Hiroke, Zevran

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Where to begin, Where to begin, where to begin. I’m a Jedi, first of all. Well, At least I am now… I suppose starting at the beginning would clarify any confusion…. No? Well I was empire born. My Father, Alexander Hiroke, was an officer in the empire, before it was handed over to the sith at least. My mother… I don’t know, dead probably. Daddy never told me, and after awhile, I just stopped caring. I was always told that I was special, never understood why, until I got older at least. See, when I was young, I had a knack for moving things with my mind, but I never really thought anything of it. I learned later, of course, that I was force sensitive, something of an adept it seemed. Again, I’m only repeating what I was told.


It was my 7th birthday when the bad men came. They wore all black and their faces were scary. They all looked alike, with yellow eyes and mean looks on their faces. One walked up to me and took off his face! But there was another one underneath, so it’s ok I guess. He didn’t look so mean without that face, he smiled at me, and talked to me with a real soft voice. He said that I was a very special boy and that I was safe with them. I wasn’t scared, I’m brave! But… the other three men still had those mean faces on. And one was walking to me. The man who took off his face put it back on, now he looked like the rest of them. One of the other three picked me up by the shirt and yelled at me. I don’t know what he was saying, but it hurt my neck. I wanted to go down, but he wouldn’t let go, no matter how hard I yelled. So I kicked as hard as I could. I hit something, his chin or something, cuz he let me go and I hit the ground really hard. That man was mad now, he jumped at me, with his fists closed. I know he was trying to hurt me, so I pushed my hands out, and closed my eyes. I didn’t open them until I heard a really big bang. But when I could see, there was a really big hole in my wall. The angry man was laying halfway through. He wasn’t moving. The hole went into the other bedroom and…. And…. Daddy… *sniff*… I saw my dad through the hole. He… he… he looked weird. His feet weren’t on the ground, and his arms were held wide. There were four more people dressed like the people in my room. They looked through the hole at me. Then daddy looked up at me, and his eyes got really big. He started yelling really loud, and he started to cry. But he stopped when that bright red stick grew out of his chest, then his head just hung down. I yelled for him, but he didn’t look at me anymore… one of the men walked up to me slowly and put his hand on my shoulder, started to talk to me in a really soft voice. But I don’t know what he was saying cuz I got really really sleepy. When I woke up, I found you Mr. Screen. So that’s how I got here to answer your question. It’s my first night In here, I miss my dad…


I’ve grown up here my whole life… but… it says this was from 7 years ago? No, that can’t be right… it’s a video…. Of me? Yea, that has to be me, but…. Why can’t I remember this? My teachers here raised me since I was a babe, taught me how to control my powers, how to use it in different ways… this can’t be right, but I’m making a copy of this datapad and showing my master. Maybe he can let me know what was going on.
My master lied to me, and took the copy. Somehow, I knew this would happen. Something’s going on, and I need to know what it is. Now that I think about it… a lot of my friends are gone now.


It’s been three years since I’ve logged anything in here, I’ve earned my lightsaber, It was my teacher;s, but he won’t be needing it anymore. He taught me well… Too Well, and I taught him to not lie to me. The grandmaster’s of this school seem pleased, said I was ready… for what, I don’t know.
It’s been two days, and they’ve given me a Holocron. It was old, of my grandfather, performing moves and techniques, of such amazing speed. They told me to study it, and then perfect it. It’s time to study it seems.


_____________DATA CORRUPTED---------------SKIPPING TO NEXT AVAILABLE DATA_______​

I’m twenty one now, and I don’t feel right about being here. I’ve been tasked, along with several of my brothers, to go out to various systems, and to find children like us, and to bring these children back. Along with those orders, are ones to kill any and all who prove to be an obstacle against the original objective. I’ve taken dozens, killed hundreds, but, as I said, it doesn’t feel right. I think it’s time for me to leave this place.

Two years on the run, I found someone….. Different. She was a Jedi, and the same age as I. My god…. She was beautiful. We met on Sylaria. I immediately knew she was a Jedi, I could feel it. I’ve… Encountered Jedi Before… under different circumstances. I traveled with her for a bit, but found my way to the Monastery on Tython, where I found myself a master, training under a new flag. Still, my memories may always haunt me.
6 years… and I’m finally a knight. I’ve learned much, and now… I need to go. This is my last entry here. Zevran Hiroke… Signing off.




NAME: Zevran Hiroke
FACTION: New Jedi Order
RANK: Knight (OK'd with Brandon, Still Needa Talk with the Jedi GM)
SPECIES: Human
AGE: 29
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 6'1
WEIGHT: 194lbs
EYES: Light Blue
HAIR: Chestnut
SKIN: Caucasian
CREDITS: 1000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Battle scars and burns across his chest and back.
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes

FORCE POWERS:
Telekinesis
Cryokinesis
Affect Mind
It combines the principles of Force Deflection, and spear of Midnight black. The user Shrouds his hand in a layer of force energy, molding it down to a point, or an edge, turning the users hand into a temporaty blade. The smaller edge or point, the sharper it is.
Force Valor
Force Deflection
Force Speed
Push/Pull/Repulse

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
Iaido: A style learned, and passed down in the family for many centuries, it's roots seeming to begin with Kouta Hiroke.


