Galen Markov (W.I.P)

[Galen]

NAME: Galen Markov

FACTION: Jedi Order
RANK: Jedi Knight
SPECIES:Human
AGE: 19
GENDER: male
HEIGHT:
WEIGHT:
EYES:
HAIR:
SKIN:
CREDITS: 1,000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS:
FORCE SENSITIVE:


WILL USE /10 FOR STATS.
STRENGTH: 5/10
DEXTERITY: 6/10
CONSTITUTION: 3/10
INTELLIGENCE: 6/10
WISDOM: 5/10
CHARISMA: 4/10

FORCE POWERS:
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SKILLS:
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LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:


STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Pros:

Cons:

GEAR:
Lightsaber
Crystal Color:
Combat Crystal:

"Armor":
SHIP:
Name:Renegade Vision

PETS:
Does your character have any pets? If so, what are they?

PERSONALITY:
In one to two paragraphs (six sentences each), describe your characters personality. Be sure to update this section as the role-play continues.

HISTORY:
In two to three paragraphs (six sentences each), describe your characters backstory up to the point you started RPing him/her. Be sure to update this section as the role-play continues.

 

[McFisticuff]

Even if this is a work in progress, it needs at least fifty words. And you cannot start as a Jedi Knight.

 

[Lavi]

The amount of information here for our WIP policy is very insufficient. Please add more information within 24 hours of this post or I'll have to lock it.

And you cannot start as a Jedi Knight.

This is true, especially for newbies. Alongside that, lightsaber training is typically among things that newbies are also taught in an RP with a player-controlled master - I strongly recommend that you not have a lightsaber.

 

[Keanu]

Also a side original names look better imo. this reminds me too much of Galen Marek (Galen Markov) small diffrence.

albeit it might just be my own hunch that you are gonna base this waay to much off galen marek

 

[Trakon]

Markov is the name of the ODST from the We Are ODST video.

 

[Galen]

Oh wow, honestly, im sorry I did not mean to base it off anything.

A)I have never seen the "we are ODST" video.

B)I'm sorry i didn't have to time to get 50 words, i was on and off, im sorry.

I'm sorry if i did anything wrong.

 

[Brandon Rhea]

To clarify for a previous poster, that's fifty words for the history and fifty words for the personality, at a minimum, in order for the profile to be legitimate. :)

 

[Omegilla]

For the simple pleasure of stating the obvious, though Keanu seems to have beat me to it, this, is indeed, a rip off :CHappy:. You do need to work on it more my good man, I'm sure he'll turn out fine though.

 

[Brandon Rhea]

Lock, per warning from Lavi.

Feel free to create a new thread for this character once you've written out the required amount of information.