high, the sun is out, the wind is gentle; if lips can spread, his are able.

He smiles, takes a sip from his white cup, sunglasses down with morning’s sun up, not a frown.
No sadness to be found, if a contrast in color between black coffee and the white cup so round.
White table, black outfit, leather coat, trimmed in gold, against charcoal skin, eyes a black gold.
Wind tickles his hair on shoulders fallen, silver highlight while a patron calls in a server, behold.

Coffee and cakes ordered, from three tables away, a man listens in, for a force is tuned to him.
The Force, and no mistaking it, he hasn’t forsaken it, given in if he has to the chaos of the wind.
Last night, a gust from the ocean, heavy and violent, but this morning is so sweet and so benign.
A man, a Sith, whoever or whatever he is, sits watching the city’s clouds go by, the past is behind.

Rim of cup to his lips, he licks them, swallows a flame, fire in his veins, as frozen as his name.
He is what he is, always has been, a man named Drane T’keen, gold black vision is his world.
Whatever that means, the man can’t say, just enjoys the sound of the café, with fingers curled.
One hand on cup, other hand on lap, grasping the flap of a black leather jacket, whose hilt slays.

A lightsaber, but no one knows it, no one nearby is Force-sensitive, only him, he made sure of it.
His senses, as sharp as his ears, his eyes, this Sith sitting nearby, to her and him, all those patrons.
Oblivious, ignorance is bliss, they have nothing on him, but he has everything on them, her, him.
His name's Drane, he came to slay, here on Kassido, in a café, where a noble of House Esso sits.
 

Drane T'keen

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Caffè. Rich, smooth, with hints of berry, spice, flower. It isn’t ash, despite the ash in his hair.
Silver streaks, grey highlights, by midnight, those black waves, or as some ladies would say.
He wouldn’t deny, smiling their way last night, even today, beneath black eyes, his shades.
Across tables, a couple look at him, but isn’t looking at them, not really. He does not stare.

A warm morning, no less pleasant than the previous evening, if different, like wine beside coffee.
Drane T’keen, a name not worth mentioning, for he isn’t a lord so much as sword, won’t be more.
Today, that’s why he came. No agent of fate, he isn’t an assassin per se, even if he came to slay.
His target could wait, they had to stay, for a public place was not the name of this Sith’s game.

Beside cup and saucer was a plate of complimentary pastries of sfogliatelle and cannoli.
Taking a sip, he lifts one to his lips, bites off a morsel, chews, swallows, suddenly in bliss.
Sweet, this business, whether sitting in a café or waiting to take the life of a nearby being.
No hired blaster, he’s no hitman, no, had his reasons for putting Nylvio Esso on his hit list.

Growing fat. Drane can’t quite do that, fast metabolism and everything. Nope, but you can.
He thinks of his target, a family man of House Esso, growing fat from the bones of wrath.
Son of the Red Sun. A man reminds himself. Drane, a warrior in name, just as much a blade.
This wasn't so much a Sith's business as it was revenge for an insult that House Esso made.

Nylvio Esso. Another sip of caf. Resting your elbows. So blissful. A fat man, yes, of such repugnance.
Drane is blissful, intends to be for the moment, listening to the music, letting it move within him.
It wasn't every day that the Thyrsian decided to go hunting over the matter of someone's honor.
When it came to a lover, however, that was an entirely different story, and he'd have none of it.

Ahhh, liquid lyrics, like a woman's kiss on my skin. He can't deny it. The female vocalist was exquisite.
Quite like the coffee, a bold nectar, like blood in any weather, and soon one man would be an exhibit.
There's more to this business than settling a lover's dispute, however. House Esso had a kind of weapon.
A Sith could use it, sure, but so could the Jedi. Porky pies. Nylvio gets up. Drane should too. Now to tail him.

A final sip, black liquid drip, beneath clouds in a sunlit canopy on this planet called Kassido. With its Nylvio.
A man like Drane almost doesn't want to leave, so caught up in the breeze of simply sitting, quiet, content.
Duty calls, a warrior hears it, for his sword follows it, and death's a hollow gift, it marches with him. Oh yes.
Black Swordsman, some called him, a dark duelist of the dark side, a Sith for carnage. You'll be French toast.
 

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Nylvio of House Esso. Had a nice ring to it, a kind of majesty to the nobility mind, Drane thinks.
A name was much and more, little and less, for a name often meant a reputation and everything.
Take it from a Thyrsian, where warriors were born to bleed and be bled, battle and war for destiny.
Drane T’keen was a name that probably meant a pigeon’s dropping compared to his contemporary.

