Ferrus Omegon

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FerrusOmegon

AGE

► 30
SPECIES
► Human
HEIGHT
► 6'5"
WEIGHT
► 210Lbs
EYE COLOR
► SteelBlue
HAIR COLOR
► Black
HOMEWORLD
► Bastion
GENDER
► Male
FACTION
► Jedi
RANK
► Knight
FORCE SENSITIVITY
► Yes and Trained
Appearance
With his cybernetics covering most of the left side of his body, Ferrus is probably not the easiest to look upon but some would say his eyes could tell stories if they could speak. He has some tattoos scattered across his body along with scars of various length and sizes. One scar in particular is the small nick on his lip that has been there since his childhood. The cybernetics standout the most due to how much is replaced. His left arm and left leg have completely replaced and on his torso there are some cybernetics strewn up his torso covering certain areas. His face has also received some damage with the most notable thing being the lower left-hand part of his jaw has been replaced as well.

Biography

Born on Bastion, to a family of blacksmiths, Ferrus, as a child, once believed in becoming great. Throughout his youth, He would help his father at his smith shop and soon became quite good as a helping hand. One day, He decided that it was time for him to run the forge even at his young age but there was a malfunction as he began to work causing and explosion that nearly kiled him. With most of the left side of his body severely burnt, the local doctors amputated his arm and leg while replacing his damaged vital organs. His family though relieved that he was alive never recovered fully from the shop accident. His mother barely ever smiled while his father became a drunkard as time went on. After a month tempers flaired one day as Ferrus' father began to beat his wife, Ferrus intervened. In a rage, Ferrus crippled both of his father's arms by breaking them with his bare hands. Shocked by what he had done, Ferrus ran off far from his town. On the run, Ferrus was able to make it off planet easily despite how young he looked. He jumped from planet to planet doing odd jobs to get by. Somehow he ended up on Dantooine, the Jedi srronghold. He was quickly sensed by one of the many Jedi on this planet and was recruited into the ranks as an initiate.

When he first started his training, Ferrus' rage quickly surfaced while he was training. His master knew how to calm him by allowing him to practice his forging. As his training continued his skills in the force, though limited by his cybernetics, and his skill in blacksmithing both began to rise with each passing day. His anger would often flair up, if tensions began to run high but he was meditating if things were to much for him. When it was his time to travel to Ilum and find his kyber crystal, he obeyed his masters orders. On Ilum as he traversed the caves two silver crystals called out him and when he approached them, they flew into his hands with great speed. Once he got back to Dantooine, Ferrus quickly forged a saber from one of his crystals and Force-Forged the other one into a warhammer, bearing a similar resemblance to his family's heirloom.

Now a newly christened knight of the Order, Ferrus traveled back to bastion to show his morher what he had become. As he entered his home town, he quickly saw the remains of his old house. Apparently after he left his mother committed suicide the following day, leaving a note behind saying she couldn't live on like this. Replacing his rage with a cold and empty stare, he left the town as quickly as he left all those years ago. Ferrus traveled back to Ilum in hopes of extinguishing the rage that burned inside him. As he walked the frozen landscape, he was able to quell his rage but for some reason it was always returning burning hotter each time. It finally stopped when Ferrus came to terms with his choices throughout his life and it was when his rage was replaced with an iron resolve. Ferrus traveled back to Dantooine to show the masters that he had defeated the rage and when he was approved, he took off into the stars in search of a destiny or a calling for himself.

Attributes
Ferrus is often stoic and cold when one first meets him. Though a simpleton could discover the rage burning inside him. With his rage comes his obsession with becoming a great warrior that can only be suppressed by meditation. When out of combat, Ferrus often keeps to himself keeping away from large crowds if he can help it. When in combat, he often prioritizes going after the leader often trying to blow past the insignificant opponents as he goes for the main target. This often leads to him charging into a horde blinded by a false glory.

