Dravro Lok The True son of Dathomir Charater workshop

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You always need darkness for there to be light without darkness there is no light.
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Name:Dravro Lok
AFFILIATION:Independent

SPECIES: Dathomirian

AGE: 16

GENDER: Male

HEIGHT: 6.4

WEIGHT:143bs


EYES: Bright yellow

SKIN: Yellow

DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Black tattoos that he had on birth that cover all his body and 5 sharp horns with two of his horns have Blade markings on them


and short Vibroblade scar on his left hand
FORCE SENSITIVE: Positive(Untrained)

Power and Skills:

Dravro is young for his age so what he lacks in experience he makes up in his Physical side while not be the most fast and agile person for his age Dravro use his Strength and endurance to make up for up for that Beside his strength and endurance Dravro quite intelleged for his age be able to calculate the Sitaution quicky and use the right soluation to take down his target if need be he would use ever tool and gadent he has at his disposal if have to.



(Capable -> Advanced -> Expert -> Mastered)

Combat Skills:
Demolition:
Advance
Gunslinger-Advance
Teräs Käsi-Advance
Swordsman-Expert
Piloting-Capable


Learned languages: Dathomir, Basic, Mando'a

PERSONALITY:
Dravro is a cold yet not very talkative person as years of his training has alter his personality from the sweet loving boy he was before the mandalorian Raiders attack but through all the things that had happen to him through his life has made it incredible tough for him to trust someone. While also change his view on life to be you need to be strong to survive while deep down behind all that coldness and emotionless persona that sweet little boy from Dathomir is still there inside just that he to scared to show it or let him out to the world or others


BIOGRAPHY:


Dravro was the son of a Night sister witch and night brother hunter called Roto . He nerve got to see his mother as she left Dravro on his birth only thing he had of his mom was old Dathomir necklace that was given to him on his birth by his mother. He was left alone to be raised by his father Roto who was a night brother hunter he would go out most days leave Dravro to himself he would have no friends but even through he had no friends he would watch the animals outside his tribe do they daily life he was amazed and festinated by them he would wonder why his father would hurt these creatures that inhabit they planet.


2 years later while Dravro was sleep he began have dream of massive armoured figure stand in front of him wear dark purple and gold stripes armour while see blood drip from the armoured figure hand more he looks at the figure a body appears in front them he looks down at the body notice that body was his father dead from couple blaster shoots scared on what is going on. Dravro begins scream at the armoured figure "what did you do to my dad answers me "armoured figure says nothing then he moves his hand to his helmet and takes it off reveal older version of Dravro stand in front of him.


Watches horrified by what he seen then suddenly everything disappears as he wakes confused on what happen.


Dravro turns his head to see his father get ready for another hunt but this time he had more equipment on him then usual he ask his father "why do you have so much equipment dad" Roto looks Dravro and respond back with serious tone "This extra gear is for you Dravro we do your first hunt today" looks at Roto not feel up for it but says nothing know that his father would of made him do it even if he said no


So Dravro got out of his bed as he go on his first hunt.


Dravro father begin teach Dravro the best ways to track a beast while on a hunter Dravro didn`t take much intersect in what his father was trying to teach him. Roto see that Dravro was lose interest decide to go straight to the kill bit as he had animal all pick out for Dravro to kill for his first prey so they would walk ages until they would get to a river cross there Roto would set up a advantage point where Dravro could take his shot at his prey after all the preparation Roto would slowly teach Dravro how to shoot a blaster rifle interested on the use Dravro would pay attention while they wait for they prey to appear.


After wait for a while Dravro prey would appear it would be drink from the river Roto was watch carefully on how Dravro would reacted see no other choice Dravro would breath slowly as he took aim at his target he would close his eyes not want to see what he had done and pull the trigger sadly he miss the creature head but had deeply wounded the creature chest Roto would look at Dravro with smile "Good work Dravro you did good shot next time aim for the head " he said chuckling Roto would grab his spear as he made his way down to the wounded creature take out of it misery he would chops it head clean off he would leave head and take body with him as Dravro and Roto began make they way back to the tribe.


