Dricci'Azura'mlanar

[Fire.And.Ice]

NAME: Dricci'Azura'mlanar



FACTION: Galactic Alliance


RANK:Rebel Spy


SPECIES:Chiss/Human


AGE:26


SEX:Female


HEIGHT:5’6


WEIGHT:180 lbs


EYES:Red


HAIR:Silver


SKIN:Blue


FORCE SENSITIVE:No





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STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES



Azura is very bright and well educated in computer science and technology.Being athletic as she is Azura excelled in her martial arts training.



A few of her downfalls she quite cooky and says the strangest the things..She has had a difficult time fitting in, being half human a majority of the Chiss population labeled her as an outcast and she had to work very hard to make a name for herself







PERSONALITY & APPEARANCE:

Azura is a strange and Mysterious cat, She has been often classified as being eccentric and cooky. She is well known for saying things way out in left field and off topic. She is intellectual and well educated.



Azura does not look like your typical Chiss. Azura s mother was a human while her father was born on Csaus. Being a hybrid Azura to most Chiss was strange looking she had long silver hair and light blue skin color with red Iris’s.


She was oddly short standing at 5’6 inches, and 180lbs



BIOGRAPHY:



Azura has never met her mother, and Her father rarely speaks about it. Although her fathers house was wealthy because he had bedded a human women had brought a certain amount of shame to himself. He tried as he may to make sure His daughter was loved, unfortunately he did not have any other children.



Her father did the best he could being born on Csaus had its benefits; a major hub in the Galactic Alliance. She was well educated in computer science, and because of her height and her abnormal weight she excelled in martial arts and hand to hand combat.



Her father being a wealthy household had ties to the Galactic Alliance, Azura had been sought after and enlisted in the central intelligence. Since she was not born of two houses she took on her step mother's name.



Since she had joined the Galactic Alliance Azura was recruited into the espionage unit, soley out of fear that she would not be accepted into anything else. Surprisingly with her cookyness she had kept a positive attitude. She is happy go lucky and quite content where she is and the hope one day she will be accepted.


Azura was outrageous and adventurous, one of her hobbies she would free climb without the use of ropes or clevases, when she 17 she would climb the ice faces of Ilum. She would travel throughout the Galaxy searching for the next biggest free rock climb. She also enjoyed cave spelunking and deep water diving.


Equipment 2 DC 15

https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/DC-15s_side_arm_blaster


2 Vibro dagger

https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Vibrodagger


Mimetic

https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Mimetic_suit


Vape charges

https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Vape_charge


2 Vibroswords

https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Vibrosword


SHIP:



J-type 327 Nubian starship


https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/J-type_327_Nubian_starship


@Wit

 

[The Good Doctor]

Reposting from the other thread, didn't see this was reposted. Anyways, not an offical review. So, just skimmed the profile. For the tech, the fandom wiki links need to be dropped. Your tech (minus the vibroweapons) needs to be linked from the tech boards. The Mimetic suit and Vape Charges will need to be submitted for approval before they can be used. And there are a ton of other blasters in the tech boards that can be used.

Csaus had its benefits; a major hub in the Galactic Alliance

Our Galactic Alliance isn't the same the one in legends (the legends version is thousands of years in the future). i sent the beginner PM, be sure to read all the site's write-ups linked on the PM. But yes, Csaus is a part of Chiss space and they are very isolationist and have virtually nothing to do with anything outside the Unknown Regions at this point in our time. They aren't affiliated in anyway with the GA.

Edit: Just to add on, the Chiss are a species that your average citizen wouldn't even know about. They are sooner to be mistaken for a Pantoran that has red eyes.

Which brings me to my next point, Chiss being outside their home space will need some justification, so your person being a Chiss/Human hybrid would need to be elaborated on as again Chiss tend to keep to themselves.

If you would like to skip the headache, it might be easier to be a Pantoran.

Hope this helps

 

[Wit]

Please make changes as specified by FTL, he covered most issues and not much that can be done from a review point of view till those changes are made.. Bio should reflect current lore, links for tech, and good explanation for the Chiss backstory.

 

[Fire.And.Ice]

I will thank you, real life has gotten hectic for me, I havent had much time to get online.

 

[Wit]

@Fire.And.Ice do you still want this reviewed?