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@Internecion
Mate, if you want, I'd be willing to help with the formatting and the actual character, so it's more compelling, more structured and far less OP, plus I'd make your sheet look berterferl.
but my first piece of advice is this, a character's strengths are far more impacting and effective, and just cooler, when they don't actually have that many. Andromeda is a great combatant and really, really strong, apart from that, she's shit, but that's what makes her cool. It's fun writing her screwing up, getting humiliated and being terrible at anything related to the Force. Not to mention, while her cybernetics make her much stronger and more durable, they massively degrade her strength in the Force aswell as her physical health, and have to be restructured every few years, which is a painful and debilitating process.
That's an example of a compelling character with only one or two major strengths. When you bombard a character sheet with powers, skills, weapons and tech, you do a serious disservice to the actual character and areas which are important, like story and personality.
Mate, if you want, I'd be willing to help with the formatting and the actual character, so it's more compelling, more structured and far less OP, plus I'd make your sheet look berterferl.
but my first piece of advice is this, a character's strengths are far more impacting and effective, and just cooler, when they don't actually have that many. Andromeda is a great combatant and really, really strong, apart from that, she's shit, but that's what makes her cool. It's fun writing her screwing up, getting humiliated and being terrible at anything related to the Force. Not to mention, while her cybernetics make her much stronger and more durable, they massively degrade her strength in the Force aswell as her physical health, and have to be restructured every few years, which is a painful and debilitating process.
That's an example of a compelling character with only one or two major strengths. When you bombard a character sheet with powers, skills, weapons and tech, you do a serious disservice to the actual character and areas which are important, like story and personality.