Oh well. I bet he bleeds the same as me.
Truthfully, Drane would be content with a lady.
The day was sunny, summer unspent, and the coffee was exquisite, so why not wait?
Except he was bound by an honor that went beyond an ex-girlfriend and no mistake.
So he got up from his seat, gave a bow to the server, tip on the table, took his leave.

And the clouds began to darken just as Drane T’keen began to walk the city streets.
Rain. What a way to spoil a sunny day. He had no hat, no umbrella, but it isn’t raining.
Not yet, anyway, just a grey overcast as clouds encompass the sun. Mm, still some ray.
Golden sliver poked out between the sheets as Drane glimpsed the sky of a dying day.

It was early, fairly, evening still having to wait, but this man could not delay as he walked along.
As casually as a tourist in need of some more spoiling, making sure to look a bit more boring.
Just a pedestrian, as if a resident, an inhabitant of this planet, leaving the cafe for the throngs.
The denizens of the day, the masses of city life, whose paths were paved for every such story.

Bakery on the left. Theater on the right. Drane smiled at a passerby, spotting a pretzel stand.
Doctor’s on the right. Lingerie on the left. A woman before him caught his gaze, a subtle glance.
Swipe the hand, the pretzels levitated away from the stand in an instant, no one noticed. O so deft.
He had to be as he moved his feet, for Drane T’keen was not walking aimlessly. Just a game of chess.

Before him, pacing some meters away, was that patron from the same cafe, that Nylvio Esso.
On his way to who knew where, and that was fair, for tailing him meant being led to his secrets.
Emotions, they could get the better of a Sith, but Drane had a way of making things just business.
You could slight him, could insult him, but step on the toes of those he cared about? Sorry. But…no…

Traffic on one side, buildings on the other. Bodyguards on one side, bodyguards on the other.
I bet their necks crack like walnuts. Drane hoped so, but held off on the judo chop as he walked.
He needed to know where Nylvio Esso was going, for there was more to this than revenge for her.
For her. Drane reminded himself. I remember. Rather well. For now, he just moved along and stalked.

Drane trusted his own gaze, focusing forward, distracted by the chorus of thunder’s rain.
The threat of it, anyway, as something struck his shoulder and interrupted his very pace.
“Sorry!” A lady proclaimed. “Don’t worry,” Drane smiled. “Have a pretzel.” It was glazed.
She smiled back and bit in, stood still, but Drane didn’t look behind as he walked away.

Oh, bullocks. Where had Nylvio gone off to? He turned a corner, perhaps? Maybe that way?
Patience. Wait for it. Savor the moment.
Drane wasn’t one to give into mindless violence.
His was always with purpose, like punishing miscreants for disobeying the Sith’s claim.
What did that mean today, anyway? Fear is for the weak. You’ll bring him to his. Crying.

He wasn’t elitist, didn’t care if you were Empire or Sith, only if you're weak or strong.
Strength, Drane. Give way to your sense. He breathed in, out, and he felt his steering.
Drane. You came to slay. His parents may say. They weren’t wrong as he moved on.
Between buildings, a path fit for nobility, and there he was, Nylvio, near a building.
 

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Got you. The side street led to another row of buildings quite like any other in this city.
Only narrower, with room enough for only a couple of vehicles to pass along through.
Not an alley, not really, except that this was the alleyway where prey will meet death.
Maybe... One man’s quarry would certainly stare into its eyes, anyway. And no mistake.

He had to be tailed first. So Drane tailed his target, followed behind, kept his distance.
Nylvio had a whole entourage with him in black suits and sunglasses. Ooh. Dangerous.
The Sith was also dressed in black, more leather than rich fabric. It served its purpose.
Hand in pocket, other swaying by side, walking casually, not strutting, though certain.

Just a lone pedestrian on his way to one of those buildings. Maybe. Which one, Nylvio?
A couple on the path ahead, holding hands, walking Drane’s way. He waved a polite hello.
The man kept his gaze on the woman, the woman looked away just as she passed Drane.
A silent whistle between his lips. Sorry, miss. Seems we are both already presently engaged.

He had a mission, anyway. His was business if personal. Only one girl for him in all of the world.
And you know, don’t you, fat man? He heard Nylvio laugh over nothing even though far ahead.
Passing prosperous buildings on the right and left, either side with green trees, gates of pearl.
Houses for the luxurious. It is a fairly fancy neighborhood. Enough money to buy a new head?

