EQUALIZER

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NAME:EQUALIZER
FACTION: N\A
RANK: N\A
SPECIES: Trandoshan
AGE: N\A
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 8
WEIGHT: 400
EYES: Grey
HAIR: N\A
SKIN: Green with spots of black and yellow on top of the green
CREDITS: 1,000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: N\A
FORCE SENSITIVE:No

STRENGTH: 10\10
DEXTERITY: 8\10
CONSTITUTION: 10\10
INTELLIGENCE: 5\10
WISDOM: 3\10
CHARISMA: 2\10

FORCE POWERS:
None

SKILLS: Ranged\close quarters combat, Mechanical

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
Has four lightsabers all from Jedi he has kiled over the years

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:

+Extremely strong can chuck a wookie across a room.
+Expert weapons person can quickly tell what weapon he needs to use against his opponent
+Can make a weapon out of any thing
+Super tough skin thanks to Sith experiment. Can take blows that should dwon a normal trandoshan and still keep on going unaffected.
+-Won't back down from a fight which can be good or bad depending on the situation.
-Reckless
-Becomes easily enraged
-Will start fights with people randomly
-is not the most agile person
-not to fast adapting to situations
-can be lied about his background origin and turned into some ones private weapon ( as long as wookies aren't around or the one trying to twist him)

GEAR: Basic trandoshan Heavy mercenary armor with the chest and both shoulder pieces made from Cortosis alloy. Wears basic Trandoshan mask. Grenades( Emp,Thermal,Proton and Glop), ACP heavy repeater, ACP array gun, Bowcaster, Wrist laser shields (like what durg has), Shock Gloves, Holo disguis kit(s) and replacement parts.


SHIP:Modified Mandalorian Gunship (Equinox). armed with: Twin blaster cannons, rapid fire laser cannons, Concussion missiles, jamming system, Tractor beam projector.

DROIDS:
N\A

PETS:
N\A

PERSONALITY:
Has large all of sudden Blood lust which comes from his trandoshan hatred for wookies, this blood lust becomes even stronger when he sees a wookie or wookies. Doesn't give much for others, all he cares about is finding out who he is. The Darkside of the force has a strong hold on him controlling him most of the time and what he does. Doesn't care how he kills his opponent as long as they are dead however if extremely enraged he will try to stick with melees and make the death excruciating. Equalizer doesn't have much in the line of thought as his only thought most of the time is an animal survival instinct of kill, eat survive!

BIOGRAPHY:
Equalizer's real name has been lost in time since he has been alive since the Old Republic since the First Sith empire, along with his age. Equalizer was hired by the Sith to carry out a special job little did he know that he would end being the subject of an experiment. The Sith were trying to make a super soldier one that could fight and kill multiple Jedi before being brought down them self. Equalizer's skin was toughened up to take blows that would down a normal Trandoshan. Enhanced strength, and greatly lengthened life span. Equalizer was also injected with a small amount of Sith blood enough at least for him to feel the presence of other Force sensitive beings. The Sith then began to erase all of his memories during this process Equalizer escaped and killed all the Sith who had experimented on him out of anger and a lust for vengeance and blood. Slowly over the years the Sith's work of removing his memory took effect painfully removing what made him,him bit by bit! The last time Equalizer remembered who he was, was during the first Galactic civil war. Afterwards he became a mindless killer only knowing what the memory wipe had left behind for him, what it had placed in his mind instead. Equalizer now searches for The Seeker One who can help regain his lost identity. Equalizer will take any job you give him just don't expect the target to come back alive as no one returns with Equalizer alive. Equalizer in the beginning was a caring man with a family that he was having a hard time taking care of. Which brought about him taking the Sith proposed job. He did not know of what would become of him. The pain of having his memory wiped and others not even his taking their place was excruciating to him, Equalizer escaped one day during a memory wipe and it would be this memory wipe that would remain with him for the rest of his life. In revenge for the pain delivered to him Equalizer killed every Sith in the building. Equalizer would be recaptured and used during the Jedi-Sith wars. During a battle Equalizer escaped and went into hiding. It was during the dark times that Equalizer came out of hiding with most of his memories now erased but the process had stopped. An Imperial Inquisitor found Equalizer and continued the memory erase\ replacement on him after hearing his story and how long he had been alive for. Equalizer during this time hunted and killed Jedi for the newly created Empire. Eventually again Equalizer escaped and killed his Inquisitor master who tortured him when ever he failed a mission. He went into hiding again just now having come out of hiding. Having slight memory of his old life he seeks The Seeker One who can give him his answer. Will have all of sudden flash backs which are extremely painful to him due to the mind wipe.

-BIO UPDATES-



KILLS:
Jedi over many years

BOUNTIES COLLECTED:
none

DUELING RING MATCHES:
none

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:
none

ROLE-PLAYS:
TO HUNT A FORCE USER
 
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So, I can guarantee that there is absolutely no way that it's going to fly to have someone that can withstand 7 lightsaber blows. It's just not. If lightsaber resistant armor isn't allowed, lightsaber resistant skin certainly won't. Also, lifting a small starfighter? I'm pretty sure having a character that can lift 12,000 lbs also isn't going to work (plus even if it were possible, he would have to likely weight close to 1,000 lbs himself just to compensate for the stress on his bones and muscles). Finally, I don't know what you were planning to do with the four lightsabers that he has, but just an FYI, non-force sensitive characters aren't allowed to use lightsabers, though I don't know if you had any plan to use them or if they were just trophies.