Just as they nearly there to the Village they began to see smoke come from the Village and fire worried what is happening they would rush to the tribe as they got there they would see fire everywhere on the village as they were be attacked by mandalorian raiders Roto would feel rush of rage take him over as he would rush into the village attack the raiders scared on what was going on Dravro try to run but as he attempt that two mandalorian raiders spot him try to leave "Hey Dathomirian stop move or you get two plasma holes in your legs understand" Scared for his life Dravro would do exactly they said the two raiders would walk up to Dravro with one of them bash him on the head lead to him be knock out.


Next 3 years of Dravro life was spent in slavery as he would be made to do hard labour for his mandalorian masters but over these last three years Dravro had change see life more as way to survive then care about life or die he would keep to himself. He would get beat regulary but he would ignore the pain as he seen each day he lived was just time until he would get his chance to kill his mandalorian masters. One day while he was do his usual daily work around the ship he would hear a explosion go off inside the ship confused on what was going Dravro found somehow to hide as he hid he began hear blaster fire come around the ship it had seem they were under attack by unknown force see this as his only chance.


Dravro would get out of his hide place as he did that he would see one mandalorian stand guard next to the escape pod see this as his only chance Dravro attack the Mandalorian but the mandalorian was able to knock back his attack push him to the ground he pull out his Blaster pistol as he was go to kill Dravro But suddenly Dravro began feel a strange feeling yet somehow it familiar as if he always had felt this strange feeling see no other choice.


Dravro gave into the strange feeling as he did that felt surge of strength came to him he then raised his hand send push of force to the mandalorian lead to go fly into hit the wall hard from the shock of hit his head the mandalorian became unconscious drop his blaster to the ground Dravro got up and pick up the blaster as he did that one of the unknown attacker appear who were also mandalorian he look at Dravro begin tell him "Put down the gun kid I do not want to kill you "Dravro would look at the other mandalorian and respond back to him in a serious tone "These Slavers beat me daily and kill my people and father I believe let me kill one of these Slavers is enough for me to deserve" the other mandalorian somehow understood and nods to him "Go ahead then" Dravro would look back at the mandalorian on the floor as he look at him he would pull his blaster repeat times into the chest give a smile after he was finish shooting he then whisper to himself" I was able to kill of one those mandalorian Slavers father".


Dravro then drop the gun as he allow the other mandalorian take him away after that day Dravro was Adopt by the Mandalorian next 11 years of his life was harsh and tough as he was push through tough mandalorian training while strength his body and mind he would learn about culture of the mandalorian and they traditions he would also in those years learn about the Jedi become amazed by them wish to one day find the Jedi and become one himself On Dravro 16th birthday he was given a star ship of his own and given his very own mandalorian armour he set out to find some sort of life in this galaxy hope to become someone in the galaxy

STRENGTHS :
High Pain tolerance: Dravro been through so much pain that it takes lot for him to actually feel pain now after the brutal beatings he would get which In turn made his body tougher.


WEAKNESSES:
Lack of Empathy: Because of the many things that has happen to Dravro he began to slowy gain inability to understanding empathy go even to the point where he is unable to recognize someone else be mad or happy while be unable to recognize other peoples needs as well which has left Dravro feeling a form of social isolation.


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Well I did make this charater in the charater profie area but wast sure if that was the right ideal to post it there as this charater is gonna be part of the NTL
 
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Just so you know that while there is no problem being apart of clan ordo, it is however not a cannon clan.

Also just looking at your stats 10/10 in strength, that's unrealistic you would be like goku punching people through a planet, not to mention you have well above average in everything else important. Putting a 1 in Wisdom and Charisma does not balance this out.

The beskad sword, might not be aloud as its a touchy material on the side and they may be getting rid of the material all together.

