Darius Jax Eclipse

[Dagon]

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NAME: Darius Jax Eclipse

FACTION: Hutt Cartel

RANK: Besadi -- Enforcer

SPECIES: Human

AGE: 28

GENDER: Male

FORCE SENSITIVE: No


APPEARANCE:

Height: 5’ 11”

Weight: 156 lb

Hair: Wind-swept black

Eye color: Golden

Skin complexion: Fair

Body Type: Lean Muscular


ATTRIBUTES:

Darius Jax Eclipse has a set of skills which he has started to fine-tune within the years when he was a solo “hunter”. These attributes include stealth, perception, ranged combat, hand-to-hand combat(very little of it), and CQC combat.

Strength: 6/10

Dexterity: 9/10

Constitution: 5/10

Intelligence: 8/10

Wisdom: 7/10

Charisma: 4/10


PERSONALITY:

Darius is sly and quick to respond to anything he perceives as a threat, whether verbal or physical. He can think for himself, but does not mind advice from those who he views as more knowledgeable than himself. He understands how and when to hold and release his temper, with that usually being around the remains of dead enemies, or during the actual fight...


BIOGRAPHY:

In his youth, he lived on one of the Core Worlds. He was a bright child, who would have done well in almost any career he choose, but he managed to waste it all when he was recruited, and accepted the offer, by the Republic Special Forces. He would also come to forget all of his childhood when he started to train with the Republic Special Forces, at the age of 21. It was during a mission that some type of grenade malfunctioned, resulting in a luckily just a concussion. However, this concussion wiped some of his memories away. He forgot all childhood memories but not his most recent skills. It took him a year to recuperate and relearn the essentials, but by that time his portion of the Republic Special Forces has been disbanded. Taking with him his trusty D-21, he went off-world for a bit of “retirement” which in truth was bounty hunting with a licensed weapon. During his memory wipe he lost the fact that he had been a loyal soldier of the Republic, and since he did not remember such, he was able to happily enlist his skills with the Hutt Cartel. Within it he is hired for his skills in Infiltration.


SKILLS:

Infiltration

Marksmanship

Engineering ~ Weapon-mechanic

Demolitions (controlled & noncontrolled)

Protection/Bodyguard styled work

Unnatural jumping ability


GEAR:

1 ~ Deadeye Bounty Hunter Armor http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/deadeye-bounty-hunter-armour.77289/

1 ~ D-21 Blaster Rifle with 3 extra magazines http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/d-21.78142/

1 ~ 4-C Custom Blaster Pistol with 2 extra magazines http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/4c-custom-blaster-pistol.77287/

1 ~ Karambit http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/karambit.82034/

1 ~ Vibro-bayonet http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/vibro-bayonet.79946/

ALL GEAR IS SOMEHOW PAINTED A MIXTURE OF GREY AND DARK BLUE(Royal Blue)


ROLE-PLAYS: None yet

 

[Logan]

So there are some okay parts and some not okay parts with your character. While stats don't really matter on the site much you should probably edit yours a little bit to come across as more realistic. You'd be hard pressed to find a human alive who's stats would include nothing below a 6.

One thing that really sticks out to me is the mention of the memory wipe in his biography. As far as I know the Republic does not/would not employ such a practice on their soldiers, not to mention the tech-level of our time period more than likely wouldn't support such a process. You'll need to remove this/rework the idea into something else. What about having been in a firefight and he took some mortar fire which knocked him out. Maybe the Republic assumed him KIA and then he woke up some time later with scattered memories?

You'll also need to link the tech you're using to its corresponding write up. Also something to keep in mind is that since your character is force sensitive, even though he isn't aware, he cannot use an armor that contains armor functions.

 

[Dagon]

@Relent , changes are made - And thank you for the background example, as I’m using one of them...