Shinsoku (God Speed): An Iaido user will naturally develop the trait known as god speed, or Shinsoku after practicing the style for some time. Essentially the user becomes accustomed to moving at the higher speeds necessary for Iaido, thus it is easier for them to accelerate to top speed in a less amount of time. In addition the reaction time of Iaido users is higher than that of normal swordsmen because the style is essentially all about assassinations or counters. Shinsoku is also called ‘speed which the eyes cannot follow’, meaning that the movements of an Iaido technique are often difficult for normal eyes to track, but not impossible if the opponent is a high ranking opponent or has an ocular enhancements.

Basic strike: Form one of Iaido is basically the beginning draw of the sword, it is the first technique that a practioner of the style will learn and master. The principle behind it is the user will force the swords edge against the sheath, thus when it is totally unsheathed the friction is released and the resulting strike is much swifter and stronger than a normal swing. However, all Iaido techniques share a common weakness, they leave the user in a vulnerable stance following the strike, so if the blow doesn’t connect they’re in serious danger. This move increases in power as the user increases in Iaido skill, thus a master of the technique can use it with deadly efficiency.

Nibai Ryu Futan (Double dragon charge)*Requires a solid object in the off hand: An add on to the original move. Should the user miss with the form 1 strike they become quite vulnerable, this move seeks to counter that. The user will follow up with an attack using the sheath of the sword at the same speed as an Iaido strike, hopefully knocking back an opponent should the first strike miss.

Tatsumaki jiten (tornado spin) : The user will draw their sword and use the force of the draw to spin them around and get behind an opponent, then follow the spin with a cut to the back or any section of the opponent, the force being amplified by centrifugal force. This move is especially effective at dodging charges, but should the target find a way to interrupt the spin the user will be left vulnerable. If combined with the force this can generate a minor wind barrier for a second which can deflect minor projectiles.

Ryūmeisen (Dragon Howl Strike)*requires solid blade : An inverted Iaido strike (thus unstead of god speed drawing it becomes god speed sheathing). The user will rapidly sheath their sword, striking the interior with the edge of the blade creating sonic waves. These are extremely high pitched and will throw off the equilibrium in a targets mind making them be less balanced and therefore less dangerous, this is especially useful against people that have naturally higher senses or using sense increasing techniques.

Izuna shuuha (Flying rope wave) *Requires solid blade : The only long range move found in Iaido. The user will gather the force to the edge of their sword while it is still sheathed. Following this they release the strike like a faster version of the initial strike, however the chakra on the edge of the sword causes the air around the blade to part creating a vacuum. The resulting vacuum blade travels forward at the target and is capable of cutting through most substances with relative ease. It is easy to see coming due to the distortions in the air it causes as it moves, but it moves at a relatively fast pace so dodging too late could result in a serious wound.



GEAR:
Jedi Body armor w/ brown robe

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Kontan Garandou :
(Soul Void) A katana forged from a Very rare black songsteel, thus the blade is completely black. The due to it being forged of songsteel the edge is much sharper and the blade itself is far more durable, able to stand up against lightsabers.

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Among the Possessions that Zevran earned for killing his previous master, this was the most valuable.
 
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The whole profile seems a bit improbably especially with the style and all.
 
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leave kouta alone.

((looks good broski))

dude, looks like you incorporated our discussion on foce techinques. Get prepared to be flamed for your new age developments of force powers :/
 
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Isn't the family and the Iaido style 14,000 years old and has lasted that long? Is that not improbable?
 

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Stranger things have happened in the Universe, no?

And if the name and connection bothers you that much, i can change it, I was only trying to make a legacy type connection to my last Main charry
 

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Stranger things have happened in the Universe, no?

And if the name and connection bothers you that much, i can change it, I was only trying to make a legacy type connection to my last Main charry

Well, no, there hasn't been anything stranger. Then again I joined only at the beginning of this timeline so I don't know.
 
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i made a legacy, backed up with rp and everything. My old timeline character's the great grand ancestor of mitya. Misha ivanovna. ^_^ anyways.

Yes, greater things have happened.
So let's get this thread up, bro
Well, no, there hasn't been anything stranger. Then again I joined only at the beginning of this timeline so I don't know.


yes, so your argument = invalid
 

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Try putting a whole empty line between your paragraphs to break up that wall of text - as it is it's pretty hard to read without my eyes bleeding.
 

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Sorry bout that mate, better?
 

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Now I'm able to read it, it looks much better. Also, the content's good too. Welcome back!
 
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