Fenn Kelborn

[Bellerophon]

Fenn Kelborn
NICKNAME: "Morsi"
TITLE: Luitenant Drayson
FACTION: Mandalorian Dominion
RANK: Commando
HOMEWORLD: Mandalore
SPECIES: Human
GENDER: Male
ORIENTATION: Straight
AGE: 22
HEIGHT: 6'2"
WEIGHT: 172 lbs
FORCE-SENSITIVITY: Marginal,
resulting in raised overall
awareness, no aptitude for real
Force training

[TR2][TD] STRENGTH
[/TD][TD] DEXTIRITY
[/TD][TD] STAMINA
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[TR2][TD] INTELLIGENCE
[/TD][TD] WISDOM
[/TD][TD] CHARISMA
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[TR2][TD] HAND-TO-HAND
[/TD][TD] STEALTH
[/TD][TD] PILOTING
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[TR2][TD] MARKSMANSHIP
[/TD][TD] FIRST-AID
[/TD][TD] SURVIVAL
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[TR2][TD] SECURITY
[/TD][TD] INFILTRATION
[/TD][TD] SLICING
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[TR2][TD] TACTICS
[/TD][TD] POISONS
[/TD][TD] SABOTAGE
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[TR2][TD] BASIC
[/TD][TD] HUTTESE
[/TD][TD] MANDO'A
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PERSONALITY: To say that longer interaction with Fenn is problematic is an understatement. All his life he was told that he was special and it was clear that he was brighter than other children. From everywhere he heard that he has a bright path before him, which made him proud of this future even though it didn't yet happen. That is why for a long time he treated all people around him with reserve, aware of his superiority to them. This view was brutally revised when he joined the Royal Academy. Since until then he didn't have to work much, all came easily almost without any effort, now it turned out he had troubles to learn effectively, he can't focus on the important things. Now in place of pride arisen an unhealthy need for rivalry, mixed with very rash temper and very narrow-minded attitude. Even though it doesn't show, Fenn is a zealous patriot but accepts no other future for Mandalore than he sees.

He never shares his views nor he ever complains, he is used to having very different opinion on everything. Finn learned that most times nobody is interested in insight of other people, so sees no point in wasting time. Instead of reasoning he either trying to manipulate others to see things his way or forces them to do so. Most of times it turns out he is right, but if he is not, waiting for him to acknowledge it or apologize is futile. Its clear that Fenns need of superiority blinds him to many aspects of his life and he's aware of that. Regardless, coming out on top outvalues everything else.

Normally Fenn seems apathetic to everything that surrounds him, which is far from true. Instead, he is angry, he thinks that fury drives him, makes him overachieve where others fail. It is also substitute for sadness and anxiety that only drag a person down, Fenn has only disgust for those emotions. [beebox3=99%]

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BIOGRAPHY:There was nothing strange, violent or even sad about Fenns upbringing. He was born as a son to the second most relevant branch of Kelborn clan. His father was an esteemed commandant, later a member of Mandalore planetary headquarters, was head to several tank divisions. Fenns mother was a diplomatic attache of Republic on the planet, a position that of glorified messenger, but relevant enough for her name be widely recognized. They both decided that if Fenn was to reach a higher military rank in Republics army, her family could open far more doors than his. That is why until recently Fenn had gone by the name of Drayson.

They lived in Keldabe, in one of highest class apartments. Parents were rarely home, Fenn quickly got used to being lonely, he found out that his own company suited him the best. At young age he was already unresponsive to any interactions with others. This troubled Fenns mother, after she had a rough talk with her husband, their son started regularly visit kids from their surroundings. This resulted in Fenn making his first and only friend, Morsi. The two were never really close, not even as they came of age. They were sent to different schools, the only time they spent together was when Fenns mother had some time to spend with his son and even then she rarely stayed around when they reached Morsis apartment. So, the two boys never talked about anything important, never shared their views on women nor political situation. The only thing they were doing was playing pazaak, no rules but one: if you get caught cheating you instantly loose. Playing unfair was the only way they would win with each other, Morsi turned out to be as intelligent as Fenn. Most of times Morsi was playing passively, waiting for his opponent to cheat and win by catching him, which often left Fenns thoughts circling around new tricks he could use. Time spent with Morsi was the only time Fenn smiled.

They both started attending the Royal Academy when they turned seventeen. Morsi was to become a doctor of medicine, Fenn encouraged by his parents started his military education. They were still meeting each other more often now that they had some freedom. After three years in Academy Morsi introduced Fenn to Vhi, a girl he met the first day at class and apparently now his fiancee. Fenn didn't know about their relationship, how could he, they never talked about improtant stuff. Vhi was really pretty, but in Fenns mind unworthy of Morsi. She wasn't stupid per se, everything she said or did was unfortunately and Morsi didn't seem to notice. And from Fenns experience he had to cheat to win this round.

