Feedback for some shattered ideas

[Raider]

Hello all. I’m out of retirement and back into the RPing swing. Thought I’d throw some ideas while on my work break for comment on stuff I’m thinking of doing. Two are in progress at the moment. I’d like to note every thread I make or join is open.

Back Alley Murder

• Life is cheap on Nar Shaddaa. Marcus decides to track down a dancer’s killer. As a mysterious femme fatale adds another layer to his investigation. How far down the rabbit hole will he go for the sake of justice?

Another Day On the Hunt (I'm actually hijacking this thread)

• Marcus enlists the help of a Mandalorian to shut down a drug house operated by the Blue Viper gang. They’ll wipe this street of clean of drugs with Viper blood!

In Viper’s Fangs.

• Marcus locates the Blue Vipers primary warehouse for the gangs drug supply. His war on Nar Shaddaa’s criminals begins in earnst, but every war has it’s casualties.

Slave Masters and Chain Breakers

• Ruol Gorlac is the most effective slave breaker on Nar Shaddaa, a favorite of the Hutts for his wide selection of everything from dancing girls to heavy labor to canon fodder. Marcus is determined to make tonight Ruol’s last, but the Breaker has crushed the spirits of thousands into servitude. How can Marcus standup against such ruthlessness?

No Good Deed…

• The Cartel’s ire has been drawn! As Nar Shaddaa’s sinners, murderers, and monsters close in Marcus makes his boldest move yet. The question is how will he get out alive? And is he even planning to?