Gabriel Djibril

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NAME: Gabriel Djibril
FACTION: Republic, ex. Jedi (pending)
RANK: Senator of Obroa-skai (pending), ex. Jedi Padawan (pending)
SPECIES: Shi'ido
AGE: 135
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: Djibril's actual height is unknown but the humanoid form he generally takes is 5' 10
WEIGHT: N/A
EYES: Djibril's actual eye color is unknown but the humanoid form he generally takes is light blue
HAIR: Djibril's actual hair color is unknown but the humanoid form he generally takes is dark blue.
SKIN: Djibril has pale skin when in his humanoid form he generally takes.
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: N/A
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes

(Note: The section in blue is in consideration of his humanoid form)
STRENGTH: Djibril has slightly above average human strength.
DEXTERITY: Djibril has average human dexterity.
CONSTITUTION: Overall, Djibril has normal health but is a bit suceptible to colds and flus.
INTELLIGENCE: Djibril has above average intelligence.
WISDOM: Over a hundred years old, Djibril is above average in terms of wisdom.
CHARISMA: Djibril can be seen as a charming young man and has a way to intice some women, generally with the aid of his Shi'ido abilities to influence feelings.

FORCE POWERS:
-Telekinesis
-Force Concealment
-Drain Knowledge
-Drain Life

SKILLS:
-Political insight
-Shi'ido Abilities
*Telepathy
*Shapeshift ("Skinshifting")
*False impression projection (sight and smell mimicry through the use of telepathy)

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
As Djibril focused more on Force manipulation skills rather than lightsaber combat, due to training during a time of peace, Djibril only knows Form I: Shii-Cho, the Way of the Sarlaac. He can preform telekinetic lightsaber combat to a degree but without form.

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Djibril trained during a time of peace. As such, he found lightsaber combat of little use, thus he barely honed his skills with a lightsaber. However, he instead focused on Force techniques. Due to being a Shi'ido, he is able to shapeshift and use telepathy to a degree.

GEAR:
In his humanoid form, Djibril wears a Shadow Cloak made of armorweave. He generally wears white armorweave gloves. Like many of his species, he is able to store items in his body. In Djibril's case, he stores a communicator, a blaster, and four lightsabers

SHIP:
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Djibril generally uses the Harold-class Republic diplomatic barge Archangel.

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Djibril personally owns a Zweihänder-class blockade runner called Godspeed but rarely uses it since he generally uses the Archangel.

PETS:
No

PERSONALITY:
Djibril was originally a curious fellow who joined the Jedi Order at age 34 (relatively young in the eyes of Shi'ido). He was eager to listen and learn, but was a bit of a pacifist. He preferred to hone his skills in the Force rather than learn combat styles. He was always polite and courtesious to those around him, regardless of rank.
As a Jedi Padawan, Djibril dwelled into a Force power known as Force Travel, a form of teleportation that heavily corrupted the user in the dark side of the Force. It was evident in his behavior. Djibril became more violent and rude. He began to look down on his colleagues, where he had once shown respect and kindness.
However, after his banishment from the Jedi Order and return from his self-exile, he seemed to act like his normal self. However, hidden on the masks of politeness and respect stood a persona of deception and ambission. He became determined to fix what he called 'mistakes' of the Republic, willing to take almost any means necessary.