It took almost a year, but patience in anger was Fenns favorite state. He finally found a suitable candidate, amassed right amount of credits. The plan was simple, to deliver another man into Vhis life, a one that could outmatch Morsi in everything he was and had. The man approached Vhi when Morsi had to focus at his exams, when he wasn't paying enough attention to her. It turned out that task wasn't difficult at all, Vhi was angry, Morsi busy, Fenn planned it just right. The acquaintance turned into friendship and friendship turned into an affair, the whole thing took only fifteen rotations. Vhi decided to tun away with the man, Fenn was victorious. He was right from the start, Morsi deserved better then this. Victory has to be ultimate though and that is what it was going to be. Fenn bought tickets for a flight from Keldabe Teminal, delivered them to his accomplice and then informed Morsi about what he have "discovered". Morsi took the bait of course and went to the Spaceport behind them.

This was one of the most grim days in Mandalores history, but for Fenn it was the worst day of his life. That day SBZ and its band of psychos spread carnage throughout whole Keldabe Starport and stroke fear into the heart of Republics citizens. That day was the day Fenn lost a friend to blaster fire. This day part of him died.[beebox3=99%]

[/beebox3]Fenn left everything behind, what money he had left he spent on a flight offworld. He decided to get out of Mandalore but not far enough to not be able to come back. Taris was the destination, Fenn knew his mother had friends there but he wasn't aware what kind of people they were. Upon arriving he was greeted with a punch to the stomach and rifle butt strike to the temple. Gangsters, undercity scum, those were his mothers contacts and Rune was the biggest of them all. Calamarians were known for their honor, but that one had none. Nobody ever suspected a member of this race to be as ruthless as this particular specimen and it was Runes greatest advantage. He struck suddenly and swiftly, swept the opposition either making them his subjects or bringing them down to the floor level and bashing their head over and over until there was nothing else they could be recognized with. And now Rune was holding Fenn in custody and had some ideas what to do with him. He decided that a son of famous politician Drayson would be a funny and fine addition to his entourage. It didn't happen without some torture and mind bending but finally Fenn had to agree to Runes terms. He was about to become Calamarians clipper.

Rune employed few bounty hunters, Mandalorian and not, and made sure Fenn was taught true way of his people. Fenn suspected Rune could be tied to Death Watch as some of the teachings were soaked with some of their beliefs it couldn't go without him noticing. After a while he started to see truth in those teachings, he began to follow Mando rules but he vowed to himself never to turn to extremism. He grew fond of hi teachers and they treated him better with every day. The other thing was with Runes gang members, Fenn avoided any interaction with them or their boss anytime he could and it seamed they were happy to keep it that way.

After several months he began to be sent on missions, killing people for Rune but was still accompanied by some of his teachers. Rune didn't want to loose his investment so quickly. One time, when things were getting hot, one of the bounty hunters lost his nerve and abandoned Fenn, flying away with a getaway speeder. Fenn somehow managed to escape, upon reaching Runes HQ, discovered he was presumed dead. The man that fled went back and informed Rune about Fenns untimely demise and wanted to get paid for all his work since the target was eliminated. Fenn came back just in time to shoot burn his face off with his wrist-mounted flamethrower and stabbing his repeatedly in the chest. Rune and Mandalorian teachers were very satisfied, the victim... Not so much.

The gangster decided it was time for Fenns last trial, he sent an encrypted holomessage Fenns mother stating that he was able to locate him and is willing to get him back home. The woman came as quick as she could and came to Runes HQ. Fenn almost didn't recognize her when he stepped in, one year passed and her face looked like it was fifteen, sensors in his helmet could see every white strand in her hair. She couldn't possible know he was present in the room, he was wearing his mandalorian armor, all his weapons ready, this wasn't a man mother knew. In fact for a second Fenn asked himself if she did ever really loved him, but answer was clear. It was her duty to the society to be a good mother to him, raise him well, make him a proud Mandalorian and she failed to do that. Rune gave the order, Fenn looked in the eyes of Calamarian, seeking anything that could mean he didn't have to do what he was told to. He didn't find it. He faced his mother and without hesitation shot her in the head. He felt powerful, if he could disregard those closest to him, he could do anything, be anyone, there were no boundaries for him. Now there is one more thing left to do and his transformation to real mandalorian would be complete. And as the fury covered his heart he knew where to vent this anger. Rune didn't stand a chance, his body shred by seven bolts. From now on nobody will him what to do, he was his own man now. At this moment Fenn had whole gang on his head, he was unsure if he could take them on but fortunately he didn't have to, mandalorian teachers came to his help.

