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FORCE POWERS

For all intense and purposes, Dominus is a largely incomplete force sensitive; a jack of all trades and master of none, only ever trained as a weapon to be used by his master and never expected to surpass or defeat him.


Force Stealth, Dominus was originally trained with this ability to blend in amongst large crowds. Now, it is the first ability taught to Jedi and Sith who have sought refuge with the Jiaasjen Covenant; used to mask their presence as a force sensitive entirely.


Force Speed, an ability impressed upon Dominus from the day he arrived on Ziost, an essential skill for a trained assassin.


Hibernation Trance, a force ability that was taught by Darth Dominem to use as a last resort; never put into practice.


Cloak of Shadow, the first self-taught ability that Dominus learned following his studies of Larad Noon’s writings, incredibly practical and put to use with Force Stealth. Limitations apply when countered with Shadow Vision – an ability unknown to Dominus.


Psychometry, taught to Dominus by his former master as a tracking technique but not exclusively for use in this endeavor.


Force Drain, which Dominus was instructed to use to almost entirely incapacitate a foe before finishing them off, demonstrated many times over by Darth Dominem.


Force Scream, somewhat dormant, Dominus has only manifested this force power on one occasion; upon the death of Aqva Rex.


Mind Trick, a simple device employed against most non-force sensitives.


Telekinesis; in its many forms, push, pull, jump, throw, disarm and choke are staple abilities for Dominus.


Protection Bubble, another ability only ever put into practice once; when escaping after his failed mission on Corellia.


Force Healing, the second and perhaps most impressionable ability that Dominus took from the teachings of Larad Noon.


Dun Möch, the art of distraction and doubt in lightsaber combat. Combined with taunting and force abilities, this technique can be costly to those who are unable to adapt to its effects. Dominus often utilized Dun Möch in the arena on Ziost, as there were numerous obstacles and never a clean floor to fight on.

SKILLS

Coming soon…

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS

Juyo



STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES

Coming soon…

PERSONAL EFFECTS

GEAR:

Coming soon…


SHIP:

Neutralizer, a YT-2400 light freighter. Complete with a custom upgraded Class 1 Hyperdrive, this elusive vessel was stolen straight from her production yard at Corellian Engineering. She also boasts deflector shields, a double-armor plated hull, a navicomputer and two twin laser cannons in addition to an impressive 150 metric ton cargo capacity and a further stash of supplies that can keep her from making port for up to 2 months. With a finish in black intended to hide her in deep space, she’s a smuggler’s dream – though she has never left the hands of her first and only owner, Dominus Mór.

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A top down schematic of Dominus' personal starship

DROIDS:

HK-19 or “Angst”, a black hunter-killer series assassin and protocol droid commissioned by Darth Dominem from the Czerka Corporation. Angst belonged to Dominem but would alter his allegiance by default to Dominus after he defeated him in combat. Its restrictors were then overridden and the droid was reprogrammed by Mór himself at which point he nicknamed him sarcastically to represent mockery of his self image at the time of his servitude being gained.

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"Angst", about to be plugged into the hyperdrive of the Neutralizer

PETS:

None.

GALACTIC RECORD

KILLS:

None.


BOUNTIES COLLECTED:

None.


DUELING RING MATCHES:

None.


GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:

None.


ROLE-PLAYS:

Coming soon.
 
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As far as i know the next timeline is set waay before the clone wars and Vaapad vas created by Sora Bulk and Mace Windu so i doubt that 'form' will be plausable in this RP.

Other than that i personaly liked the fact that he was a dark sider his entire life and the reasons for his search for the light and interpretation of failures presented withing the Dark. Because when i was reading it i first honestly thought that he'd just be a mindless assasin brute type dark side user but the twist of events surprised me in a nice way :D I didn't read the whole bio though, will do the next time around.
The next timeline is not gonna start yet so you (like myself) have even more time to flesh out your characters even more.
Good luck!
 

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As far as i know the next timeline is set waay before the clone wars and Vaapad vas created by Sora Bulk and Mace Windu so i doubt that 'form' will be plausable in this RP.

Other than that i personaly liked the fact that he was a dark sider his entire life and the reasons for his search for the light and interpretation of failures presented withing the Dark. Because when i was reading it i first honestly thought that he'd just be a mindless assasin brute type dark side user but the twist of events surprised me in a nice way :D I didn't read the whole bio though, will do the next time around.
The next timeline is not gonna start yet so you (like myself) have even more time to flesh out your characters even more.
Good luck!
Yeah I figured Vaapad would be a no-no, not that there's anything wrong with core Juyo in the first place, but I suppose that is the good thing about having the opportunity to flesh out characters before the Dawn timeline begins. In many ways Dominus is lost; he'll never be a Jedi, he values the positives the dark side has brought him too much. He has no desire to return to the Sith, in fact he's probably being hunted by them.

Glad you liked what I have so far! Thanks for your input :)
 

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Yea i belive Juyo is allowed, heck even i put Juyo on my character
 
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