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ERIS VESTA
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FULL NAME: Eris Vesta
AGE: 12 years old
SPECIES: Human

HEIGHT: 5'
WEIGHT: 85 lbs

RACE: Caucasian
EYE COLOR: Blue
HAIR COLOR: Blonde
MARKINGS: Several scars on her face from shrapnel

AFFILIATED FACTION: Jedi
RANK: PADAWAN

STATUS: KIA

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SKILLS
[fancybox2] Eris was given her lightsaber just minutes before the Battle of Onderon. She is still not confident with it, but she has a good idea of how to use it. As for the force, her main ability is super speed. She can reach speeds of seventy miles per hour. Telekinesis is harder for her. More often than not, she just ends up breaking things. She also has an unconscious empathy to what is going on. When something bad happens, it causes her physical pain.

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PERSONA
[fancybox4="http://iv1.lisimg.com/image/7879806/430full-hana-hayes.jpg"] Eris is a listener. She knows a lot, probably a bit more than she should, but she doesn't think about it too much. Not one to make conversation, she often struggles socially and prefers to be alone or with one other person. She tends to form close bonds with people rather quickly, making her susceptible to getting involved in things she probably shouldn't be involved in.

Eris is an extremely curious young girl. She craves knowledge and is willing to do absolutely anything to find the answer to a question. She is innocent and kindhearted in nature, but don't let this fool you. She can and will fight if she needs to. Old wounds never seem to heal with her, and she holds a grudge for years at a time. She has a tendency of keeping everything to herself until it explodes violently. She often forms very close bonds very quickly and is rather clingy. She is very shy around strangers but opens up over time. She freaks out over minor, sometimes even nonexistent things, and flies off the handle very easily. She jumps to conclusions a lot and has trouble understanding what people mean.

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BACKSTORY
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Early Life
Eris was born on Naboo to a widowed mother, who was very loving and did everything for her. The first five years were peaceful and quiet. They lived by the lake, with a perfect view of the castle, and how the setting sun would catch the side and make it look golden. Eris's mother sent her to school as soon as she was old enough, and Eris did very well, memorizing the lessons almost instantly. However, about two weeks into kindergarten, she was removed from the school because, in a fit of rage, she threw her safety scissors, open, across the room, hitting a little girl in the forehead and cutting her. When her mother asked her why she had done it, she said that she couldn't understand what the teacher was saying. Eris's mother took her to a psychiatrist and they determined that she had severe ADHD and put her on medicine to help her focus. After that, she did very well while being homeschooled. That all changed after her mother left to go to Coruscant, but never came home. She had crashed in an asteroid belt and perished.

Meeting Jenton
After her mother's death, Eris became a drifter, hiding on ships and travelling around the galaxy. She started having little episodes in which something would fly across the room when she was angry or frightened, often hitting her or someone else. Scared and confused, she started to isolate herself from other people. Eventually, she was discovered in the hull of a ship, which was piloted by a Jedi Master, who had sensed her presence. Eris was scared, and before she could even say anything, he flew backwards. After the initial shock, the Jedi, named Jenton stood up and explained everything to her. He told Eris to stay with him and offered to mentor her. She has stayed with him ever since.


Nar Shadaa
Months later, Eris got separated from Jenton after running off to explore. In a bizarre turn of fate, she ended up on Nar Shadaa. Scared, alone, and without a weapon, she met two men--Jahn Nors and Prudii Kyramud, and a woman--Rika Youngblood. There had been some sort of confrontation. Soon after she arrived, they were attacked. They retreated into a building and Prudii and Eris went to the basement. After some time, Jahn brought the lift down and they escaped to the roof. Eris was able to parkour her way down, but broke her ankle on the last jump. She evacuated the first floor by breaking the windows with the force. Then, she and Jenton were reunited. They left on Jenton's ship, Eris back in the copilot's seat.

Amerath Candoon
After a quick lesson in lightsaber combat, they went for dinner on Coruscant, when Amerath Candoon didn't pay for his food. He retreated, but Eris paid his tab for him. Later, they heard an explosion. A speeder chase ensued, and Amerath threw another grenade once they were on the ground. Eris picked it up to toss it back, but it didn't get far enough from her. Shrapnel cut her face up, scarring her. Later, she and Jenton helped get Amerath to prison, but someone came to rescue him. Jenton thought better of resisting.

Defending Onderon

The two later went to Onderon to defend it from the Sith. Eris helped evacuate the civilians. The two met Mark Darsten, a soldier. Jenton gave Eris a lightsaber soon before the battle started. While Mark and Jenton were shooting at the two Sith breaching the wall, Eris attempted to flank the attackers. One Sith, called Shaw, shot her. Jenton tried to stop him, but the blaster bolts hit her in the neck. Mortally wounded, she was brought to safety and a medic was called, but she died just moments later.

Legacy
Eris is survived by her Jenton, her mentor and father figure, and several other acquaintances. Her death is Jenton's main motivation to take out the Sith.

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AFFILIATIONS
[fancybox2] [/fancybox2][fancybox2]Jenton Ulysses: "He's the closest thing to a father I've ever had."

Jahn Nors: "We met in an alley. Some mugs started shooting at us and two others. We kind of helped each other, but I haven't seen him since. I wonder how he's doing these days."

Prudii Kyramud: "Oh, that guy. The first thing he did was point a gun at me. Other than that he's alright."

Rika Youngblood: "Nice, but in a scary way. I don't know how I feel about her. Something just feels...off...I don't know."

Amerath Candoon: "Don't even get me started on this toaster oven..."

Mark Darsten: "Loads of respect for this guy. He's a good man, and from what I can tell, a good soldier, too."


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Fiyero Lassiter

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Welcome to the pint-sized Jedi club

You'll probably want to add if she is a padawan or an initiate.
Also what are her stats as a jedi? What are her strengths and weaknesses? Has she not yet begun lightsaber training or is she sufficiently trained? Etc.
 

Dmitri

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As a head's up, you may need to apply in the Jedi sign-ups and get approved before partaking in any threads as a Jedi.
 

Reya Starlyght

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Awwwww, I love this charrie! You wrote her wonderfully and I don't really see anything to critique on, which is pretty rare. :)
 

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