[Indie] Listeri Dalane

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NAME: Listeri Dalane
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 5'12
WEIGHT: 182
EYES: Dull Green
HAIR: Dark Brown
SKIN: White
CREDITS: 350
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: He has long running scars across his face, which he once said "looks like a game of sabacc." He also has a 2, symmetric implants in his throat to help his breathing.
FORCE SENSITIVE: No.

STRENGTH: 7/10, He is rather athletic, but he wasn't what he used to be.
DEXTERITY: 7/10, He moves extremely fast and is very nimble, but he has had a couple of tendon tears, limiting his speed.
CONSTITUTION: 4/10, He has to rely on cybernetic implants to breathe and talk, and has strained muscles. Whats even worse, he has a severe case of sore throat. We will pray for him.
INTELLIGENCE: 8/10. He is smart, both with and books and with street-smarts. He loves learning about history, especially the Old Republic era.
WISDOM: 4/10, Despite expierence, he is brash and quick to make important descisions.
CHARISMA: 9/10, He is extremely charming, often using this skill to escape from deadly situations. The only thing tht limits him are his scars and implants, which offset some people.

FORCE POWERS:

SKILLS:
He is a skilled sharpshooter, as he was trained by a former Imperial soldier, A.K.A, his father. He became a skilled ship pilot and captain, showing both skills in dogfighting and controlling his rowdy crew.

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
He is fluent with rifles and spaceships, and always carries a decent amount of explosives with him. However, he has to deal with his physical limitations, and he has always despised pistols, which he is extremely poor at using.
GEAR:
He has one Assault/Sniper rifle he's nicknamed Turncoat, but it takes a long to time to switch between the two. He carries some grenades, and as a last resort, he'll (grudgingly) pull out a rusted and worn-out pistol.

SHIP:
He has a tricked-out XS Light Freighter, having high-quality blasters and shields. He was saving to invest in good engines and to buy a medical droid, but he had to spend to get implants so he could breath and repairs for his ship after a brutal battle.
DROIDS:


PETS:
No.

PERSONALITY:
Listeri is normally a nice and pleasant guy. He'll stick out for his friends and try to help the needy, although he wont deny a nice large sum of credits to focus on something else. He'll just do it in secret. After being raised on the chaotic Ord Mantell by only his father, he has learned to fend for himself pretty early, but this in turn led to him getting into situations he couldn't handle, due to the fact that he did this a lot when he was younger. He is a smart person, and will enjoy a philosophical conversation. However, if this was in public, he would act like it was boring him and would mess with his the person talking with him, to keep up his "rep".
He harbors an extreme hatred for Hutts, after a series of incidents in the Bothan War. He has a love with history, especially the Old Republic era, which were tales his father always told him to entertain him. He loves a good fight, but he never knows when to quit. After those series of incidents involving the Hutts, he has become extremely angry and irritable lately, as he'll just snap at random people.

BIOGRAPHY:
Listeri Dalane was born upon the chaotic planet of Ord Mantell. His father, a former Imperial trooper, fell in love with a Corellian rebel he was supposed to kill, causing him to end up on the Empire's hit list. They attacked quickly, nearly killing them both. They fled to Ord Mantell, but, as they took separate ships, they destroyed the freighter that the Corellian was on. His father, Johai, raised him alone, but they were extremely poor. Johai taught him basic combat skills, putting an emphasis on rifles. He did better than other children, though a couple of children could beat him. One day, a bomb exploded in the village, Raytellia, where they lived, which destroyed their homes. In this time of sadness, Johai told him stories of the area around him, stretching all the way back to the Old Republic. Listeri was enthralled by these stories, as he gained a fascination with the tales of massive space battles and cunning smugglers. As he grew up, his father became ill, and while he recovered, he was extremely weakened. Johai eventually died from a fever. Listeri, seeing this as a sign, left Ord Mantell, and flew to the Hutt worlds. He did jobs for a small-time crime lord named Kiron, assassinating other gangsters and shipping supplies. After he gained enough clout with Kiron, was given a XS Light Freighter, and was to ship blasters, food and spices to his warriors in the Bothan worlds. He gathered up a decent amount of credits, and was making deals with some Kiron's fellow workers to create a freighter squadron to protect Kiron's supplies. But one day, he stayed around a little a bit after delivering the supplies. He witnessed Kiron's soldiers massacre a village and decimate a fleeing spaceship. Horrified, he left the area, and stayed on Tatooine for a while. But one day, after delivering a small shipment of spices, was intercepted by bounty hunters. His ship was decimated in a hellish wave of fire and lasers. As the bounty hunters boarded his ruined ship, he hid the unstable engineering room. A pipe ruptured, burning and scarring him. His lungs were heavily damaged from the explosion and the toxic chemicals he breathed in. Ironically, the bounty hunters saved him, but brought him back to Kiron. He threatened to destroy him and his ship if he didn't work for him. Even worse, he had to use most of his credits to pay for cybernetic implants to keep him alive and for ship repairs. Now, he seeks for a way to betray Kiron, and to be free once more...
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Listeri seems very.. believable. Something actually more rare than you might think. You actually kept me hooked throughout the entire bio too, that doesn't happen very often. Lol

Nice character, man. I like him!
 

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Actually, no I think that you did a really good job with him. The only thing I can see that might be an issue is that you say that his XS is "tricked out" with improved blasters and shields. I'm not an expert about what kind of tech needs write ups or not, but if the armaments are more than typical stock parts I think you need to post its specifications in this board, and wait for pending approval.

But like I said I'm not expert on that kind of thing so it may be worth asking someone else if it would be necessary. /shrug
 

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"Ticked out." :stupid:
I feel pretty stupid for misspelling that. I looked at the page, but its just slightly improved blasters and shields, nothing that hasn't been created.
 
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