I only had a quick skim over it and there may be other things however it gives you something to work on for the moment.
 

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Also just looking at your stats 10/10 in strength, that's unrealistic you would be like goku punching people through a planet,

Not necessarily. It all depends how 10/10 is viewed. 10/10 could be relative to the other stats or if 5/10 is average it doesn't mean that 10/10 goes to that extreme. That being said I never use numbers for this exact reason. I would personally use descriptions. However if you want to stay with numbers I would avoid using 10/10 just because some do interpret that as being OP and I would use 9s sparingly.
 

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Okay thanks wast really sure on the stats only reason i make his wisdom and charm so low as he not really buddy person kinda of guy and if they get rid of beskar weapons then i change it to a normal vibroblade but until i see the material for the NTL
 

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Might want to watch the run-on sentences, bud. It's a bit hard to read.
 

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Echani Martial Arts and a Mando eh?

You do realize the two hate each other. Some mandos might shun you simply for recognizing the art at least a pureblooded mando would. By Legends standards that is.

Going off the numbers your character has little room for growth before becoming OP (statistically speaking). Hes very high in whats hea good at and very bad at what hea bad at. Being young you could improve his bad stats before growing his good and find him to be 7's-8's across the board. Not a bad thing just something to think about. Having a 1 charisma I dont expect much in terms of talking/interaction before it should become awkward or even heated as Mando's tend to be a bit blunt/hostile.

Just my 2 cents.
 

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Okay thanks for info I put those stats down wast really sure what was a right amount for them
 
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Electric Judgement is a rather rare ability. Probably not something a 'Son of Dathomir' would sport. Especially seeing as it is a Light Side variation of Force Lightning.
 

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Well I know what you mean but even through he pretty much looks like massive psycho path killer who would be prefect for dark side reason why I gave him judgment as through everything there lot more good in Dravro then evil just very hard to see it
 

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Well I know what you mean but even through he pretty much looks like massive psycho path killer who would be prefect for dark side reason why I gave him judgment as through everything there lot more good in Dravro then evil just very hard to see it

I think that's the point. The good is very supressed and you kind of need the light on your side to be summoning powerful light side powers like judgement.
 

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I see what you mean then I ask you guys opinion should I give him force lighting instead of judgment or nothing and just keep precognition as his only power
 
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Id personally just do precognition. Roleplay and if you come across a Jedi maybe he'll see enough light in you to teach that ability or the same for a Sith.

Ive always enjoyed building my character vs starting with skills/stats makes you like them a bit more imo. Ive made characters and RP'd them once because I over thought it. Start with basics and grow especially with him being so young.
 

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I go with your ideal Rev I Like it good one so no force lighting for him now
 
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It's not who I am underneath, but what I do that defines me


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BASIC INFORMATION

Name: Riro Lok

Nickname: Two Sides

AFFILIATION: Mandalorian Crucible/armed forces

RANK :Sergeant


AGE:20

SPECIES:Iktotchi

GENDER:Male

HEIGHT:6 foot

WEIGHT:153lbs

EYE COLOR: Bright blue but goes bright yellow when he gets angry

Home world:Mandalore

FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes but is unaware of it
Stats:
Strength: 5/10
DEXTERITY: 6/10
CONSTITUTION: 5/10
INTELLIGENCE: 7/10
WISDOM: 5/10
CHARISMA: 5/10



BIOGRAPHY:Riro was born unlike most Iktotchi on Mandalore he was raised by his father as Riro mother died through child birth the only thing Riro had of his mother was a picture of her that his Father Nofo kept in small pendant with his clans symbol craved in it. Riro father was a engineer for a private company on Mandalore that require him to build custom astromechs for some specific job he nerve knew what the jobs were but didn`t want know. He would teach Riro his craft as Riro became fascinated with the creation and making of a droid through the many years that went by. When Riro was 5 his father introduced Riro to a friend of his called Raj Koss confused by why he was introduced by this man Riro stood there quietly as Riro father began explain to him that Raj was here to start his mandalorian training Riro look at his father with more confused expression he asks him "What training dad what you on about?". Riro father respond back he lays one of his hands onto Riro shoulder as he explains to his son that in they clan child at the age of 5 or 4 are made to be put through brutal training to prepare themselves for the world out there Riro didn't really understand but kinda felt that what his father was do was the right choice so he listen to him as Nofo goes on to tell Riro that Raj will be take Riro off planet for his training and they would not see each other until his training was done.