Attributes
Strength - 6/10
Stanima - 8/10
Dexterity - 7/10
Constitution - 5/10
Intelligence - 6/10


Skills
Fluent in Form I, III, and V.
As only started Training in Form VII.
Can pilot basic starships adequately.
Can enter Basic forms of Healing Trances.
Fluent in some Minor Telekinetic Force Abilities.
Can perform basic repairs to his cybernetic limps.

Gear
Derrus wears medium Jedi Modular Armor that has been modded aesthetically to fit his cold demeanour.
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He only carries his warhammer, which is strapped to his back, and his silver bladed lightsaber, which his on his hip at all times.
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Valen Pelora

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Hey @210yeti! I have a few comments.
  • Weapons: You can certainly have a Force forged War hammer. However, I don't think the description of shattering Mandalorian armor would be accurate or permissible.
  • Armor: I am going to need some clarification on what "scatteeed armor plating" is. Also, I would suggest just listing the Jedi Modular Armor (light or medium) and indicating that it has been aesthetically modified.
  • Biography: I don't have too many issues here. There is no Jedi temple on Bastion but I guess it could have been the closest temple. Overall, the history is vague enough that is doesn't run afoul of anything. The only question I really have is how he ended up joining the Jedi Army from the Jedi Order.
  • Personality: This section is not required but is highly encouraged. I do not get a flavor of his personality from the other information included in the profile.
  • Overall Impression: Taking a holistic view of the profile the character seems to be great at a lot of things. There are no real weakness and he seems pretty 'special.' We encourage members to gain their notarization and specials qualities through IC development. The character shouldn't be great at everything and should have real definable weaknesses, failures, and issues.
 

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Hey @210yeti! I have a few comments.
  • Weapons: You can certainly have a Force forged War hammer. However, I don't think the description of shattering Mandalorian armor would be accurate or permissible.
  • Armor: I am going to need some clarification on what "scatteeed armor plating" is. Also, I would suggest just listing the Jedi Modular Armor (light or medium) and indicating that it has been aesthetically modified.
  • Biography: I don't have too many issues here. There is no Jedi temple on Bastion but I guess it could have been the closest temple. Overall, the history is vague enough that is doesn't run afoul of anything. The only question I really have is how he ended up joining the Jedi Army from the Jedi Order.
  • Personality: This section is not required but is highly encouraged. I do not get a flavor of his personality from the other information included in the profile.
  • Overall Impression: Taking a holistic view of the profile the character seems to be great at a lot of things. There are no real weakness and he seems pretty 'special.' We encourage members to gain their notarization and specials qualities through IC development. The character shouldn't be great at everything and should have real definable weaknesses, failures, and issues.

Appreciate the feedback i completely for got about his personality. Ill try to make the necessary changes today
 

Valen Pelora

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Made some big changes to the character.
Hope everything is good @Valen Pelora

Okie doke, so I have had a chance to read over everything and while the changes address most of what I initially had concerns about there is now one big issue that was not there before.
  • Rage: Killing his father in a fit of rage (even though he was defending his mother) would be a big problem for acceptance into the Order. That kind of act clings to someone in the Force. It would be a very troubling to any Jedi who came in contact with him. We have tried to stay consistence on this issue. Yes the Order/Army is more lax than what people traditional think of when thinking Jedi. However, cold-blooded murder and rage killings are still a no-no. If you couple that with that he has been a Jedi for a seriously long time, is 30, and still has rage issues, that is concerning. It's unlikely the Jedi would have let him go on that long if he is still having anger/rage fueled outbursts. Jedi are not anti-emotion but those emotions are typically directly linked to the Darkside.
With that said, I think the change should be easy. Take out totally murdering his dad (maybe just injuring him defending his mom) and have him come to terms with his anger/rage as his training progresses. He can still be ferocious in combat.
 

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@Valen Pelora addressed the whole murdered father bit and quelled the rage in the ending part of the biography. Hope its all good now
 
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