BIOGRAPHY:
Djibril was born on the planet Lao-mon. For thirty-four years, Djibril was the typical Shi'ido but strange things began to happen near him. Things would occassionally fall. He'd know something he hadn't learned. When a Jedi recruiter came to the planet, it was discovered that all those phenomena had been caused by Djibril, who turned out to be Force sensitive.
Djibril was recruited into the Jedi Order and became the apprentice of the very same Jedi that had found him on Lao-mon. He trained under her for three years. To his teacher's dismay, Djibril showed little interest in lightsaber combat and instead focused on honing his skills with the Force; this would prevent him from leveling up to the rank of Jedi Knight. A 'model citizen', Djibril generally joined diplomactic missions issued by the Republic, noticing he had a way with politics.
Despite the progress he had made during those years, and the subsequential two years later, Djibril made a fatal mistake that cost him his membership in the Jedi Order. Djibril had dipped his interest into Force Travel. He failed to successfully teleport but the effects came into being regardless. The dark side had began to corrupt the Shi'ido. Despite the warnings from his teacher, Djibril continued using Force Travel. When the changes in Djibril's personality became to evident to ignore, the Grand Master banished Djibril from the Jedi Order. The Shi'ido left without saying good-bye, even to his long-time teacher and comrade.
A few months following his banishment from the Jedi Order, Djibril disappeared for years. Nothing concrete was ever found into what Djibril had been doing. Some say he had joined a cult of dark jedi. Some say he returned home to Lao-mon and built a life for himself.
Regardless of what Djibril had been doing, he made a sudden return during the Alsakan Crisis. When the Alsakans attacked Obroa-skai, Djibril arrived and crippled the command ship of the Alsakan fleet. The loss of the command ship lost the battle for the Alsakan since disarray and confusion consumed the Alsakan fleet, allowing for the Republic forces to sweep in and take down the fleet. Djibril was hailed as a hero. When the Alsakan Crisis ended, Djibril strangely ran for the position of Senator for Obroa-skai. Djibril won with an overwelming majority.
Djibril kept his position as Obroa-skai Senator and a member of the Representative Council of Obroa-skai for twenty years. When the First Hutt War broke out, Djibril worked hard to keep Obroa-skai neutral through the majority of it.
Near the end of the First Hutt War, Djibril secretly met with Sirberius the Hutt, an embassy of the Hutt Empire. Djibril made a pact with the Hutts, ensuring the survival of Obroa-skai. Djibril persuaded the Council to secede from the Republic.
Publically announcing the secession during a Senate meeting that coincided with the assassination attempt on the Supreme Chancellor, Obroa-skai left the Republic. Assassins tried to kill Djibril a few times, but Djibril tracked down the person behind the conspiracies and had him killed: Takka the Hutt.
With the end of the First Hutt War, Djibril was annoited as the Marquis of Obroa-skai, a term Djibril accepted in order to prevent Hutt plundering of Obroa-skai. Djibril's final gift to the Hutt war effort was giving the Bogan a copy of the Obroa-skai archives.
KILLS:
N/A

DUELING RING MATCHES:
N/A

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:
N/A

ROLE-PLAYS:
Senate committee meetings and the news
Investigating Missing Diplomats
Meet with the Ambassador
The Hearing on the Battle of Ando PrimeThe Will of the People
 
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I highly doubt the use of Force Travel will be allowed for an X-Knight.

"This power caused the user to be corrupted by the dark side, as it broke the normal rules of the galaxy by ripping the Force asunder."
^
This and the fact that it is teleporting... Why do I always miss when this stuff comes out?
 
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I got to support Jerek on this
 

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..Do you have a Jedi Knight already? Otherwise you can't have an ex-Knight.
 

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..Do you have a Jedi Knight already? Otherwise you can't have an ex-Knight.

I only have a Padawan. I will change it.

In regards to the Force Travel, considering how much you complain all the time, I'm a not so inclined as to take your advice, Jerek. However, if more people continue to voice your opinion, I'll go check with the admins to see if it's viable or not.

EDIT: "Knight" has been altered to "Padawan". I believe I switched them all but if someone notices one I failed to change, by all means let me know.
 
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I got to support Jerek on this

This good enough?

Edit: Also now I'm completely sure you cannot utilize Force Travel seeing as you are now an ex-Padawan.

Never seen a Padawan ripthe Force asunder while teleporting.
 
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This good enough?

Edit: Also now I'm completely sure you cannot utilize Force Travel seeing as you are now an ex-Padawan.

Never seen a Padawan ripthe Force asunder while teleporting.

Except he's had more than a hundred years to hone his abilities outside a Force faction. Also, when it comes to abilities and powers, I generally prefer to have it coming from more than one person (unless it's from an admin). Since I'm not counting your comment due to reason I will not state as to not add fuel to the fire, there's only been one to comment on Force Travel so far.
 

