Confronting your fears

[Faded]

1. What is going to happen in your plot?
Razor Magnos and two other exiles will venture to the icy world of Ilum in search for a hidden Holocron. It is hidden deep in a cavern system and will require navigation through treacherous terrain as well as a deep crawl down into the system. There they will encounter an Exile Master who wishes the holocron for himself, a fight will ensue, and hopefully the protagonists will win.

2. What other players will be a part of this?
Myself, two other PC with exile characters. Esther Nyx and RVFVS have demonstrated interest.

3. Where are all the places (if more than one) that your plot will be taking place?
Ilum

4. Please provide a basic in-character timeline of what you expect to happen.
- Characters will arrive at Ilum's spaceport through three separate starfighters.
- They will meet at a cantina where they will have to force/convince a smuggler to give up datapad information containing the coordinates.
- Speeder bike to destination
- Crawl into Cavern
- Locate Holocron and find Exile master already attempting to retrieve it
- Engage in a 3v1 battle against an Exile master ( level 2) character.

5. What do you or your character hope to achieve with this plot? What is the "end-game"?
- Holocron contains teachings to learn Force Fear/Force Horror. I know that these are level 2 powers but I felt our characters should learn the basics of them now and then when my character becomes a level 2, can begin to use the abilities. I would also like to be rewarded 200 credits at end of this plotline.

6. Do you need any involvement of canon NPCs or faction leaders to be DMed by a staff member? If so, please detail who/what and for what purpose.

Yes, I will require NPC of the Cantina smuggler and would like to have a staff member/moderator play the Exile Master we will face at end of plot. The cantina smuggler is used to provide the information while the Exile Master will need to be killed in order to retrieve the holocron.

 

[Valen Pelora]

Hey @Faded Truth there are a couple issues with what you have outlined. I have addressed them below.

• Holocrons: Holocrons are exceedingly rare and incredibly dangerous. Darkside Holocrons even more so than their Lightside counterparts. It would take an extensive and detailed plot to obtain a Darkside Holocron. What you have outlined here is insufficient.
• Ilum: After the tragedy on Ilum it is essentially abandoned. No one is on Ilum and it's incredibly unusual for anyone to be there. Now, that doesn't mean folks don't go there but it obviously involves aspects you have outlined above. There would also need to be staff DMing involved on Ilum, just as with Tython, because of the unique circumstances.
• Reward: Credits are based on staff discretion and while you could search for the Holocron as outlined above you would not find it. The reward would have to be something different.
• Suggestion: If you wish to keep the plot as is, I would suggest a different reward and a different planet. You can certainly RP this plot on Ilum the staff just needs to have some involvement. If you want to find a holocron the submission needs to be reworked.

With these things in mind, the plot is rejected until changes are made.