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NAME: Iden Farlander

FACTION: Jedi Order

RANK: Jedi Padawan

SPECIES: Human

AGE: 20

GENDER: Female

HEIGHT: 5’8”

WEIGHT: 120

FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes and trained


APPEARANCE: Iden is 5’8”, weighing 120 pounds, with blonde hair, blue eyes, and a pale complexion


ATTRIBUTES:

Iden is an intelligent young woman, though in some ways when it comes to how the Galaxy works she can be a bit naive. Iden has a tendency to feel incredible guilt over mistakes or actions she makes, sometimes causing her to act foolishly in an attempt to rectify the situation or to shut down in guilt entirely. She knows that learning from your mistakes is the Jedi way, but she often struggles with this.


PERSONALITY: Iden is a determined young woman with a desire to always do the right thing. She doesn’t have a bubbly personality but neither is she as solemn as many Jedi tend to be. Sometimes Iden can get so focused on one thing that she fails to see the bigger picture in situations.



BIOGRAPHY: Iden Farlander grew up on her home planet of Corellia. After the war claimed her father’s life, Iden and her mother were forced to make their own way. The death of her father put added pressure on Iden, so she began working in a local shop to help support she and her mother, despite her young age.


When a Jedi Knight suddenly appeared in her life at age 12, 8 years ago, and offered to train her as a Jedi, Iden was shocked and excited at the opportunity. Despite the desire to accept such an offer, Iden knew she couldn’t leave her mother alone. However, her mother, seeing that her daughter could make a better life for herself and would be well taken care of, urged her daughter to take the Jedi up on his offer.


Reluctantly and with many shed tears, Iden waved goodbye to her mother and left Corellia to accompany the Jedi Knight to one of their Jedi hideouts. Though flourishing in and loving her Jedi Training, Iden has always carried an incredible sense of guilt over leaving her mother. Not a day goes by that she doesn’t think about her mother, and the thought of her mother often pushes Iden to train that much harder. She has never been back to Corellia since that day she left, but she has been in semi-regular contact with her mother over the years. She hopes to see her mother again, but the insufferable war they find themselves in never seems to offer any time for that.

Many of the Jedi Order’s rules are confusing and frustrating to Iden, but she tries her best to accept them, even if she doesn’t understand them all. She often wonders if they’re actually doing any good in this war and if it will ever end, especially since she lost one of her closest friends, a Jedi she had trained with since her beginning in the Order.


SKILLS: Iden committed much of her training to lightsaber prowess and is a fairly accomplished duelist. She is proficient with the force but still has much room for growth in her force abilities. She has always had a keen interest in using the force to heal, a skill she has attempted to master for years. She is fairly agile, and she has average strength capability when not using the force.



GEAR: Jedi Robes, light armor (http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/light-armor.91494/), a necklace her mother gave her before she left Corellia, comm link, utility belt, and two lightsabers (an orange and a blue)



ROLE-PLAYS: N/A
 
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I realize there’s probably a lot of room for improvement, so please let me know if you have any suggestions. I was a little confused with how to do everything. Thanks!
 

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We started this TL with the Jedi assumed to be extinct and in complete hiding. They only started recruiting people around 8 years ago. And even then they didn’t have any presence on Alderaan. You’ll have to tweak your character a bit so that she was found in the last 8 years and taken for training in one of the Jedi hideouts. But the rest of the character looks good!
 

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We started this TL with the Jedi assumed to be extinct and in complete hiding. They only started recruiting people around 8 years ago. And even then they didn’t have any presence on Alderaan. You’ll have to tweak your character a bit so that she was found in the last 8 years and taken for training in one of the Jedi hideouts. But the rest of the character looks good!

Thank you so much! I’ll do that! Where can I find the planets that the Jedi have hideouts?
 

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Nice character!

Can you link the armor to a write-up in the tech boards?

I'd also change the Jedi Master to a Jedi Knight since the only Jedi Masters are player characters only. A Jedi Knight can be your character's master however, so doesn't change anything too much.

Battle Meditation is a non-canon force power and would need an approved lore write-up to be approved.

I think we can call it a day for the profile

Also as an aside @Iden Farlander is your OOC account. Subaccounts @Iden Farlander l are to be used in the roleplay sections only. Be sure to follow steps 2-5 on the guide for your subaccount. I already switched the authors of the posts around.

If you need/want to rename your OOC account and subaccounts you can request changes here

If you need any questions or anything just let us know :)
 

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Nice character!

Can you link the armor to a write-up in the tech boards?

I'd also change the Jedi Master to a Jedi Knight since the only Jedi Masters are player characters only. A Jedi Knight can be your character's master however, so doesn't change anything too much.

I think we can call it a day for the profile

Also as an aside @Iden Farlander is your OOC account. Subaccounts @Iden Farlander l are to be used in the roleplay sections only. Be sure to follow steps 2-5 on the guide for your subaccount. I already switched the authors of the posts around.

If you need/want to rename your OOC account and subaccounts you can request changes here

If you need any questions or anything just let me know

Hello, and thank you! I will be sure to make the changes you mentioned.

As a question, I was wondering if I could start my character out as a Jedi Knight or if they need to start out as a Jedi Padawan?

Thanks again for the help. I appreciate it!
 

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You'll have to start as a Padawan.

But if you follow the Padawan guide stickied in the GA section and fulfill it's requirements it won't take you long to be a Jedi Knight
 

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You'll have to start as a Padawan.

But if you follow the Padawan guide stickied in the GA section and fulfill it's requirements it won't take you long to be a Jedi Knight
You'll have to start as a Padawan.

But if you follow the Padawan guide stickied in the GA section and fulfill it's requirements it won't take you long to be a Jedi Knight

Sounds good! Thanks!
 

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Are requested edits done? If so I'll take a look at the profile again.
 

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Battle Meditation is a non-canon force power and needs an approved lore-write up before it can be used.

If that's nixed I can approve this profile.
 

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This seems interesting! It reminds me of my first character's experience getting approval in terms of the process.

But I really like the work you've done!
 

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This seems interesting! It reminds me of my first character's experience getting approval in terms of the process.

But I really like the work you've done!
Thank you! I appreciate that. :)
 
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