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Yeah your character is still a Padawan and by no means are you able to self-learn or self-improve Force powers anyway so... yeah I doubt people are going to agree with you on the equivalent of "tearing God a new asshole and entering it" just because I'd have reason to complain. I'm pretty liberal on what a Padawan should be able to do, but this goes over the line.

Just saying, no matter how old a Padawan is, he shouldn't be able to teleport by ripping the source of his own powers asunder. An F student for 100 years is still an F student.
 

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We all got it, i believe, lets stop the endless "Yes. No. Yes. No. Yes. No." here please and wait for more people to post
 

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Yeah your character is still a Padawan and by no means are you able to self-learn or self-improve Force powers anyway so... yeah I doubt people are going to agree with you on the equivalent of "tearing God a new asshole and entering it" just because I'd have reason to complain. I'm pretty liberal on what a Padawan should be able to do, but this goes over the line.

Just saying, no matter how old a Padawan is, he shouldn't be able to teleport by ripping the source of his own powers asunder. An F student for 100 years is still an F student.

He left as a padawan. What proof do you have that he is still at that skill level? It's not like he'd go up ranks when he's no longer apart of a group.
I'm fine with taking Force Travel out but only if it's not allowed. Considering your reputation to bad-mouth anything that doesn't exalt you, I won't consider your comments.
As for your student analogy, if a F student leaves school, does that necessarily mean he'll stay in the same level forever? Are you saying that a sixth grader who leaves school is destined to be sixth grader forever? That's not the case. True, he'll never be recognized as anything more but that doesn't mean the student's skills won't improve.
 

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Why do have you to make this personal?

You cannot be stronger than a Padawan should be unless you have permission which you obviously don't. That is why I'm saying you have absolutely no chance of knowing such a powerful move. Stop thinking I'm saying this just because "I complain a lot," or "bad-mouth anything that doesn't exalt to you." I'm saying this because I know what I'm talking about.

Just because you are really old does not mean you have the permission to be more powerful than what a rank (albeit former) should have.
 

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For once, I agree with Jerek. It's a pretty ridiculous power to have for someone whom left the Order as a Padawan, regardless of time passed since then. I don't think I've ever seen that power used or even had by any of the various Master-level characters I've come across in my time here either.

I'd get rid of it.
 

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Why do have you to make this personal?

You cannot be stronger than a Padawan should be unless you have permission which you obviously don't. That is why I'm saying you have absolutely no chance of knowing such a powerful move. Stop thinking I'm saying this just because "I complain a lot," or "bad-mouth anything that doesn't exalt to you." I'm saying this because I know what I'm talking about.

Just because you are really old does not mean you have the permission to be more powerful than what a rank (albeit former) should have.

Actually, the only thing I've been told to remove is the rank of Jedi Knight. Kali said nothing of ability level.
And if you indeed know what you're talking about, then people will come flocking in to support your claim, besides just one person.
 

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For once, I agree with Jerek. It's a pretty ridiculous power to have for someone whom left the Order as a Padawan, regardless of time passed since then. I don't think I've ever seen that power used or even had by any of the various Master-level characters I've come across in my time here either.

I'd get rid of it.

:CHappy

I love it when a plan comes together like that. Now for the others who will obviously see the ridiculousness of that power.
 

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For once, I agree with Jerek. It's a pretty ridiculous power to have for someone whom left the Order as a Padawan, regardless of time passed since then. I don't think I've ever seen that power used or even had by any of the various Master-level characters I've come across in my time here either.

I'd get rid of it.

Okay, another has come flocking in. As per my standards, I will comply once two people have commented. Even with Jerek excluded, two have presented themselves. Force Travel was just something I found in the Force powers list and added it. Since Jerek's only real claim is "um, I don't think you can do that" with no real support, like usual, I disregarded his claim since his comments and claims are generally empty.
I will go edit it now.
 

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Okay, another has come flocking in. As per my standards, I will comply once two people have commented. Even with Jerek excluded, two have presented themselves. Force Travel was just something I found in the Force powers list and added it. Since Jerek's only real claim is "um, I don't think you can do that" with no real support, like usual, I disregarded his claim since his comments and claims are generally empty.
I will go edit it now.

I don't know why, but after reading this I am very angry... ._.
 
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