Draven Darkstar

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Photograph Storm Commando by Anthony Solis


NAME: Draven Darkstar
FACTION: Empire
RANK: Corporal (Probationary)
Past Specializations:
Storm Trooper.
Urban Trooper.
Storm Commando (Awaiting approval).
Operating number: TK-2662. 103rd Brigade.
SPECIES: Human

AGE: 24
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 6'2
WEIGHT: 195

EYES: Brown
HAIR: Black (Medium length. Usually wraps hair in pony tail.)

SKIN: Tan

CREDITS: 1,000

DISTINGUISHING MARKS:
Long scar going diagonally across face. (From left cheek to right side of forehead.) Shrapnel scaring on right arm. lacerations marks on chest and back received from a G.A gulag interrogation room. Acid burns.

FORCE SENSITIVE: no.

STRENGTH: 8
DEXTERITY: 7
CONSTITUTION: 5
INTELLIGENCE: 8
WISDOM: 6
CHARISMA: 4

FORCE POWERS:

SKILLS:
Rifleman
Gunslinger
Stealth
Demolition expert
Experience in hand to hand combat
interrogation
Survival training
Star fighter pilot

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:

Able to endure torture.
Tactician.

Post traumatic stress from the battle field.
Cold and distant from his squad.


GEAR:

E-11 blaster rifle
Blaster pistol
SE-14r light repeating blaster
Thermal detonators
Fragmentation grenades

Stormtrooper rations
Heat packs
Water purifier
Grappling hooks
Comlink
holocam



SHIP: TIE Hunter

DROIDS:
Probe droids
R-4 recon droids


PETS: None.

PERSONALITY:
Draven Darkstar is a war hardened solider. Whatever mission that is given to him, he completes it. He prefers to use stealth than rather storming the front of the enemy base. Often see's himself expendable due to most of his mission are covered up by the empire. When it comes down to civilians, he lowers his weapon and takes the time to assist them. He is loyal to the empire and will help his fellow troopers in battle.


BIOGRAPHY:
Draven Darkstar was raised on one of the core systems in the galaxy that was part of the imperial faction. Born under a mercenary who taught him the basics of combat, he hardened his skills physically and mentally. By the time he was 15, he was able to drive a starship by himself. When a local imperial base was attacked by group of terrorists, a huge battle ensured. Upon hundreds of civilians were caught in the crossfire. Draven was one of the few survivors that made it through the massacre.

The young Draven could see one of the attackers despite being dazed. The soldier was wearing a high ranking uniform of the Galactic alliance. He appeared in his 50's, having grayish hair and scars upon his face. The psychotic laughter that came from the solider seemed to burry itself into Draven's mind. The twisted solider relished in the attack after he left the battle. Draven's home, family, and friends were decimated in a blink of an eye. From that decision, he decided to punish galactic alliance for their actions and take revenge against the man who destroyed his city.

When he was old enough, he enlisted into the empire. In a few weeks, his training results caught the attention of the attention of his superiors. Due to his skill and attributes on the battle field, he was assigned as a Stormtrooper Recruit. In the past years he has undergone countless missions. Often times, these missions would be comprised of stealth to intense firefights that most storm troopers would not be able to survive.

KILLS:
BOUNTIES COLLECTED:
DUELING RING MATCHES:
GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:
ROLE-PLAYS:

MISSIONS:
Hunting a Pariah: http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/showthread.php?56690-Imp-Hunting-a-Pariah-lt-Mission-gt


Traitors in Arms : http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/showthread.php?55378-Traitors-in-Arms-(Imp-Mission)&highlight=Traitors+in+Arms


[ASK] [IB] Aanandha-Swaruupa: http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/showthread.php?60556-IB-Aanandha-Swaruupa
 
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Black Noise

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I don't have a problem with how he became a stormtrooper, however I am not allowing any Stormtrooper commandos to be made at this time. Similar to how a Jedi or Sith must start at the bottom of the ranking and work their way up, I want my Stormtroopers to be doing the same thing. For Draven, I'd like to see him start out as a Stormtrooper recruit and see you RolePlay out his training with others, as well as missions. You could do missions with other stormtroopers, with Sith, or by yourself(with an NPCer, naturally). You would start in, depending on what specialization you want to start working on first(storm commandos have many specializations so just pick the one you want to start with first), one of the divisions of the 909th Theater and, once you've RPed your character up, be available for promotion to Storm Commando and possibly even reassignment to the 501st.

If you start at the bottom and work your way up, your position becomes not only more valuable to you, but more powerful and you have the experience on this site that earns you your position at the top. Storm Commando is, essentially, a 'Master' tag for any stormtrooper. For a storm commando, fighting a Jedi is not difficult in the least.

Also that pic at the top, i would suggest you go to wherever you have it, copy the top url, then place
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Rather than say 'he was given the rank of stormtrooper' which isn't an actual rank, you could say 'he was assigned as a Stormtrooper Recruit' which is a rank and the rank he'll be starting at.
Other than that, good edits.
 

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Hey I just created a Stormtrooper recruit and I have a story arc in mind if you would be up for joining me. Shoot me a PM if interested.
 
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