Dredus Ar'Braxan

Pele

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my profiles are like a plague of ugh
 
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Nice post I like he's got a good balance of character flaws which makes him more believable as a being.
 

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A very good profile, though I think I have seent hat picture before. If I were you I would up the age...most of the Padawans are kind of at late padawan age so late teens or early twenties. Also...he would only have learned the basics of Shii-Cho...the form is a lot more than just the basics, it's a simplistic form and has no complicated feints, which is why it's basics are taught to younglings first. Other than that I can't see any problems.
 

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5'7" for a thirteen year old? I'm only 5'6", and this kid still has growth spurts to go through. OH, the shame of it all!
 

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We need more dwarves and midgets.
 

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Hush now. By all rights, I should be sleeping. 9AM never looks good when you worked the midnight shift the night before.
 

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A very good profile, though I think I have seent hat picture before. If I were you I would up the age...most of the Padawans are kind of at late padawan age so late teens or early twenties. Also...he would only have learned the basics of Shii-Cho...the form is a lot more than just the basics, it's a simplistic form and has no complicated feints, which is why it's basics are taught to younglings first. Other than that I can't see any problems.

Ok sounds good. I was trying to say that all he has learned is basic Shii-Cho but i must have worded it wrong. I'll go and fix that. The picture I'll go change then, along with appearence. Truthfully I didn't like the picture much anyways so your helpin me out lol.

As for height I was 5'7 by 13 so thats what I used as my base height lol. I didn't think I was really tall for a 13 year old, but I guess I'll go change that.
 
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I was five-foot seven in grade six... I'm six-foot one now.

Five-foot seven is a fine height for a kid of thirteen years.
 

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My bro is stunted in height. You're not alone.
 
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