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So, I can guarantee that there is absolutely no way that it's going to fly to have someone that can withstand 7 lightsaber blows. It's just not. If lightsaber resistant armor isn't allowed, lightsaber resistant skin certainly won't. Also, lifting a small starfighter? I'm pretty sure having a character that can lift 12,000 lbs also isn't going to work (plus even if it were possible, he would have to likely weight close to 1,000 lbs himself just to compensate for the stress on his bones and muscles). Finally, I don't know what you were planning to do with the four lightsabers that he has, but just an FYI, non-force sensitive characters aren't allowed to use lightsabers, though I don't know if you had any plan to use them or if they were just trophies.

Side note: you're required to have at least 50 words in a personality section.

1. I will down scale the skin toughness.

2. I see your point on his strength

3. the Light sabers are just trophies.
 

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Not sure where to begin with this one... The whole lightsaber resistant skin isn't going to fly, it's stronger than pretty much any armor on the site and it's just his skin. The Sith experimentation and his apparent age most likely won't be allowed either, not without their consent anyway.

I have to agree with phoenix on his apparent strength. There's no way he'd be able to physically lift anything of that size. Not sure what a holo disguise is but if it isn't canon it'll need a tech write up, same with the ship.
 

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Not sure where to begin with this one... The whole lightsaber resistant skin isn't going to fly, it's stronger than pretty much any armor on the site and it's just his skin. The Sith experimentation and his apparent age most likely won't be allowed either, not without their consent anyway.

I have to agree with phoenix on his apparent strength. There's no way he'd be able to physically lift anything of that size. Not sure what a holo disguise is but if it isn't canon it'll need a tech write up, same with the ship.

holo disguise is cannon link: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Holographic_disguise_matrix
 

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Might wanna run it by an admin then, there's a possibility it might be in the banned tech list.
 

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So, please... please come hunt down my character Ar'Rhan Ghol. I think it would be fun. Oh. It would be a death enabled thread though.
 

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So, please... please come hunt down my character Ar'Rhan Ghol. I think it would be fun. Oh. It would be a death enabled thread though.
Not sure if that's an attempt to provoke or not.
 

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Not sure if that's an attempt to provoke or not.
It is a statement. It means what it meant. If he wants to use an all powerful hunter of the Jedi and those similar. Why not come and get one?

I don't understand the confusion. That would be the purpose of this character, yes?
 

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It is a statement. It means what it meant. If he wants to use an all powerful hunter of the Jedi and those similar. Why not come and get one?

I don't understand the confusion. That would be the purpose of this character, yes?
Not being hostile, it just seemed like you wanted to kill this character off from your sentence lol.
 

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Not being hostile, it just seemed like you wanted to kill this character off from your sentence lol.

Sure I would. But then again, Ar'Rhan is designed to be a hunter of those that bring Darkness to the galaxy. It's nothing personal, who wouldn't want to claim the life of a nearly immortal Trandoshan that has slain many Jedi during their existence and who knows how many in the future. IMO that is a pretty nice kill to claim.
 

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Really has no personality besides he is a crazed man that kills people for sheer sport and fun.
This will simply not do. Personality is the most important part of any character and will determine much of their quality and enjoyment to RP with. A crazed lizard monster who kills because he wants to is very boring and most people won't want to RP with such a character. Might advice would be to try fleshing out his biography first, as a character's past influences how they think and behave a good deal.

My Sith Warrior, Andromeda, is also a lab-created cyborg super killer... but I've used that simple, and intentionally cliché, aspect to create an intricate and complex personality. Did Equalizers's creators mistreat him? Does he question his purpose or his humanity? Having lived for so long, he would have experienced many different things which will have impacted on the way he thinks.
 
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This will simply not do. Personality is the most important part of any character and will determine much of their quality and enjoyment to RP with. A crazed lizard monster who kills because he wants to is very boring and most people won't want to RP with such a character. Might advice would be to try fleshing out his biography first, as a character's past influences how they think and behave a good deal.

My Sith Warrior, Andromeda, is also a lab-created cyborg super killer... but I've used that simple, and intentionally cliché, aspect to create an intricate and complex personality. Did Equalizers's creators mistreat him? Does he question his purpose or his humanity? Having lived for so long, he would have experienced many different things which will have impacted on the way he thinks.

True very True.
 

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I'm happy to help flesh out personalities/backstories if you'd like. Take a look at what I've done with Andro's for starters. It's not a process that is easily rushed and a good personality takes a lot of thought and effort.

and do refrain from writing this guys' name in all-caps, it's very tacky.
 

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I'm happy to help flesh out personalities/backstories if you'd like. Take a look at what I've done with Andro's for starters. It's not a process that is easily rushed and a good personality takes a lot of thought and effort.

and do refrain from writing this guys' name in all-caps, it's very tacky.
Your help would be very much appreciated.
 

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OK I will help once I've had some sleep. From what I can see so far, you're writing about events in his life, those should go in his biography. For the personality, focus on his behaviour, thoughts and views, emotions, attitudes to certain kinds of people, how he handles certain situations, etc.
 

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OK I will help once I've had some sleep. From what I can see so far, you're writing about events in his life, those should go in his biography. For the personality, focus on his behaviour, thoughts and views, emotions, attitudes to certain kinds of people, how he handles certain situations, etc.
ya just moved that into his bio.
 
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