When all bodies took their rightful place at the floor, Fenn decided it was time to go back home under his fathers name.[beebox3=99%]

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[Padmé]

Perhaps it's my computer screen (at work), but your font is uber tiny >.< The font colour/type combination really makes it difficult on the eyes. Well, the lack of spacing too. :/ Sorry, really not trying to sound prissy.

 

[Bellerophon]

Alright, ill tryto tweak it a bit, but here the font is fine.

 

[Bellerophon]

How is it now @Padmé

 

[Padmé]

How is it now @Padmé

Good.
Thank you ( :

 

[Kori Buor]

@Bellerophon Hey, so just taking a quick look over the profile I noticed a few things I wanted to bring up.

So you mention that your character was raised by nannies; that seems a little odd as most Mandalorians value family and take the raising of their offspring very seriously. I can understand having private trainers to teach him skills and arts that his parents might not be specialized in, but the whole "parents never around" is pretty a-typical for Mandos. At the very least I'd suggest working a way into the profile that describes why his parents wouldn't have raised him as a traditional Mandalorian yet still tell him he has a bright future, seems kinda paradoxical as I'd think his parents would have been the ones to push him and encourage him while raising him.

The second thing was that IC very few people know that Prudii and the Death Watch were behind the spaceport attack; it wasn't something that ever became public knowledge because as I recall it was supposed to look like a false flag operation, that way the people of Mandalore wouldn't want to stay with the Republic because they couldn't protect them from the Sith and the SBZ (whom the Mandos were supposed to be armored as), and combined with a double agent character to put more blame on the Republic. Though, @Prudence can clarify that for me.

Lastly, I have a question about him killing his mother. As you have it written it seems like he shoots his mother, reluctantly, then turns the gun on his boss and his thugs immediately afterwards. If that's the case why did he wait to kill his mother and not just kill the crime boss from the start?

 

[Prudence]

@Bellerophon Hey, so just taking a quick look over the profile I noticed a few things I wanted to bring up.

So you mention that your character was raised by nannies; that seems a little odd as most Mandalorians value family and take the raising of their offspring very seriously. I can understand having private trainers to teach him skills and arts that his parents might not be specialized in, but the whole "parents never around" is pretty a-typical for Mandos. At the very least I'd suggest working a way into the profile that describes why his parents wouldn't have raised him as a traditional Mandalorian yet still tell him he has a bright future, seems kinda paradoxical as I'd think his parents would have been the ones to push him and encourage him while raising him.

The second thing was that IC very few people know that Prudii and the Death Watch were behind the spaceport attack; it wasn't something that ever became public knowledge because as I recall it was supposed to look like a false flag operation, that way the people of Mandalore wouldn't want to stay with the Republic because they couldn't protect them from the Sith and the SBZ (whom the Mandos were supposed to be armored as), and combined with a double agent character to put more blame on the Republic. Though, @Prudence can clarify that for me.

Lastly, I have a question about him killing his mother. As you have it written it seems like he shoots his mother, reluctantly, then turns the gun on his boss and his thugs immediately afterwards. If that's the case why did he wait to kill his mother and not just kill the crime boss from the start?

Indeed, no one ever knew Prudii was behind the spaceport attack.

 

[Bellerophon]

Allright, ill be changing to SBZ attack, that way i have a motive to hate Sith i guess. Ill also expand on upbringing. BTW my parents are M.D. doctors and they were constantly working and they still told me bullshit about future so i just took it from there.
The thing about killing his mother is that, I meant that he didn't really care much about her, she would die anyway if there was a firefight or he refused to kill her and died becouse of this, the thing he was angry about was beeing told what to do, which stroke him only after he had done the deed.

 

[Kori Buor]

Perhaps you could expand upon that in the write up then, as it stands now it doesn't quite come across that way to me. I think it would really help if you added in how that moment ends up shaping him and his personality.

 

[Bellerophon]

@Kori Buor hey, took me long enough but made the adjustments, scrapped whole nannies thing, felt its not needed at all. Also improved the mother killing thing

 

[Arcangel]

@Bellerophon I have one minor stipulation. It says that he is the son of an ex-senator. I'm assuming that means his mother or father was the Senator of Mandalore at one point. I would request you remove them having been a Senator, and with that this should be good for approval.

 

[Bellerophon]

DOne, i dont know where this senator came from, swapped it to politician, hope its good to go now :)

 

[Kori Buor]

Looks good to me.

 

[Bellerophon]

Should I apply once more? @Kori Buor @Arclight

 

[Kori Buor]

No, we'll just add you to the roster.