Daemon Drexl

[Revan Rand]

NAME: Daemon Drexl
FACTION:Ex-Mandalorian(Freelance)
RANK:None
SPECIES: Human
AGE:24
GENDER:Male
HEIGHT: 6'4
WEIGHT:200
EYES: Black
HAIR:Black hair in a straight style fashion with a combed Beachwave styled front in the front of his hair.In other words a thick crew cut with hair sticking out in the front like a beach wave and the hair is thicker not to see the skull,but not to thick like a wookiee
SKIN: Tan(Like hispanicish)
CREDITS: 1,000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: N/A
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes
STRENGTH: Has Fairly good strength,has a bit of broad shoulders and strength of an ordinary mandalorian
DEXTERITY: Pretty quick all around,can go fast when something scares the crap out of him
CONSTITUTION: Good Health,withstood a ship crash
INTELLIGENCE: Knows a lot about the galaxy's planets,few factions,and street smarts,has minor understanding of Jedi talk
WISDOM: Knows very well in history,technology,and literature,
CHARISMA:Enough to get a girl!:CSly.Has some ability to persuade people

FORCE POWERS:N/A


SKILLS:Sniping, Hand-to-hand combat,computer slicing,piloting,smuggling,repair


LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:N/A


STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:Strength: Computers,smuggling,combat.
Weaknesses: Demolitions,Mathematics,Force Powers
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GEAR:Grappling Iron,Computer Spikes,Repair Spikes,Medpacs,Lightsaber(Inherited from his father),Thermal Detonators ,Arkanian Pistol




DROIDS:N/A


PETS:N/A


PERSONALITY:Cocky,Annoying in the mood,Easy-going in a cantina,Funny,has a habit of flirting with pretty women
BIOGRAPHY: Daemon Drexl became an orphan at age 2 when his Jedi father,and his mandalorian mother were murdered by a group of dark jedi during a trip to Bespin.While his parents were at Bespin,he as under the care of Mandalorians,and when his parents died he inherited his mother's stealth generator,and his father blue lightsaber,which he never used.After he was orphaned he lived with the Mandalorian Clan:Ordo on the planet Ordo,but was discriminated because of bieng a half Mandalorian,when he was 17 he was exiled from the clans after he challenged the Mandalore's belief of the Jedi.

When he left,he stole a smuggler classed ship from the Ordo port dock.He set out on an exile path visiting worlds,and doing odd-jobs for the exchange,often smuggling spice to other planets,he settled down on the planet of Taris,and made it his prime planet,despite having an apartmeant in the Upper City he'd either hang out in the Lower City or was on a different planet doing odd-jobs or exploring,he's currently a freelance and serves nobody,for even the Exchange doesn't tend to get in his way.He has a bad hatred for the sith scince it was the faction that murdered his parents and girlfriend.

KILLS:N/A


BOUNTIES COLLECTED:N/A

DUELING RING MATCHES:N/A

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:N/A

ROLE-PLAYS:Pressure's of the underworld

SHIPS: Daemon's ship is a smuggler classed ship(fairly similar to the Ebon Hawk only a bit smaller and it black and red),it has two mobile gun turrets,a secret compartment for spices 8 rooms and a garage,with a big center.(For those who played KoTOR it's like that)

 

[Savior]

I'd just like to point out that there's no such thing as being half-Mandalorian. It's a way of life, not a race of people.

 

[Jaqen H'ghar]

Shrink the picture and I might give reading this a shot :P

 

[Dmitri]

I see you took the name from KOTOR Mod Brotherhood of Shadows. The bio looks a little similiar.

 

[Revan Rand]

I'd just like to point out that there's no such thing as being half-Mandalorian. It's a way of life, not a race of people.

To start this future long lasting pointless argument over a Star Wars faction,the thing is Mandalorians are a race of people that come from clans,there are many real life cultures and races that model the Mandalorian style of clans/tribes,I mean if it's a way of life,it is fairly easy to join,like a religion,but it's not a religion I mean Mandalorians have clans such as clan ordo,fett,even Mandalore themselves.To become a mandalorian isn't like going to their cache's and say "Hey I'd like to join you guys! I have seen the light!"Like it's some sort of religion.Most members are from parents(Go on the star wars wiki for Mandalorian customs) It's practicably a faction to be born with,like being a Jedi,you can't just go in the temple without being force sensitive,so I'm sticking to this decision,so we can have a long boring argument on the internet over my character.

The call of a big argument begins

By the way that's what I like to point out

 

[Revan Rand]

Shrink the picture and I might give reading this a shot :P

Eh..sorry about that,the link gave me a stupid pic,which Idk how to fix(I'm a noob sue me)the picture properly so sorry about the big stupid star ship!

I see you took the name from KOTOR Mod Brotherhood of Shadows. The bio looks a little similiar.

Well at I knew it'd be a matter of time before it was noticed,but all I can say is in my defense,is that Daemon Drexl is not a canon character,so there isn't some patent,and that the name is clearly entitled to a fanon roleplay,if by any chance I took the entire guy's datafile and info of Daemon Drexl and added it into a mod I made,then that's something to get worked up over for

From what I remember Drexl's bio was more of a shady,dark,gang-respected guy,and from the way he looked,he doesn't really suit the image of a cocky mandalorian in his 20's

 

[Cisco]

Okay here's my input.

I'd like to point out some things. I looked over the profile and read it over, you know. The thing Is, there are a lot of things you could do to improve the profile. First and foremost the grammar, spelling, and punctuation, are very off making the profile hard to read. Continuing off of that you should probably work on the formatting of your profile, you have things written in the profile that are not needed as you don't even have them filled in, you could also separate the bit that describes Strength and the like away from his information above.

For your history and personality. The site seems to have the requirement that you at least have fifty words worth of personality, which you done. His history is in my opinion kinda screwy, There is no such thing as a 'half' Mandalorian. Your character was born to a Mandalorian parent and lived on a Mandalorian planet and was raised by Mandalorians. Jango Fett, before becoming a Mandalorian was the child of a Farmer but was Adopted by Jaster Mereel. There's no reason for him to be discriminated against by others as by what Wookieepedia said they were a fairly tight knit group.

Also, does he have a picture of some sort?

 

[HunterOrdo]

Hm only note that I can truly help you on is that after ever comma put a space.

For example instead of but,he. Put a space, so it is: but, he.

 

[Xyrael]

BIOGRAPHY: Daemon Drexl became an orphan at age 2 when his Jedi father,and his mandalorian mother were murdered by a group of dark jedi during a trip to Bespin.While his parents were at Bespin,he as under the care of Mandalorians,and when his parents died he inherited his mother's stealth generator,

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He has a bad hatred for the sith scince it was the faction that murdered his parents and girlfriend.

Stealth generator? I thought those were no-no's. Granted it's not listed on the characters items, but I recall reading that they were strictly regulated military items only. Also, where'd the girlfriend bit come in? First time she's mentioned and it's the last word in the bio, it seems disjointed.

HAIR:Black hair in a straight style fashion with a combed Beachwave styled front in the front of his hair.In other words a thick crew cut with hair sticking out in the front like a beach wave and the hair is thicker not to see the skull,but not to thick like a wookiee
SKIN: Tan(Like hispanicish)

Honestly the first thing that came to my mind was Greaser hair.

With some punctuation and grammar fixing, and a bit more detail, you'll be good.