At the end of a street, before it curves toward a corner leading to another, is a bigger structure.
More pedestrians, and a plethora of vehicles on a lot much larger than the street paved beside.
The architecture is wondrous. Splendid. Simply splendid. Drane could appreciate a nice sight.
The lady at his back, for instance, who cheekily peeked into his eyes, if yet a tragic reminder.

There was a free ticket for cheating with a consequence that Nylvio Esso would soon learn.
Forward, Drane T’keen walked, a shadow in the day, though it was grey as it gently rained.
Pitter-patter on the shoulders of his jacket. Valets in front of the entrance. And bouncers.
Pretty dresses, sleek suits, Nylvio entered. Drane had no invitation. Yay for Force Persuade.

At the entrance to the dance hall, banquet hall, a building for parties, he timed it.
Waited for an older gentleman and lady to enter ahead of him without attention.
A gap in the line of partygoers, it's just Drane and two bouncers at the entrance.
"You have...invitation?" One asked him. Drane waved. "You don't need to see it."

"We do not need to see your invitation."
"Enjoy the party." "Enjoy the party." Parrot.
So Drane moved along. Ah. Another in leather.
If richer but at least Drane won't need to change.

Some in suits, tuxedos, leather jackets, dresses.
All of them amid tables and with wine glasses.
Whiskey. Champagne. Whatever is their fancy.
Listening to live music but none yet dancing.

Force Sense is neat. Hello, Nylvio.
The fat man floated in the middle.
Nonchalant pace, Drane approached.
Hope you like being crushed like a Skittle.
 

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Any moment from now and Drane’s blade would emerge for some well deserved bane and murder.
He had to admit it. Well he didn’t have to in the slightest. Didn’t even have to give any explanation.
His target didn’t deserve it. But, if he did, Drane would say he had it coming. That death was earned.
Because of what he did. Nylvio Esso. The Thyrsian twisted his lips. Time to die. The finest decapitation.

Drane’s fingers slip behind the fabric of his black leather jacket. Hand on the hilt. Ready to kill.
“Wine?” A server stepped in front of his face that very moment. Holding a tray. “Champagne?”
Damn it. “Get out of my way.” Waiter stepped aside. Drane looked left and right. His fist filled.
Yet suddenly he could no longer see his target. He sensed his presence. It shifted. Which way?

Behind the server were guys and gals in lines. The music had shifted. The crowd had appeared.
It grew. Music did too. String instrument. Mandolin? Queue a lady singer to beckon their ears.
Drane was no player of it but he knew his music. Where are you? Nylvio was simply nowhere.
The only Sith in the village paced about, reached out, surrounded, faces around him. Upstairs.

A pair of guards stood by either side of a door. VIP only. Upstairs was clearly not public access.
Damn it. He could convince them like the other two idiots outside. Yet there would be witnesses.
He had no business with it. He waited. He watched. He listened. To women in some conversation.
“Marvelous dress, darling! Shan’t you dance? The Baron will be taking audience for only the best!”

Perfect. This Thyrsian Sith did know his weapons. His sword. It swings and sings quite like music.
And he knew how to dance with or without a weapon. In the end, this may prove to be amusing.
Flanking the great ballroom, patrons at tables, sitting, standing, watching, listening, not dancing.
Others began to as they filled the center of the room. Time to shine. Oh, he could. He’d prove it.

But…who with..? He needed a good candidate.
“Wine?” It was the same server. “Champagne?”
Right. His subconscious mind trick clearly did it.
Made the waiter forget Drane as he held his tray.

“Thank you.” Drane claimed a glass of golden bubbly and took a sip.
It was actually rather delicious. “You are a gentleman and a scholar.”

“Sorry, sir, I am a server—”
“Move along, move along.”
Server nodded. Walked on.
Now to find a good dancer.

He saw her... A woman in a red dress patterned in floral emblems.
She moved like liquid. Flowed like the fabric that hugged her hips.
A man held them as she dipped into his rhythm, shifted with him.
Drane didn’t delay. Didn’t dally. Didn’t wait until their song ended.

“Excuse me,” he offered after walking up to the pair. “May I have this dance?”
“Certainly,” the man smiled back. The woman didn’t. Yet she also didn’t frown.
She just looked at the man in the black leather jacket, eyes so chocolate brown.
Red lips as plump as her plush red dress. She gives into his gaze. And her hand.
 
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