So next 11 years Riro was taken planet to planet as he taught how to survive in the harsh environments of diffenrent worlds and how to hit a target from long range Riro wasn't the best at this stuff but he kept practice everyday when he had time Riro would focus on little project of his to remind him of his father as the years goes by he slowly built his own custom built Protocol droid name it Darasang-3PO but for short he called it D-3PO.Riro was taken back to Mandalore on his 16 birthday as he got to the planet surface he would rush home to see his father again but sadly found his father dead on the floor with some Blaster fire in the chest he ran to his father body as he lift Nofo body he shout in angry "I WILL FIND WHO DID THIS FATHER MARK MY WORD" next hour Riro bury his father outside his house as he said goodbye to his father and mother he took the pendant on Nofo body before bury him to remember his family by and what he had lost in this world he then sold everything that was sellable in his house as Riro got a shuttle to Geonosis hear of the Mandalorian area and massive amount of credits be offered to anyone become a gladiator in they Arena.

Over the next 3 years of Riro life he would kill so many people go to the point that people were begin to become afraid of enter the arena with him even earn him the name two sides for Riro spilt personality that occurs when his rage takes over but for Riro he was get tired of the pointless fighting see no glory or honour in it he also felt the arena held him no true challenge so he began look for information for someplace that would use the best of his abilities as he did this he heard of a group called The accord intrigued by this group Riro pull some strings to get in contact with one of they recruiters as the recruiter explain to Riro what the group does . He answer straight away saying yes without any thought of it.






PERSONALITY: Riro nice guy to talk to you wouldn't really think he is a mandalorian at all as he prefers talking and mess with his droids then shooting or fighting other people but behind that nice side of Riro lies darkness inside him that you would`t like to meet as when this dark side of Riro comes out he lose all care and interest of talking and would break your teeth just by looking at him this why he keeps that side of him hidden so no one can know as secretly he loves to cause violence and hurt people and do the other nasty stuff that bad people do in this galaxy.

Skills:
Adept (1-3)-Advance(3-5)-Expert(5-8)-Master(8-10)

Mechanic-Expert(6)
Marksman-Advance(4)
Demolition-Advance(4)
Piloting-Adept(2)
Gunslinger-Advance(4)
Hand to Hand-Expert(7)

Force abilities:
Riro has no real skill in the force as the only times he has tap into it is when his darker side of him takes over which he use to buff up his Strength, Endurance, Dexterity to high levels which makes him a dangerous opponent to fight when he piss off.

Equipment: Custom Mandalorian armour
Heavy Sniper rifle
Utility belt
Dart Launcher installed into his armour
Gauntlet Flamethrower
Two Medium Blaster Pistols

Droid:
D-3PO
Colour: Black
Height:1.7
2 Photoreceptors
2 Auditory receptors
1 Olfactory sensor

  • Translator unit
  • Recording unit (audio-recorder)
  • Vocabulator
  • AA-1 VerboBrain
  • TranLang III communications module
  • 1 restraining bolt mount




Strengths:
Fast Learner
Hard to anger
Fascinate by Machines
connections
:Through the 3 years Riro spent as a gladiator he would set up his own Ray of different contacts so he could hear what was happen in the big wide Galaxy while not the greatest network of connections but it has come in handy for Riro lot of times.
Weakness:
Talks to much
Can be Easily persuade by a women
Easily Distract
Can`t stop talking


 
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